Witch

Little Miss Dangerous!  🙈

And what a wonderful song that is DaVinci. It definitely fits so well. ;)
You know the crazy and dangerous ones are always irresistible, right?
But oh so much fun... and never boring. Just read the disclaimer first.
Because definitely hard to handle. And crazy is the most honest. ;)
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Another well written piece!  Imaginative verse, yet all too real for some at some point.

There is always so much behind the words... ;)
Depending on the spell cast, could be ecstasy or pain or ...
But evil candy tastes so damn good doesn't it?
You definitely want to get to the center of that.
And once you do, you are never coming back...
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Oh yes! I love that spell and casting it on you. ;)
* maybe, innocent look * Don't I look innocent?
You so are... Don't forget to pay Charon the toll.
It all starts with the eyes... once you look in them then...
It's over. ;) You see the abyss and it looks so good.
Forever the black soul and the shadow.
Always seeking the flames in each other.

Nothing more tempting than an innocent mind. * cough *
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Yes I am Kristina! Because, those words are I'm confessing simply, because, the witch just has my heart and it's aluv for me. The witch is an ah beautiful that is just ah splendid. She the aluv and ah oneness of ah passion ah seductive over me. That's a beautiful job of writing.🌷🍑🌈💎🤭🤎🤍🍉🧅🍜🥬🛳️🌌🌃🌽🍄🚬🥦💙

I knew you cannot resist evil candy and my spell Birchel. And I love your confession, I am after hearts and aluv for me too. ;) Beauty casts a seductive spell filled with so much passion. Mix in some crazy, lots of sin, and take a tour to the far reaches of hell where anything goes. That's definitely a one way trip. Once you have experienced that there is no going back. Oh the depraved things that will be stamped in your passport will definitely prevent entry into heaven.
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U are unmistakenly ah brilliant eloquence.

You are such a sweetheart Birchel. Thank you! :)

Ah welcome u are ah muchly.👍🤍👁️🧅🍜🍑🌷🎶💎🛳️

My lust out of control
Bùrn and glow
Can't resist your evil charm
Punk maiden
Sacrifice

FIERY LIKE

Out of control lust is a must.
The flames always case a beautiful glow.
Evil charm is so irresistible. It just makes you want to do things... have to do things... ;)
Sin is so attractive after all.
Try to make the Punk maiden repent.
While on her knees... but she can't talk in that moment.
Still you are the willing sacrifice.

LOVE the FIERY LIKE
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Your avatar is kind of punk meets Marilyn Monroe ..
HOT BLONDE LIKE

Haha, so far I have gotten Marilyn Monroe and Madonna. lol
Punk all the way. :p
LOVE HOT BLONDE LIKE, that's new.

We could never seduce anyone into the darkness without this handsome wrapper. This look of mystery that draws curiosity from the laziest of kitties. Haha for some reason they love the darken toy and their willing to follow us into the darkness, such a Little Succubus  

What a handsome wrapper it is, seducing the darkness takes a special kind. Oh the look of mystery is definitely irresistible, all the kitties will be looking around to figure that out and see what it's all about. To see what's inside and how it tastes and feels. The dark toys are definitely the best for a witch. She needs the darkness and it always finds her and she so easily transforms in the Succubus taking all of the essence she needs while becoming every dark fantasy imaginable.
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You have held me spellbound sweetie lol
Great write and read
Love and light
Ron xx

You know I love having you spellbound Ron. ;)
Casting all these spells on you.
And giving you some evil candy too.
Trying to balance all the love and light.
With a lot of darkness and passion.
Because what a fantastic combination those make.
And a one way ticket to hell can definitely be heaven.
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Mis Hellfire is here to hypnotize us.  Keep on writing you sexy woman.

What could possibly hypnotize better than hellfire. ;)
Starting fires everywhere, because I love to burn.
And when passion burns hot, it has needs...
Pushing the boundaries of hell is so thrilling.
Creating new sins to try...
Feeling the Devil's pitchfork penetrate deep.
It's what keeps a sexy woman going.
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Coincidentally I just put Joss Stone singing I Put a Spell on You on my phone...xo

Well how about that, definitely in sync. ;)
That's how strong my spells are.
Perhaps I put a spell on you.
Speaking of songs...
My Mom listens to a lot of 80s music.
And you reminded me of this song...
Abracadabra - Steve Miller Band.
I really like that song so I am glad you made me think of it.
And of course Witchy Woman from the Eagles.
And Shawn James - Burn the Witch. :p
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I see you definitely have a loyal following.
Is there a KristinaX alert that goes off when you post?  I’m only joking.
I love the first line what a way to capture the attention.
“Evil candy in a deceitful wrapper ”
You definitely have her quality of seduction it’s the strength of your writes ; you lure the reader in then….take them the where you want them to be.

Very enjoyable
and imaginative
write

~NE~

Haha, I am sure I set off all kinds of alerts. lol
What they are the hell if I know. :p
Maybe warning bells.
Some candy is just so sinful.
Seduction is such a strong force.
It pulls you in like nothing else can, right?
I love that you see strength in my writes, what a wonderful compliment.
I am so happy I could lure you in and take
you where I wanted you, caught up in my spell.
I always want it to be enjoyable.
My imagination is a crazy place too.
So happy you got the alert NE. ;)
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Missed opportunity here!
The honeytrap.
Indeed woman is.
Honest critique time:  I tend to like your work. And this topic is of *great* interest to me (full disclosure:  Jesus-freak & celibate, so...):
more could be done here.
This is a fantastically rich topic--the perspective of female nature and morality, in all 3 of the major religions. And this piece doesn't explore the topic, but remains splashing on the surface, instead of diving deep into the various angles.
Consider these biblical warnings:
Ecclesiastes tells us that the "mouth of a adulterous woman is a pit and the wrath of God is upon the man who falls in"
Solomon also goes on to say he's known "1 upright man in 1000, but never an upright woman."
Also, there's that proverb about living on the roof being better than life with a contentious woman.
Also, consider:  when Eve ate the apple in the Garden, God took no action. It was only after Adam partook that God came to them in the garden, and then spoke--not to Eve, but to Adam:  "Adam, what have YOU done?"
From the biblical perspective, God holds men accountable for the sins of their women.

Hey Mark,
I am sorry you feel it was a missed opportunity.
And I am really happy you usually like my work.
I agree that generally there is more depth to my writing.
With multiple meanings... But this is how it came to me.
I suppose this was meant to be a little more 'fun' and surface by design.
Although certainly relatable in many ways to many things.
I wasn't trying to get into the aspects of religion,
although that is a subject I find quite interesting.
Morality is definitely an extensive topic with many different thoughts about it.
Certainly it's a topic that could be explored in much depth in that regard.
Although that's not really what I was trying to do here.
I really appreciate you sharing your perspective with me.
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Okay, 2 out of 3.

Consider yourself licked.

What's the 2 out of 3? (or is that something for a PM)
Maybe I am overlooking something obvious. :p
Hopefully 3 out of 3 next time. Or how many ever it will be.
Considering myself licked sounds lovely though.
Certain things always feel great. And that's one of them. ;)
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In a contest of ....anything....the best 2 out of 3 wins. If you win the first 2, a third is unnecessary, unless it's just for bragging rights.

The last 2 were home runs. You win. I'm very sure the next one will be just as successful.

You've got a handle on how it works. Poetry is a pile of words that create a pattern that takes the form of its function.

Emily Dickenson said she knew it was poetry if it blew the top of her head off. Yours does.

Hemingway said that writing was easy, you just sit at a typewriter and bleed. He wrote prose, but he gets it.

For me, poetry is when you struggle and fight and wrestle with your own inner truth until you ultimately find yourself letting go, a process that you can no longer hold back.

Wordsworth said it was the spontaneous overflow of emotional energy. It bubbles up from inside you.

Shelley saw that as a primal scream, like a moan turning to a full blown orgasm.

I like that image, a lot.

And yet, not to dispose of Shelley entirely, I see it as a capitulation. Losing your ability to hold it back. Some Wordsworth. Something ignited,  Some Emily. Something that causes a life's blood release, some Ernest. A fight you win by losing, one you give into, one you can no longer willfully hold back...a war within that you have to relinquish...you're done. You are taken out of the way. It's egoless. It writes itself. You lose control. You're licked, and there's nothing you can do but let it go. A poem appears like blood from a wound, like a spurt of humanity. You give into it because holding back is no longer possible. You're licked.

As the reader, as the experiencer of your poem, I have a complementary experience. I'm minding my own damn business and you toss out this poem like pheromones during rutting season and I am drawn into your sphere of inescapable truth and I am driven by the nature of things poetic to go at it like a lollypop with a titanium center and I lick the fuck out it. Re-experiencing your insight, your capitulation to the spiritual nature of your internal truth.

And damn. I can't help licking it all the way to the foundation. And you, having been licked by the process, now experience that second wave event of being an author who, as conduit of this little patch of heaven, gets licked over and over vicariously and in orgiastic reverberation with all those you've shared it with, over and over.

You can consider yourself licked in several ways, over and over.

Rostand, in writing Cyrano de Bergerac, says, when I write a line that sings itself, I pay myself 100 fold.

Rich, licked, enjoyed, appreciated,  heard, welcome, just plain licked.

I hope that explains my meaning somewhat. Tasty. Exquisite.  Delectable.  Not merely palatable. Preferred. Please, ma'am,  may I have some more.

Damn, Baby, if you've never looked before, you're smoking. Capiche? You catch my drift, or do you need me to keep on drifting.

Nice work X. You're on a roll.

Thank you RT. I always love your perspectives. And I love that you think they are home runs, that means a lot to me; and that you are confident in the next is such a wonderful compliment. I hope so and that sharing my emotions and feelings has value.  

...'Yours does' that's an incredible thing to hear and I know that feeling well of 'just sit and bleed'. (not with a typewriter though :p) "For me, poetry is when you struggle and fight and wrestle with your own inner truth until you ultimately find yourself letting go, a process that you can no longer hold back." That's so true. I still find it interesting how writing about certain things sends me into a tailspin. And I wonder why it still does that but psychology can be a bitch. 'a moan turning to a full blown orgasm' oh yeah, I really love that. 'it writes itself' is so true, I can definitely relate to how it must get out. How a poem appears like blood and reading the bloody words and feeling all that emotion. And if reading is an experience, then you definitely understood some of the intent and emotion written into it; feeling it. Those pheromones attracting the people that can understand.  

I love how you described things and I really appreciate you taking the time to share these things with me. It's so meaningful and powerful. Getting licked is an incredible sensation, it overpowers and leaves me out of breath and makes it harder to speak. And yes, that certainly explained your meaning very well. I am so happy you want some more.  

Haha, now I really don't what to say. I like 'Capiche' it's like a forceful command; so I want to obey. ;) I get your drift but it's so lovely when you drift so I would never ask you stop. :p This was really beautiful to read, thank you so much for taking the time to share with me.

It's L'oreal and you're worth it.

That's super sweet RT. I am blushing without the L'oreal ;)

Hi Kristina:)

Love how you described evil candy. hahahaha
Unknown inside beautiful outside.
Til you take a bite!!!
Best watch how you chew.
Tasting the unknown.

Haha, yes evil candy always seems to taste the best.
They find out all the unknown fillings later. lol
No doubt there is lots of crazy going on there.
After they are thoroughly addicted to the taste.
Then it's just too late because that spell is cast.
Once someone has a taste for the unknown. ;)
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Pure evil knows not what evil is, pure joy unchained, alive to feel all that humanity has gives. With no limits that bind, wings unfurl, sometimes black and sometimes white, and quite possibly covered in blood. Not even the devil him/herself would deny the emotions most hold dear but TO FEEL IT ALL as no mortal should one must beckon the shadows into the soul, becoming one with the night. You ignite the night with the purity of intent and bring me to my knees. Am I damned or is this heaven, I know not which nor do I care as I hold your evil to my unchained heart. Hear me now most inciteful witch, for I know what evil truly is that's hiding in the soul and you scare me not at all, for within the darkness of my heart I still have room for love and more than a little room for lust. I will see your silken whips and raise a cat o nine tails if you dare. Most humbly your servant, most arrogantly your master, most gloriously your torturer, and most honored to be your friend.

Evil is an interesting concept, it means so many different things to people. But the concept of sin, of trying to constrain yourself to these boundaries in the name of conformity is to truly limit the experience. And maybe you will find yourself still searching after death unfulfilled. Or perhaps you will find a gateway to the next level of hell where everything is felt so intensely. Where those feelings are accepted and amplified, anyone is accepted there but not all can handle the flames. It's a place that once you have visited, you will always come back perhaps looking for something you lost there. Perhaps just needing to feel everything again. And as you say perhaps no mortal should and that's why once you do there is no coming back. Heaven and Hell become confused, and Hell can be Heaven to some because they are Fallen Angels. Those Angels that wanted something different and were attracted to mortal women. And perhaps that's the gateway to Hell. And when she feeds you the apple, it's something that must be tasted again and again. The Darkness of the heart is honest, it speaks the true desires that are hidden and within that is the true lust for life. I dare... And every role is needed. A true servant can be the master, A true friend can be your torturer. When everything is confused it just makes sense to me.
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This is a masterful reply and dissertation on evil, sin and conformity. It is simply magnificent and magnificently simple by distilling the essence of two thousand years spiritual awakening into this short essay. You have indeed come into your power, the sureness of your words proves this more than just your words. And it is glorious to see how much power you have. To be bathed unscathed in the flames of hell and emerge into the light is my true desire that you have shown to me. This your power and hold over seekers of truth.  

You do have such a way with words. And I am at a loss for them at the moment to respond to yours. Your depth and insights mean so much to me. Thank you so much for sharing them.

Hey Kristina! Your poem is as tasty as a cunnilingual binge, and dredged up a dim memory of a line from Thomas Love Peacock's Victorian novel, CROCHET CASTLE.

"The force of the spell was in the drapery"

The implication being that the devil might even make a burqa work the magic of lust!

So much for modesty, and we must realize that nature wants it this way for repopulating purposes.

Well you had me at cunnilingual binge MS. ;) I really love that quote. The force of the spell so often is in the drapery. That strong attraction but to learn what's underneath is where the true treasures are. This crochet castle built on sins, pain and suffering, passion and lust. Continuing to knit it with each new experience. I wonder what the final result will be and if it can withstand the constant assaults as it gets stronger. The magic of lust is powerful enough to overcome any obstacles. And those things that attempt to prevent it only make it that much stronger. It's in our nature, there is no way to separate that. Everyday we think about it, wanting to repopulate my world with the most intense feelings...
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Hot damn, girl! I don't know much about beauty or heaven or hell, but I know all about the blackness of soul and the craziness that goes on behind fiery eyes. At its heart, love is all about submission to suffering (pick your flavour), and perhaps that's what she really seeks under that candy coating....

The intensity of this write reminded me of my own "Spider Crush", but you've done it much more masterfully than I did. One of these days I'll find more time to hone my writing skills. I really miss bleeding onto the page like that.

And finally, I'm impressed by the quality and depth of comments on this short write. I'm so glad to see people aren't just reading your work with the "little brain". 😉 Your subject matter often stimulates a certain type of thought, but it's much more than that. Well done, sister!
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I love 'Hot damn, girl!' lol Well I am so happy you made it over to my part of Hell or Heaven. It's so much better when you are here. ;) Oh yes! the craziness that goes on behind fiery eyes is something I know well too. ;p But crazy is the most fun and certainly the most unpredictable. So many flavours to choose from, and there is so much more under the candy coating. Licking is the fastest way to get there for sure.

I will definitely be looking up "Spider Crush", I love that title and I know it's going to be incredible like the rest of your writing. You are definitely the only one who thinks you need to 'hone' your writing skills. It's a mess to clean up, but bleeding onto the page is always feels good to me. ;)

Haha, yeah I love that. I always want to hear from the big brain too. ;) I definitely appreciate the quality and depth so much, like with this one, it certainly makes for some interesting interaction. I love stimulating all kinds of thought so I love that you can see much more than the surface. There usually is a lot more to it than just that. :)
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That's so true, how often things are not as they appear. And it's always so much better once you get the wrapper off. It is just in the way of the real prize after all. Each person has their own unique taste and we all learn the flavors we like. ;) That is quite the paradox isn't it? And so very true as well. perhaps candy sweet with venom. Get the both of best worlds. Both can be intoxicating after all...
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This candy'll pull out all your fillings then?!  Lol. 😈😉

Yes, and be careful not to bite down too hard because you will definitely crack a tooth Billy. Pulling out all your fillings, I have to admit that made me laugh. lol I could see doing that and it's definitely going to hurt. :p Sounds like you may have tasted this kind of candy before. :p
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Just think of all the cavities.
To fill.

As for your write, and your style, we all find our niche that we feel that we can shine the most from.  No one will ever please 100% of the readers.  Hell, there are people who think Stephen King sucks.  He's one of the best at what he does.  

You do you!   Who knows where it will lead you, or where to.  When we cater to what we are told to be like, or not be like, our creativity suffers too much. We feel stifled.
I've always been a rebellious natured person.  I may not be the best at anything, but I will be remembered for some crazy shit.  Lol.  

Writing for the sake of purely writing, is growth.  And once in awhile, we all get to be ten feet tall.  

Keep at it.  We will keep reading!

Some cavities you just want to fill. Just saying. lol

Oh yes! you cannot please everyone, but I am a pleaser so I like the idea of doing it anyway. :p Do I have a niche? :p Always seems like uncontrolled chaos to me, that's what's in my head.  

Yes! been told 'what' to be like here before, judged for my writing. :p I am not for everyone, I don't plan to change into something that I am not or write for the audience so to speak. My writing comes from a different place, the heart and soul. If I don't feel it then I seriously doubt I would ever write it.  Oh yes! I know what rebellious looks like too. And I can totally relate to being known for some crazy shit. :p and being crazy too...

Ten feet tall and still feel small. :p  

Thanks so much for the encouragement Styx... I really love that you want to keep reading! That means a lot to me.
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Dear K,

I really think I could like this witch! She has a lot of attributes I admire. I’m pretty sure we could be friends. 😉
You’ve done a great job of packing in a lot detail in a small space. That’s really impressive. The story arc is compelling because you’ve created an urgency right from the start. I’m off to find my book of spells.  Well done. H🌷

I would like to think this witch is very likeable. :p Handing out evil candy like it's Halloween. Any kind you want because you are so lovely. ;) People always tell me I pack a lot into a small package, definitely a whole lot of strange and crazy anyway. :p I love that you could really see the details and felt that urgency from the beginning. There is a lot in there and you are always so perceptive in seeing that. Casting spells is definitely fun, I can imagine all the spells you have in your book. You definitely cast a spell on everyone here. ;)  
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You must not read my poem 'Heavens to Expensive That's Why I'm Refinancing in Hell'. I'm already ready baby.

I have not read it but I will definitely be reading it soon. ;) Absolutely love the title. Heaven requires a full mortgage on the soul and there is no paying it off because you a payment every time you sin. So yeah, I refinanced in hell long ago. With each sin a new payment is made. The devil loves me, the demons all want me. Are you ready? A witch is the best lay. She will cast spells on you all day and night. She will feed you potions, her cum is addictive. Stirring the pot, she rides your broom flying high and taking you with her. This is the hell you want and need. Always coming back for more witchcraft. Casting yourself in her, that's the ingredient she needs for this spell. Your essence feeding the fire.

I like the overall seduction underneath. It's a dark write and yet knowing there's a spell, we can't help but be spellbound.
Wonderful work Kristina, you always bring a special flair to these writes.

What's more seductive than the darkness and evil. ;) People just can't resist a young witch. lol And I do love casting spells and mixing potions while getting to what's underneath. I can be very intense so I will always find out what's in there one way or another. And I always want to hold you spellbound Wally. I adore 'you always bring a special flair to these writes' I have to admit that made me feel really good, thank you! ;)