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A Voice Writing our Story
There's a kinetic energy
Between lovers
It's unspoken
It floats in aura
Supreme and unflinching
Bold but telling
There are things
I want to say them to you
But can't, so I write these poems
I'm around you on every corner
In your rear view mirror
A voice writing our story
Between lovers
It's unspoken
It floats in aura
Supreme and unflinching
Bold but telling
There are things
I want to say them to you
But can't, so I write these poems
I'm around you on every corner
In your rear view mirror
A voice writing our story
Written by
PoetSpeak
Published 1st Jul 2022
Author's Note
This is a poem I wrote years ago
I think its universal for lovers in their own nucleus
Mixed Media image by Poetspeak
I think its universal for lovers in their own nucleus
Mixed Media image by Poetspeak
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1st Jul 2022 8:52pm
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1st Jul 2022 8:56pm
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1st Jul 2022 8:58pm
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2022 10:39pm
The piece shows your range. Much enjoyed!
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1st Jul 2022 11:00pm
Much appreciated Ted
it's from 7 years ago but still holds water I guess
Thank you
it's from 7 years ago but still holds water I guess
Thank you
Re. A Voice Writing our Story
2nd Jul 2022 00:34am
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2nd Jul 2022 1:01am
Re. A Voice Writing our Story
2nd Jul 2022 00:38am
Oh yes, this! As I think I said in my profile... poetry is where I say the stuff I can't say out loud.
And lovers... well, the best ones don't need words anyway.
Love the energy in that art... great pick.
❤️k
And lovers... well, the best ones don't need words anyway.
Love the energy in that art... great pick.
❤️k
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2nd Jul 2022 1:03am
Back in time, Poetspeak was singing the same song as today.
When you have the right lover, it's glory and passion and time ....l
Thx K
🔺️🔝
When you have the right lover, it's glory and passion and time ....l
Thx K
🔺️🔝
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2nd Jul 2022 1:53am
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2nd Jul 2022 2:09am
Best I can promise is some in your face rap
Might be good or tragic
Talking jive sister
🖤
Might be good or tragic
Talking jive sister
🖤
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2nd Jul 2022 2:48am
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2nd Jul 2022 4:17am
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2nd Jul 2022 11:07am
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2nd Jul 2022 7:12am
I like a bit of romance, like pepper on a steak. Not too much, just enough. Sometimes saying nothing says more than words ever could.
Also.
I think I just realized your name. Is it a nod to orwell?
Also.
I think I just realized your name. Is it a nod to orwell?
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2nd Jul 2022 11:14am
I like that reference to pepper on steak. A few ground peppercorns that amp of the splendor of a good steak but don't overwhelm.... A lot to be said for tweaking what already is ..
I was vastly influenced by Orwell but in the abstract.
I appreciate your visit Bryan, hope to see you again..
I was vastly influenced by Orwell but in the abstract.
I appreciate your visit Bryan, hope to see you again..
Re. A Voice Writing our Story
2nd Jul 2022 3:43pm
Oh how intense that kinetic energy is, pulling you in and holding you there so tightly. That all you want to do is feel it every minute thinking about touching, kissing, and coming together. Writing that story always and being inspired to write poems in a constant effort to try and capture those feelings in words.
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2nd Jul 2022 4:47pm
Yes, I keep writing these poems and even in redux I want everyone to know what that connection means to me. You are a beautiful spirit and always remind me of the passion in your heart. You share it often in your own writing. I believe I’ve left you a comment or two saying just that !!
Appreciate the visit Kx
Appreciate the visit Kx
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3rd Jul 2022 00:18am
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3rd Jul 2022 2:14am
Hey PS
Energy is unspoken but you can definitely feel the pull. That special something
when inspired. And you immediately know. That lightening in the gut demanding
attention from your mind.
That solitude or rearview mirror of your eyes looking back at you.
Yes - write her story - your story - but most importantly to write:)
Energy is unspoken but you can definitely feel the pull. That special something
when inspired. And you immediately know. That lightening in the gut demanding
attention from your mind.
That solitude or rearview mirror of your eyes looking back at you.
Yes - write her story - your story - but most importantly to write:)
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3rd Jul 2022 3:22am
Yes, we must continue to write.
All these love vibes, what could be better to write about??
I don't even have a car,city bloke but that rear view mirror is calling me from years and cars past ...
Thx A
All these love vibes, what could be better to write about??
I don't even have a car,city bloke but that rear view mirror is calling me from years and cars past ...
Thx A
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4th Jul 2022 10:44am
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4th Jul 2022 1:11pm
Thank you so much InDreamz, nice to see you again !
Appreciate the visit and RL
❤
Appreciate the visit and RL
❤
Re. A Voice Writing our Story
31st Jul 2022 5:22am
Everything, from beginning to end, is great. It's pretty hypnotizing.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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31st Jul 2022 9:51am
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18th May 2023 2:32pm
There's something very dark in there..............Good luck in thecomp. Regards, Robert.
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18th May 2023 3:04pm
Appreciate your comment Robert.
I had others but this one comes the closest to the requirements of the comp.
Thanks !!
I had others but this one comes the closest to the requirements of the comp.
Thanks !!