Ecstasy in Innocence

I like the thought of the mirrors. It'd be like watching your own porn movie, live. in a way, lol. Failing that, 'Basic Instinct' comes to mind. You could be Sharon Stone & I, Michael Douglas, lol. ;-)

Well I love that you decided to come and look in my mirror. There is always a porn movie playing there, better than porn actually. My mind is a really dirty place always just waiting to play things out live. Sharon Stone and Michael Douglas definitely had some chemistry going on. And there is no doubt she could get whatever she wanted. Sometimes you assume who the innocent one really is, but often that's not the correct assumption. I certainly know all the things my 'innocent' mind was thinking and it was perhaps the farthest from innocent you can get. Thanks for visiting me and sharing your thoughts Billy. I really appreciate it.

Well, knowing how I am, I doubt Sharon Stone would have made it past first base with me! I would most likely have run a mile, confronted with someone as dominant as her. I would probably have suggested tucking her in bed, fetching her a hot cup of cocoa & reading some bedtime poetry, whilst dressed in my favourite stripy blue pajamas, honest! ;-)

I knew you would say something like that. :p I love the stripy blue pajamas though, that's so cute. I like cocoa and bedtime poetry. Letting your sweet side show. :p

Such vivid imagery painted with the perfect metaphors. I can see that it is true that women write the best erotica and you Ms X are exceptional but far from innocent.

~NE~

I love when you can see into me vividly, and understand my metaphors and also see that it isn't a metaphor at the same time; multiple meanings. Oh yes! I want to show that women can write the best erotica because there is nothing dirtier than a woman's mind. And 'exceptional', well I definitely love that NE! That just gives me all kinds of sensations. ;) Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts. I really love that.

There is no need for modern special effects or even color. I will put the reel on the super 8 (even if I never seen one lol) but I will figure it out. Because I am a seedy theater and you can sit in any row you want because every seat is divine. And if it's not being defiled then it's just not a thriller. And I love a good thriller. Especially a double feature or triple, well just camp out for the night. There will popcorn and lots of sex. Thanks so much coming to take part in this movie with me. ;)

Profound feelings is something I know well, so I often feel like I am making love to the pen. But I wonder can others feel it like I do so I love that you told me you can. ;) Oh yes! those strong contractions gripping the 'pen' tight and writing out these intense sensations in an orgasm of words that bleeds onto the page. As usual there are multiple meanings, certain things are best kept to myself though. Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts. I love that.

The first pluck of a Rose, beautiful piece gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx

You always remember when a gardener first tends to the rose regardless of the circumstances. It is one of those moments in life that you always remember vividly. It's rarely what you expected but it definitely is impactful physically and mentally. And it's always interesting how that is a starting point in so many ways. It redefines your life up until that point and what will happen from that point on. Hopefully for most it's a beautiful experience and not just something that happens to you. Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts with me Ron. I really appreciate it.

"Defiled," this is a word of the masses passed down through ages. The word can have of course a defiance, but but with willingness it can be most delicious. Tight piece Lady

It is an interesting and powerful word that can take so many forms. Deeply erotic, exciting, dirty, and even painful both physically and mentally. It can be defiance and it can represent a lack of defiance too. And like you said, with willingness it can definitely be the most delicious. In other circumstances it be other things. Still we always remember when we lost that innocence forever. And everything that came after that point. The lust, urges, and passion that just becomes a part of us in every way. From that point on the world looks different. I always adore getting a tight, you know that. Thank you.

There is a fine line between innocence and depraved. ;) But we always start with that hesitation and yet so often are desperate those for experiences. How quickly those desires turn into needs. And once the innocence is gone that is definitely forever. Defiled always leaves you wanting, sometimes it's for the innocence you lost prematurely perhaps, sometimes it's just for the physical sensation. Whatever the reason it always leaves you wanting pleasure or even pain. No matter what you always remember it and everything changes. That lust becomes part of you in every moment and everything looks different. Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts. I love that.

Vampire love is really hot.  Keep on writing.

Oh yes! nothing like biting the neck to give me the tingles. I can definitely be a biter if I get really excited. :p Vampires are so seductive and mysterious. I would love to just live forever in the night and the darkness. It would be so incredible in an old city like London or other European cities; or perhaps in the Carpathian mountains. You know how much love vampires, and the darkness and night. I would love to live in a castle too. ;) Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me Francisco. I really appreciate it.

This is a great piece that sounds like a conversational of a song. Check out Janet Jackson's THAT'S THE WAY LUV GOES. U will know what I'm talking about if don't. Great piece Kristina. Full great emotional ah release.

I will definitely be checking out the song for sure Birchel, I am intrigued. I had not really thought of it in terms of a conversational of a song, that's a cool way to look at it. You always have interesting perspectives and I love that. Definitely a lot of emotion for sure, but I am always full of emotion. Those emotions always affect the people around me for better or worse; depending on the emotion. Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts with me. I love that.

U are welcome muchly Kristina! And, I'm very glad to know that u luv this as well. 👍🌷🍑👍🌷🍑👍🍉🍇🍇👍🍉🍇🌃👁️💋🛁🚿🛳️🛌🌍🌏🌎

I am glad you found the concept appealing, these things always just come to me from all kinds of different places and memories in my chaotic mind. So it's amazing there is a concept at all I suppose. lol The flow and stylistic devices well those just kind of happen too. But I absolutely love that it's memorable and thanks so much for saying it's a great write. I always love getting your expert opinion as you know. Thanks so much for dropping in and sharing your thoughts with me Ted. I really appreciate it.

Never too soon for a young attractive thing to get her cherry busted in a two bit carny town with drunk clowns and dangerous stage hands drunk on Wild Turkey 101 and Ketamine gummies.
Grow up fast in a bloody combustible carnival atmosphere.
Life on fringe told by the princess of debauchery...
Picture tells a story that starts and never let's go.

BIG FUN MIRROR LIKE

Wow, that's quite the scene you have drawn there. Not saying it's to far off from what I was thinking in some aspects of this. :p Two bit carny towns are always interesting. Drunk clowns, well they aren't all that interesting. lol But they can be funny. And dangerous stage hands aren't all that dangerous on ketamine. But yes some things and environments can definitely make you grow up really fast. I know I did. I imagine traveling around with carnies would definitely be one of those things too. I have so often been on the fringe that it still feels strange to be back in America. For me that was a picture I had in mind so I like that it worked. Love the BIG FUN MIRROR LIKE...

I felt at home in the UK too.
A weird cross between civility and all out debauchery.
Often have thought of moving to London.
I could adopt you and you you're in on a permanent visa.
How kinked out is that?

Oh yeah, definitely some all out old world debauchery going on.
London is an amazing city. I miss it so much.

Haha, so kinked out... I can imagine.
I have all kinds of kinks.

Share the wealth of kinks
50 states, 50 ways to sin ...

50 is a cool #

Hi Kristina

Tearing the white veil and the virgin heart. Wow!! Speaks volumes.
Being stepped through and the full moon eclipse. Lots of metaphors going on
in this write. In the pic she looks kinda nervous but committed to following through.
I can relate to that. You are right in your reply to Ron. For females in my opinion
it should be beautiful and special when you lose your innocence:) I know
mine was. I truly felt loved and cherished. It was not random and with someone I was in a
relationship with for two years.
When younger he used to ride his bike by my house when we were kids. LOL
After that you can go crazy and have fun with it.
But the first time you should be held like a delicate flower:)

Great write:)
Brought back a cherished memory

I always love getting a Wow!! Adelphina. So many volumes. ;)
I can tell you really understand the references.
And you know me, I am full of all kinds of weird metaphors.
Nervous but committed to following through, that's such a great description.
Yes, I definitely agree. It's something that should be beautiful.
And it makes me so happy to hear that you had that experience. :)
What you described sounds perfect.
It definitely should be someone special where you feel loved and cherished.
Knowing each other that long and through such crucial stages in life certainly forms a bond.
'After that you can go crazy and have fun with it' lol I love that! Go crazy indeed.
Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts. I love that.

And I love that it brought back a cherished memory and that you shared it with me. X

A touch of dark and seductive and sensual all in one... amazing ink Kris :D

Dark, seductive, and sensual. If I was going to choose three words pretty sure that's the ones. ;) So glad you could feel me on this one and I am so happy when you think it's amazing ink because I always hope it is but I suppose I never really know. :p Stuff just hits me and it is what it is. I rarely ever really edit or anything like that. :p Never quite sure what aspects of all the different things I see someone else will see. Thanks so much for visiting me MV and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it.

Dear K,

The first stanza sets the scene. Morality be damned. This is a “first time” not forgotten. No Mr. Fumble Fingers with this guy. He knows what he’s about.  I enjoyed the carnival setting. It’s like a parallel universe where anything and everything is available to happen. If you’ll excuse me. I need a cigarette…😉
H🌷

Your interpretations and description is always so perfect. How you could see the setup scene. And of course the passion and determination that this will be first time not forgotten. But especially I love the parallel universe where anything and everything is available to happen. The carnival aspect certainly does feel just like that to me. You always have such incredible insight Honoria. Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts with me. I love that.

" a place beyond mortality or morality"
That says is all 😁 forever for one another. Wonderful poem my friend 🧛‍♂️

Oh yes! that's the place you are never going to come back from, that changes you forever. So that you are always seeking that pleasure for the rest of your life and beyond. I love moving past the boundaries of morality. ;) And certain those carnal urges can test your mortality and that's a really special place to be. Thanks so much for coming by to see me and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it.

Written with great intensity!
Wow!
The Vampire theme drifts through in subtle details--the mirror, the blood moon.
The ending is a great line--yes, defilement as fulfillment!
Enjoyed!

I am full of intensity my dear Mark. ;) And I love getting a Wow! Although it could have gone without the vampire theme I like the elements that lend to and create that interpretation a lot. Those subtle details that can completely take something to whole different place. And yet still allow you to go to other entirely different places. A yes, defilement is fulfillment is a great way to put it. It certainly open one up to a new world of possibilities and intense desires. ;) Thanks so much for coming by to visit me and share your thoughts. I love that.

Amen sister.

Definitely amen. ;) I can see you know exactly what I am talking about. :p Of course that does not surprise me at all because I know how passionate you are. Some things change us and you never forget them,. Thanks so much stopping by Mary and sharing your thoughts. I love that.

Well.

....and then, reading your returns in the comments...  

Somebody has earned a dripping wet, open hand spanking.

Young lady! How you talk is absolutely delicious.  

I'll say what everyone else is thinking....your words are a weapon of mass construction.

It's interesting how you stepped through that RT. I was thinking 'Well.' that doesn't sound good. lol But then I earned a dripping wet, open hand spanking so that was definitely really good. Knowing how I talk is absolutely delicious is even better still. I love that. ;) I have to say at a glance I saw weapons of... destruction. And I was like whoa, how should I take that but I really kind of liked it because it sounded so powerful. lol But I know the complexity of your messages and 'weapon of mass construction' is the best. Thank you so much for the incredible comment and compliment. I really loved it.

A carnival I wouldn't want to miss

Definitely the best rides ever at the carnival. ;) You certainly don't want to miss the show Tim. So I am so glad you showed up to share your thoughts with me. Perhaps a candy apple and play some games too. :p I love the carnival, the sites and sounds... the funhouse and the thing that spins you around really fast. lol I am thinking of all kinds of rides that really get the heart racing and spin you around. I really love it.

Ah, maybe the mirrors reflect your desires but not his, as he is a “creature of the night”.  Your fantasy / desire of having your virginity taken by one with fanged teeth. Feasting on your arterial blood as well as blood of your defiling.  You are content in no longer being burdened with a white veil, now you can carnally morph into the night with your undead phantom.    
    
Kristina’s funhouse – where virtue becomes pagan!  : )

Haha, Kristina's funhouse - where virtue becomes pagan! lol Yes, I am a really bad girl. ;p Those mirrors are going to reflect all kinds of stuff, kinky and deep stuff. To be taken by one who has moved through the night throughout the ages. Having tasted so many but never tasted me. And that's just a very different taste, one that pulls him deeper into the darkness. All the lines blur as to the unacceptable becoming acceptable. Sometimes that creature comes in unexpected forms. Sometimes it can be terrifying but also so thrilling in a way. And that's a another story altogether as to how things can happen. But it certainly removes the white veil forever. I am really glad you stopping by, I always love your insights so much.

For me, this is the line!
“You have stepped through me.
It's a place beyond mortality or morality.”
Anything is possible after arriving to that point. That’s the ultimate, isn’t it?

Oh yes! what an incredible feeling to go there. For someone to step through you giving you every sensation they have to combine with your own. That is a place beyond mortality and morality for sure. I always want to visit that place again and again. Usually I like going somewhere new when traveling but certain places you will come back too. ;) After all, you always want to come again and again right? ;) Definitely the ultimate... Thanks so much for coming by, it's always good to see a goddess. ;) I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me.

Damn I love doing it in front of mirrors.  Lol.  It's like seeing "her" from different angles without having to move around every time.  And yes, it's like being in a movie, sort of.
Gotta watch those faucet handles tho.  They hurt!  

Okay sorry.  The picture.... I kinda got off track.  

As for your write, I really like how you went with this.  Mixing so many ideas into one tight grouping.  Just remember, a vampira is at the mercy of the stake...  

Oh yes! Seeing someone from all different angles is definitely fun... ;) Even the mirrored ceiling. :p Although moving around is super fun too. And making your own movies is super fun too. Let's you really go back and see things. Those damn faucet handles definitely hurt.

Haha. Well I like taking you off the track. That picture definitely matched up with my thoughts so I am glad you felt it. ;)

You know me, I am always going all kinds of strange places. So many ideas and thoughts, and definitely a tight grouping in this one. ;) Don't worry, I am all to aware of the power of the stake. People love to stake me but I always survive. (they don't always survive though).

Thanks so much for taking the track over to see me and sharing your thoughts Styx. I love that.

Sounds like that blood sacrifice to me.

I like. Keep it flowing.

Geez, the thought of that blood sacrifice makes me so horny. :p Once the blood comes I could not think about anything else but someone breaking into that barrier and releasing the passion inside. Always wanting to be filled, needing to be filled. To be stretched in every way. And that flow will be felt so deeply inside in me and you. Oh god, the torture of living in a constant state of needs and desires.  There is a reason the Devil tempted Eve instead of Adam, he knew she could never resist. And people say guys only want sex, and I say I need sex so much more. ;)

The third and fourth stanza really deliver some powerful vivid imagery, oh but that last line just takes the cake.

Incredible work.

I always want to give you something incredible to read Wally because you deserve it. ;) I am glad you feel me, that you were able to see the vivid powerful imagery that I felt writing this. The last line definitely sums things up. Some experiences, once you have had them there is no going back. They shape so much of what is to come regardless of the circumstances surrounding how and when that happened. A lifetime of desires is ignited and burns in the heart and soul. Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts with me. I love that.