Perfecting the roars of joint salvation

Bonded as one, blended as one, total emersion of your partner. Two becomes one
Awesome Blue
Love and light
Ron xx

Your lovely, kind and considerate words bring me so much joy tonight, my dear. How beautiful it is to dream of such connectedness... I've been kind of blah lately so your upbeat and uplifting feedback makes my night.

Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me, I always look forward to them and you.

🌹-💙
B
x

This calls for French vanilla creamer and coffee....and areola donuts....

A caramel latte and tasting lips laced of 'donut' sweetness....




you definitely know how to inspire!
Mmm..
🌹 - B

You had me at A, B.

🐢-🥯-🧚🏻‍♀️

Biting your donuts gives you wings....

hahaha... yeah, exactly..

Yeah.

Exactly.

"the heat between my legs" certainly got my attention...wonderful read B

Thank you for feeling a bit of my warmth, L

I appreciate you taking the time to visit and leave your thoughts with me.

It's a pleasure
🌹B

You are roaring me my sweet lady.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

I'll definitely keep on keepin' on!

I'm glad you enjoyed reading and always appreciate you stopping by, Francisco!

Thanks!
🌹

I also appreciate my you my smart beautiful strong sexy Bluevelvete 😘 ❤️.

Beautiful write. My comments can not compete.

Not a competition.... because I'd love to hear your thoughts anytime, my dear .... but not worries.... Your visit is a lovely treat and such a pleasure itself, Archie.

I'm beyond delighted that you found enjoyment reading this one.... thank you for sharing that with me and for your generous list add.

Much love and appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B

Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.

You manage to capture my attention, and keep it all the time.
And when I think I can exhale, here come the punch lines.
Truly great work.
Kind regards, Gus

Johnny,
Well, hi there ;)

Capturing your attention is what I strive to do! I absolutely love your awesome feedback.  
.. just when you think you can catch your breath, there's...still....more to come.  
Ohhh my Yesss!! ;p

That makes me very happy to know, thank you for sharing those lovely thoughts with me... it's a sincere pleasure.

I'm beyond delighted that you found a bit of what makes you breathless...✨

Don't be a stranger, my friend  
🌹 - 💙  
B

Powerful sensuality B...  Killer ending...

Your thoughts mean a lot to me, I'm so pleased you found a bit of sensual flavour, C.

That ending?!. ... yeah, I'm jazzed you dig it...
Thanks for saying so, my dear.
🌹-💙
B

Wow, my beautiful soul twin!!
Danke!!  

I enjoy sprinkling the heat as opposed to blasting and spraying you down with blatant fire.
For me, it's hotter when it's nuanced and not dangling right in your face....

Just my opinion.

I'm tickled those lines work for you , sometimes it's hit or miss, so reading that you enjoyed those lines— specifically gives me that "fuck yeah!" kinda confidence, thanks for that!!  

I deeply appreciate and adore you visiting. I look forward to your input and feedback. It makes a wonderful difference and/or helps me improve.

My regards are entirely too intense to be just warm.... so be careful when reading...
Hee hee hee.
🌹 -💙 🔥 💙🔥💙🔥💙
B
ヽ(´∇´)ノ　(∇´ノ)　ヽ(　　　)ノ　(ヽ´∇) ヽ(´∇')ﾉ

(running in circles 👆🏻)

Thanks for the kind feedback.
I appreciate you, friend

🌹-B

This was really interesting. The three parties in the poem. It's not just the hot crotch, it's the voyeuristic element, the empowerment and the call to action.

The Narrator talks to 'you,' the subject, then talks of 'him,' the object, as if he's utterly out of the conversation. (I am pro objectification of men, so I'm all over that linguistic subtlety.)  

The dominance swap, using predatory and prey and identifying the narrator as a lioness... the hunter of the group, made the narrator the one to watch, not the object.

Smoldering and powerful. Great piece.

Hey there Betty,  
Your comments really capsulize in a way that I'm blown away by! Damn, I feel truly fortunate to have your keen eye see what it sees. I deeply appreciate you for taking the time to break it all down; it sincerely means a lot to me.  
 
I feel pretty fucking accomplished if you felt a smolder, being you're writing is one of my favorite inspirations and weirdly one of the main reasons that I'm still here, participating on DUP today.    
   
I was seriously considering leaving DUP because ridiculous drama is inevitable/unavoidable on social media I've learned; I was pushed to my brink last October... I remember being so close to throwing in the towel, just searching around the dark crevices of DUP because I really enjoy reading other member's poems. I was looking for anything that moved or inspired. I think I was sort of trying to find a reason to not leave, when lo and behold, I stumbled across your poetry; your account hadn't seen a new poem posted on it in years and years, yet it was all brand new to me; and I. reveled. Needless to say it wasn't long before I was fucking hooked. Which if you remember, is why I was so overly eager and crazy excited to see you return and why I hit you with that crazy fan girl energy right out of the gate... haha... silly Blue!  
   
Anyway, your writing style and the way you create this fucking amazing atmosphere around everything you write, has deeply impacted and inspired me .... so much so, that it was the spark that changed my mind; allowing me to pull on my big girl panties and mentally send out a 'fuck you' to anyone who thought they'd intimidate or bully me away. I stayed. I stayed and tried to kick as much ass as I could; learning, growing and remembering those moments when a stranger, that I was sure I would never meet and felt pissed off about missing the pleasure of knowing the experience of them back in their 'heyday', threw gasoline straight onto my resolve with their fucking stellar, one of a kind poetry.  I even marked the occasion with my own poem which was very very much inspired after reading your entire DUP catalog, at the time, I incognito dedicated it to your essence, thinking you'd never be back. No one knows any of this, 'til now. I hope it's not too much of a reveal ... I just felt compelled to explain how I see your worth.    
   
Thank you again for taking the time today.    
🌹 B    
   
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/433445-valuable-lessons-learned-from-ghosts-of/

Omg! I’m absolutely blown away.

Let me just say how damn flattered I am. Like, holy shit, that was touching, honest, and amazing.

Then let me say… you fucking go with your bad-bitch self. Fuck ‘em if you can, fuck ‘em and burn their corpses if you can’t. But never surrender, and never back down. You. Are a badass.

And hot as shit. Never stop.

Thank you for this reply.

Hello B,
This is a perfect meeting for perfect reasons in the perfect time to discover the perfect wilderness and admire and adore each other perfectly.

Love and hugs,

KS

Your comments are so enormously gracious and palpable, KS ... I humbly appreciate the kindness you generously bestow and I thank you for stopping by to leave those thoughts with me.
It's a great pleasure to reflect on your feedback and it's truly motivational..... fuel for my fire 🔥  
;p

Returned love, dear poet
🌹 - 💙
B

Wow!
Beautiful and powerful poetry.
❣️❣️❣️
🤠

Dawww... shucks... you made my day, KP
Thank you.


I'm delighted you found pleasure
🌹
( ◠‿◠✿)

hey beautiful Blue this is so fucking hot
and p,s I've been a Betty groupie for a very long time...

you are smoking ❤️

I mean how can anyone NOT be a fan, right!!?  ;p

Thanks for the visit and your sizzling feedback, dear lady....You pov means a lot to me and I soak it all in.  
You're brilliant -  
🌹 - 💙  
B

Bravissima, dear Lady Blue❣ Another powerfully romantic triumph. The  third stanza is so vivid in it's visceral sensuality. I love reading this passage over and over...makes my vocal chords happy with it's alliteration,

"fused of fortuitous fetishism  
precise in perfect proclivity  
predator meeting prey"🐻💞🐰

We're kindred spirits.... that's exactly why it's there.... I love it, when it rolls off the tongue!
It makes my day to see you 🦋


I'm tickled you enjoyed.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me and taking a peek.

🌹 - B  
💞💞💞

One of my recent comments had to do with grout / sealant in fixing cracks and here you go engineering the "perfect" joint fit. Well done.

You're far too kind, dearest Leo.

Thank you for visiting and making me smile.... it was much needed this morning.

🌹💜 🌹 💜 🌹
-B

Great Poem Excellent Write Would Love Too Read More Sometime :)

Thanks, Casey.  
Appreciate the visit and the nod  
Just click on my profile pic above and there you'll have it!  
 
A pleasure to meet you, take care.  
and I hope you enjoy your time here !!  
🌹 - B

Thank You :)

No problem at all, it's always so great to see new faces!

Have fun ;)

🌹 B

Poem good, make brain numb.

Freaking amazing spill Blue. It's a testament of the thought process being spilled with eloquence and mind numbing titillation.

Standing O.

Sheesh.. Walter!
I'm humbled and extremely thankful for such high praise.

You're sincerely one of the brightest lights here on DUP. I can't thank you enough for showing and reminding me of another perspective and in doing so renewing/refreshing my idea of what is so wonderful about being here, writing within the deep underground....

What a treat that is.
(ㅅ´ ˘ ')♡
thank you

Hi Blue,how are U?
This is wicked expressionism!
Excellent!

Take care.
X

Thanks for the lovely visit, Wired6
That's some truly awesome feedback! I'm deeply appreciative and feel very lucky to get the opportunity to process the thoughts and opinions of other poets, like yourselfI; which allows for growth and my own introspection. It means a lot to me that you found something of worth here and stopped by to say so.

I'm doing the best I can at the moment. I hope you are doing well and enjoying being creative.

All my warmest regards,
🌹💙
B

WHOA! BRILLIANT!!
Elenore

Ohhh, E
You just made my night.


Many warm thanks,
🌹💙
B

That's what it's all about!
E.

His thoughts becoming your words is a scintillating poetic soar of a roar. That concept just fits perfectly in my synaptic being like a bilingual crash of beauty that sinks into my heart with deft passion. There is something altogether wonderful about how you brought this idea full circle in the end. It is the best climax for a poem I've come across. Like a seamstress of poetry, you wove this into a seamless art of beauty. Thank you for bringing this poem to life for me to behold.

Xo
John

Your praise makes me feel worthy and warm... thank you.... In fact, many thank you's, my lovely.


I am humbled by all the breathtakingly kind and encouraging feedback....You're welcome, btw.

((hugs))
🌹-Susan
xoxo

Blue,

     Thy words are an ah captivation for the ages of write. And, u write them so ah free of any worries or any doubts. Each line had an air of wrong to outsiders, that, is just so right to us(the parties involved). This poetry ah floats through my ah soul each stanza and causes me to come back for more with each line as I ah read. Splendid Flourescence of An H Job Writing This One!👍👁️🌷🍑👅💋🌈👁️🤜🤛🍹🍹🍹🍻🍻🍻🍺🍺🍺🥃🥃🥂🥂🥂🥂🥦🌽🥬🍜👄🎶

Bluevelvet u truly are alright with this piece! Magnificent Write! 🌈💋👅🍑🌷👄🎶🥦🌽🥬🥂🥂🥂🥂🥂🍻🍻🍻🍻🍹🍺🍺🍺🍺🍺🥃🥃🥃

Ohhh, Birchel!
You are the best at creating good energy and positive juju!

I adore you finding this piece and really appreciating it's hope filled yearning for the perfect connected moment between two similar souls.

Thank you for stopping by and enjoying yourself... I'm glad it spoke to you!

Loads of appreciation and warm wishes, my friend.
⑅✩♡ᵗʱᵃᵑᵏઽ*♡♬＊°

U are welcome! 👍

this was simply smooth to read

Thanks for finding that cadence, James. It's very helpful and much appreciated.

🌹-B