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Author's Note
for the June Senryu Theme: Kindness
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/5727/
©Blu2022
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©Blu2022
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28th Jun 2022 1:13pm
Splendid... uplifting... so much what I needed to read this morning... way to go B...
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28th Jun 2022 1:14pm
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Thanks, Ron.
I'm so delighted you found some beauty here.
I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Loads of love and appreciation sent across the pond ✨
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I'm so delighted you found some beauty here.
I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Loads of love and appreciation sent across the pond ✨
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28th Jun 2022 1:57pm
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Hey there, Sms
Sometimes kindness is sorely needed Irl and periodically on DUP, so I am thrilled that you felt a little bit of what I hoped to covey.
You're always a bright spot and I'm sincerely grateful you take the time you do.
Much love from across the pond ✨
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B
Sometimes kindness is sorely needed Irl and periodically on DUP, so I am thrilled that you felt a little bit of what I hoped to covey.
You're always a bright spot and I'm sincerely grateful you take the time you do.
Much love from across the pond ✨
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B
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28th Jun 2022 4:16pm
this is a lovely poem. i love micro forms. i'm not good at them, but i love reading them! well done
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Thank you muchly, MissP
I appreciate you taking the time to stop by and for
leaving such kind words.
I felt similarly, trust me, it's been a journey to get to this point, so I completely get what you're saying!! Eventually I have come to really love senryś and haiku, so much so they're probably one of my favorite styles!!
Glad you enjoyed reading :)
🌹 - B
I appreciate you taking the time to stop by and for
leaving such kind words.
I felt similarly, trust me, it's been a journey to get to this point, so I completely get what you're saying!! Eventually I have come to really love senryś and haiku, so much so they're probably one of my favorite styles!!
Glad you enjoyed reading :)
🌹 - B
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28th Jun 2022 4:30pm
Yes u do see me too. Purity of heart from the start shines upon u with words of ah needness. Plus, that's one beautiful pen within that poem look like upon a card. How are u today Velvety!
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Thanks for stopping by, Birchel.
I'm doing well and I hope you are too!
Your kind words are generous and appreciated ...
It's awesome to know you felt a bit of beauty here and I'm glad you enjoyed the senryś and the visual, like you have!
Much obliged!
🌹 - B
I'm doing well and I hope you are too!
Your kind words are generous and appreciated ...
It's awesome to know you felt a bit of beauty here and I'm glad you enjoyed the senryś and the visual, like you have!
Much obliged!
🌹 - B
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28th Jun 2022 4:59pm
U are welcome and I'm doing well. The senryu is such the greatness ah new to me. The captivating words go along with the picturing.
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3rd Jul 2022 5:27am
It's always a search to try and find the perfect visual for your poem, especially if it's only 17 syllables.... lol... So I'm pleased it made an impact.
Thanks again for the visit and the generous list add,... that's always so very meaningful
🌹 - B
Thanks again for the visit and the generous list add,... that's always so very meaningful
🌹 - B
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28th Jun 2022 7:52pm
Omg... so hysterical...
Damn denial of essence!!! boooo .... haha!!. Love it.
and you just gotta love Kubrick... I think I remember a Kubrick documentary special once or DVD short maybe, where Kubrick wanted Ripper - George C Scott to say the most outlandish shit and that's when he and the screenplay writers came up with.. 'precious bodily fluids' ...as a perfect way to to throw comedic shade at conspiracy theorists of the time who actually believed the fluoridation of our water was a communist plot.... 😲
Perfect clip, RT... thanks for the giggle
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Damn denial of essence!!! boooo .... haha!!. Love it.
and you just gotta love Kubrick... I think I remember a Kubrick documentary special once or DVD short maybe, where Kubrick wanted Ripper - George C Scott to say the most outlandish shit and that's when he and the screenplay writers came up with.. 'precious bodily fluids' ...as a perfect way to to throw comedic shade at conspiracy theorists of the time who actually believed the fluoridation of our water was a communist plot.... 😲
Perfect clip, RT... thanks for the giggle
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28th Jun 2022 6:32pm
oh wowee I think there are a few of us poets on this wavelength
so beautiful is you write... love you lady you shine 💕
so beautiful is you write... love you lady you shine 💕
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28th Jun 2022 8:02pm
Awww, dear lady!
You have me beaming with your kind words and lovely felt warmth.
I love that you get me and can sincerely feel my intent. Thanks for that.
Means a lot to me.... as do you.
🌹 - 💙 - 🔆
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You have me beaming with your kind words and lovely felt warmth.
I love that you get me and can sincerely feel my intent. Thanks for that.
Means a lot to me.... as do you.
🌹 - 💙 - 🔆
x
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28th Jun 2022 8:05pm
You're a gift... to my page and as a reminder to be true to myself
Thank you for everything, T
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(I wish you left up your poem from yesterday... it was impactful and I had thoughts! ... lol..)
Thank you for everything, T
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(I wish you left up your poem from yesterday... it was impactful and I had thoughts! ... lol..)
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28th Jun 2022 9:59pm
I almost pm'd you because I think it's a valid question but thought better of it because you are somewhat of a conundrum to me when it comes to that element on DU... haha....I'll keep an eye out for another poem, maybe in the future... 😉
Thanks, buddy
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Thanks, buddy
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Re. -beautiful haiku
28th Jun 2022 6:54pm
🌹 This is the most beautiful haiku I think I have ever seen written. Youre words are magical
amazing write, B. 🌹
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28th Jun 2022 8:10pm
Awww, you're a gem, my lady!!
Thanks for those far too kind words and for taking the time to stop by.
Genuine kindness seems to be in short demand sometimes, so it felt serendipitous to take advantage of the monthly theme before the month ended!
I'm beyond pleased that you felt a bit of my incognito magic!! (haha!) ✨ 💫 ✨
It's deeply appreciated!
Much love and continued magic sent your way 🍃
🌹-B
Thanks for those far too kind words and for taking the time to stop by.
Genuine kindness seems to be in short demand sometimes, so it felt serendipitous to take advantage of the monthly theme before the month ended!
I'm beyond pleased that you felt a bit of my incognito magic!! (haha!) ✨ 💫 ✨
It's deeply appreciated!
Much love and continued magic sent your way 🍃
🌹-B
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28th Jun 2022 9:26pm
Hey there POft!
What a wonderful treat seeing you 🦋
I'm so glad you enjoyed this little senryś; your kind words mean a lot.
Thanks for the visit and I hopeto see more of you in the days ahead.
🌹 B
What a wonderful treat seeing you 🦋
I'm so glad you enjoyed this little senryś; your kind words mean a lot.
Thanks for the visit and I hopeto see more of you in the days ahead.
🌹 B
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28th Jun 2022 11:52pm
It's definitely more visceral... ;)
I hope you are doing well... going to check out your poem in a bit...
🌹 - B
I hope you are doing well... going to check out your poem in a bit...
🌹 - B
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28th Jun 2022 11:49pm
You are my starlight. Keep on shining bright. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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28th Jun 2022 11:51pm
Awww... you don't ever miss a moment!!
Thanks for being the charmer you are, Francisco
I appreciate you.
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Thanks for being the charmer you are, Francisco
I appreciate you.
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29th Jun 2022 2:38am
Hi Blu
I admire anyone who can say so much in 3 lines. Just really beautiful:)
Also loved the copyright on the pen. Too cool!!!
Loved the whole visual style in this.
I admire anyone who can say so much in 3 lines. Just really beautiful:)
Also loved the copyright on the pen. Too cool!!!
Loved the whole visual style in this.
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29th Jun 2022 6:38am
Hey there lady!
Good to see you tonight... hope all is well in your neck of the world.
Thanks for the eyes on my senryś. I usually get the Haiku and Senryś poem of the month themes a try when I remember. Sometimes it seems we're always in short supply of kindness, so it felt like it was meant to be.
Glad you found a bit of enjoyment and at the visual, too!
That's awesome.
You're the only one who's seemed to have noticed that copyright on the pen, keen eye!
hahahah 😉
Much thanks and loads of appreciation,
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B
Good to see you tonight... hope all is well in your neck of the world.
Thanks for the eyes on my senryś. I usually get the Haiku and Senryś poem of the month themes a try when I remember. Sometimes it seems we're always in short supply of kindness, so it felt like it was meant to be.
Glad you found a bit of enjoyment and at the visual, too!
That's awesome.
You're the only one who's seemed to have noticed that copyright on the pen, keen eye!
hahahah 😉
Much thanks and loads of appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B
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29th Jun 2022 8:57pm
I am grateful for your visit and the thoughtfulness of your feedback, L.
Thanks so much for taking the time and for the generous list add.
It's meaning to me that you found a little bit of oomph and impact here when reading.
Much obliged, my friend 🙏.
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Thanks so much for taking the time and for the generous list add.
It's meaning to me that you found a little bit of oomph and impact here when reading.
Much obliged, my friend 🙏.
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29th Jun 2022 10:17pm
haha!! 😂
Will do, Jazz!
Thanks for the visit.
You know I love to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
Will do, Jazz!
Thanks for the visit.
You know I love to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
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30th Jun 2022 5:05pm
Dearest, Lady Blue
One of the most profound attributes of kindness is that feeling that one genuinely sees one. It provides a deep and abiding warmth that makes one feel cared for and safe. I love your poems because i can see into your heart and soul through your words. Thank you for that breathtaking view🐻💞🐰
One of the most profound attributes of kindness is that feeling that one genuinely sees one. It provides a deep and abiding warmth that makes one feel cared for and safe. I love your poems because i can see into your heart and soul through your words. Thank you for that breathtaking view🐻💞🐰
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2nd Jul 2022 2:43am
Ohhh BB!!
Man, have I missed you; almost as much as I adore this truly beautiful and gracious feedback.
You have this unique knack of warming me from within, like no other can. I don't and won't ever take it for granted.
My heart is incredibly full knowing you've been touched by my senryś; it means a lot to me, especially knowing how much you revere that poetic form as well!!
Thinking about you tonight and hoping you are well and happy.
Much love, my majestic bear,
warmest hugs and kisses
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🐻💞🐰
x
Man, have I missed you; almost as much as I adore this truly beautiful and gracious feedback.
You have this unique knack of warming me from within, like no other can. I don't and won't ever take it for granted.
My heart is incredibly full knowing you've been touched by my senryś; it means a lot to me, especially knowing how much you revere that poetic form as well!!
Thinking about you tonight and hoping you are well and happy.
Much love, my majestic bear,
warmest hugs and kisses
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🐻💞🐰
x
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2022 2:50am
this has a soft sweetness that I really appreciate
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2nd Jul 2022 2:19am
You honor me with such beautiful feedback.
I have deep reverence for such an openly sincere sentiment and I'm very glad you took the time to say so.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
I have deep reverence for such an openly sincere sentiment and I'm very glad you took the time to say so.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
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1st Jul 2022 7:28am
Wonderful ink. To truly see a person is the best thing one could ask for. 😁
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2nd Jul 2022 2:05am
It's what I believe we all hope to encounter in someone we love; romantically or platonically.
You're a good buddy,DC.
Thanks for seeing me and my intentions.... I'm grateful.
Best,
🌹 - B
You're a good buddy,DC.
Thanks for seeing me and my intentions.... I'm grateful.
Best,
🌹 - B
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2nd Jul 2022 2:02am
You're a lovely sight for sore eyes, Lj.
I've had a rough few days and your kind feedback and generous list add made a difference for me tonight.
A heartfelt thanks for the nod, dear lady
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B
I've had a rough few days and your kind feedback and generous list add made a difference for me tonight.
A heartfelt thanks for the nod, dear lady
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B
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3rd Jul 2022 4:07pm
I love Serynu writting and you my dear sister said a lot with so little
Well done sis 😘
Write ✍️ on mama♥️🌹
Jackie ♥️🇺🇸😘
Well done sis 😘
Write ✍️ on mama♥️🌹
Jackie ♥️🇺🇸😘
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Hee hee hee..
I'm giggling at your avatar!!!
😂 😂 😂 😂
Sooo true... hysterical
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I'm giggling at your avatar!!!
😂 😂 😂 😂
Sooo true... hysterical
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Thanks for the lovely kind words.
You're a killer, constant bright supportive light.
It's so lovely for you to leave your thoughts. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this little senryś.
It was actually directed towards, AP as a reply to one of his very kind comments he left on one of my poems a while back. I liked it so much that when the June Senryu theme of 'kindness' came around, it instantly popped in my head.
So your kind words definitely mean a lot
Much love, my sister!
💙💙💞💙💙
You're a killer, constant bright supportive light.
It's so lovely for you to leave your thoughts. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this little senryś.
It was actually directed towards, AP as a reply to one of his very kind comments he left on one of my poems a while back. I liked it so much that when the June Senryu theme of 'kindness' came around, it instantly popped in my head.
So your kind words definitely mean a lot
Much love, my sister!
💙💙💞💙💙
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Thanks, Hashman.
I love reading this, as it totally came from the heart and was deeply meant.
I very much enjoyed seeing you and hope your day today was festive.
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B
I love reading this, as it totally came from the heart and was deeply meant.
I very much enjoyed seeing you and hope your day today was festive.
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B
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5th Jul 2022 7:12pm
and your thoughtful comments make me smile and smile.
Thank you, Leo
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Thank you, Leo
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