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Insomnia, Sleep with me...
I will be your eternal memory that does not let you sleep ...
You will forever remember every minute spent with me,
and every thought will pierce you like an electric current,
blowing up your consciousness and turning on your mind!
Turning you on in every other way too, piercing steel rod
You will forever remember me as a crazy chaos in your head
depriving you of sleep! And you will dream of touching me
at least with your breath, feeling this touch on your body ...
with an exciting tremor!
You will forever remember every minute spent with me,
and every thought will pierce you like an electric current,
blowing up your consciousness and turning on your mind!
Turning you on in every other way too, piercing steel rod
You will forever remember me as a crazy chaos in your head
depriving you of sleep! And you will dream of touching me
at least with your breath, feeling this touch on your body ...
with an exciting tremor!
Author's Note
Terrible sleep last night but insomnia is the in thing these days. Still if you are going to lay there all bothered may as well make good use of the time. It may not put you to sleep but it's damn fun trying anyway. Keep you up all night with me... So inconsiderate I know. ;)
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Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
27th Jun 2022 9:12pm
Who needs sleep it's so overrated
You can keep me awake lol
Fun read sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx
You can keep me awake lol
Fun read sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
27th Jun 2022 9:25pm
Haha, if only we could have sex all and night. Just saying. :p
I am sure sleep would come, and come again... eventually...
So let's turn the lights out and try very hard. ;)
I am sure sleep would come, and come again... eventually...
So let's turn the lights out and try very hard. ;)
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
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27th Jun 2022 9:12pm
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Yes, we are so strong. I want you to prove it to me often. Oh, the tremors causing earthquakes shaking the bed from the shock. Making dreams come true, morning wood never left untouched by eager lips. Always waking up with a bang. ;)
I love naughty ink, it's wet but it dries eventually I suppose.
I love naughty ink, it's wet but it dries eventually I suppose.
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
27th Jun 2022 10:03pm
There's nothing like confidence in yourself. To have confidence in your ability to have someone remember each and every session with you, or to prefer you to sleep. Tight work
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27th Jun 2022 10:07pm
Two tights in a row, you spoil me I_IS_ME but I love it. I make very sure they are memorable each and every time, for him, for me. If you are going to do something give it your all. It's always so rewarding to accomplish so many things. To make him fall asleep from exhaustion. To make him wake up to exhaustion. lol
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
27th Jun 2022 11:52pm
So beautiful yet so true to form of sleepless nights of moments that are never unforgettable of memories 🙏👊🦋
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 00:21am
My mind goes non stop may as well direct it at something immensely pleasurable for everyone. ;) At the very least try to stroke the anxiety away. But I must admit I like waking someone up with my lips. Sure I could by talking too but where is the fun in that. I love making memories that become future dreams. That is something to sleep on.
Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 12:30pm
Yeah your thoughts are so revealing and true that they make you go hummm 🙏👊😉🦋
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Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
27th Jun 2022 11:59pm
I'll bring the tea..."And you will dream of touching me
at least with your breath" what a line and thought...those sleepless nights ;)
at least with your breath" what a line and thought...those sleepless nights ;)
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 00:23am
A nice cinnamon chai with lots of cream. Thick, sweet, and spicy. Well if I am close enough to breathe on you then you are definitely going to feel me touching you; with lips, hands, body, everything. Restless mind, restless body... I am sure you can think of many remedies, I know I can. ;)
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 00:22am
When are you moving in ?
Haven't slept since 1998
Why start now ?
Hot pic
BIG LIKE
Haven't slept since 1998
Why start now ?
Hot pic
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 00:38am
Why do people keep asking me that? :p Pheromones' I guess. Haha, geez - 1998, I figure I was sleeping a lot at that age. lol NYC never sleeps, why waste time. Always something or someone to do. Yes it is, would you be able to sleep? lol Nothing like a hot body to keep you up. ;)
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 00:25am
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28th Jun 2022 00:54am
Hey there Rubyredheart, I am so happy you loved this one and I really appreciate you stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. Definitely a great thought for the next time and every time. I am all about keeping people up. lol Well you know what I mean. ;)
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
Hell yes we can go all night and all day long. Keep on writing. You got to dress like the woman in the picture.
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 1:03am
Oh yes! I love going all night and all day, just know that the less sleep I get the weirder and crazier I get but it can be really funny - at least to me. lol I love that look, black and super sexy. Definitely has that hot and bothered you better not waste this opportunity look. You might get hurt otherwise. ;)
Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 1:14am
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
It is such a strong feeling when you can't think of anything but that special someone. Reminds me of that first love feeling. Great sexy ink, friend 😁
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 1:01pm
Yes! What a strong and overwhelming feeling that is. That is something to live for... Especially when you know you can make someone else feel that way; that's even better. ;) I always want to keep someone up, in every way... mentally and physically. But in a good way. (or bad way, I suppose it's perspective) ;) I really love that you stopped by DC.
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 5:02pm
A waking dream blurring the lines of reality until there are no lines separating phantasy and reality. If I read this spell out loud will I lose my soul to be ruled by dark desires haunted by you? I thought I was stronger than this but you magic is just to powerful as I lose what's left of me. Seeking to possess a goddess, it is I who has been possessed living in an endless dream as I smile blindly at strangers on the street.
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 5:27pm
Let the lines flow until they take you over and you have no strength to resist. Trying to swim in the strong current of me you are sure to go under. But in losing your breath you can feel the caress of the waves completely. Drowning in the never ending turbulence haunted by that continuous flow of me, and you... Swim with me in this dream where I use spells to draw phantasies, remembering what just happened. The witch must cast spells, it's who she is.
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powerless to resist
unable to desist
lines flows bold
on these pages I hold
words of dark dreaming
so innocent seeming
yet written in blood
now trapped in a flood
these my phantasies
dark alchemies
speaking blasphemies
that opens a door
for the next lines of prose
unwillingly composed
the spell now complete
with lines of deceit
the price my soul
has always been the goal
to write in rhythm and rhyme
with these my words
reality blurs
to live my phantasies
and dream dark thoughts of you
unable to desist
lines flows bold
on these pages I hold
words of dark dreaming
so innocent seeming
yet written in blood
now trapped in a flood
these my phantasies
dark alchemies
speaking blasphemies
that opens a door
for the next lines of prose
unwillingly composed
the spell now complete
with lines of deceit
the price my soul
has always been the goal
to write in rhythm and rhyme
with these my words
reality blurs
to live my phantasies
and dream dark thoughts of you
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 7:02pm
Look at you with the beautiful rhyme and flow, casting your own spell on me.
Dark thoughts, I do love the sound of that... I have so many. ;)
Like any powerful witch always will I suppose...
Dark thoughts, I do love the sound of that... I have so many. ;)
Like any powerful witch always will I suppose...
Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 7:15pm
I cast my nets and set my snares but you dance upon the traps for fun. With all my love I tempt you to succumb, baiting the trap with my soul.
The trap however never seems to work out to well for the bait.
Playing with fire, I am yours.
The trap however never seems to work out to well for the bait.
Playing with fire, I am yours.
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 7:37pm
Such a trap is the Witches hammer, perhaps the only way to capture her. Because she wants nothing less than your soul.
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 11:38pm
I never sleep well anymore
I see you changed your avatar
That's not going to help me sleep either
Now I'll be up in more ways than one
You know ??
I see you changed your avatar
That's not going to help me sleep either
Now I'll be up in more ways than one
You know ??
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
28th Jun 2022 11:49pm
If I can't sleep the least you can do is be up for me. ;)
I know all about keeping someone up.
And I am very good at it damnit! :p
I don't like it when someone is down, just saying.
Hadn't planned to change it but got bored.
I know all about keeping someone up.
And I am very good at it damnit! :p
I don't like it when someone is down, just saying.
Hadn't planned to change it but got bored.
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
29th Jun 2022 00:12am
This poem u wrote will start a wonderful habit of read and critique based upon the soul feeling of the writer's feeling. U are graciously alright.
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
29th Jun 2022 00:17am
Damn right Birchel, high five! I am all about creating bad habits (I mean wonderful habits) lol. We have plenty of soul and feeling don't we? ;) Graciously alright, well I love that. You are pretty great too. Thanks for stopping by and sharing with me.
Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
29th Jun 2022 6:28am
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
I did even lay down last night hell I didn't even go home but I'm about to now. ' piercing steal rod ' you mentioned the less sleep the more weird reminds me of how more nuclear the explosive big finishes get around the 3rd night and the couple times I made it to night number 5 lol
kaboomshockalocka lol
Miss KrisSYX ,Wow you are phat to the bone I love how your tone leaves me hanging on your every word.
kaboomshockalocka lol
Miss KrisSYX ,Wow you are phat to the bone I love how your tone leaves me hanging on your every word.
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
29th Jun 2022 1:13pm
Oh yeah the nuclear reaction of two bodies can be really unstable but oh so incredible. Power the whole area for a bit. ;) That steel rod needs a catalyst though otherwise it's just hard. Sounds like quite a journey from Night 1 to Night 5. Get some sleep damnit. lol 'phat to the bone' I will take that as a compliment. :p I know how to handle steel rods to keep that reaction going... 'hanging on every word' Love it! ;)
Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
30th Jun 2022 00:43am
You betcha. Reading your words is like consuming an aphrodisiac and being left with a feeling embodying a satisfying euphoric state of ecstasy. Write on and keep it coming.
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Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
29th Jun 2022 11:53am
Ah yes the frequent companion of someone diagnosed as bipolar! Insomnia also happens to be a time when one is less inclined to stick with uniformity. I can think of a song or two in that realm.
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
29th Jun 2022 1:04pm
I know that companion well for other reasons but it is an epidemic in modern times I suppose. My weird really comes out when I have had little sleep but it can be really funny. lol I actually really like it a lot of the time, changes the thought processes. Okay, you can't say that and not tell me the songs. C'mon Jazz.. :p
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
5th Jul 2022 6:36pm
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5th Jul 2022 6:41pm
I always have to sleep with a fan directly on me or I can't sleep, and you better believe that is going to keep anyone next to me up... way up. lol And eventually that can get exhausting but I don't care. Suffer with me... Suffer in me. Feel me with pain because this isn't cooling down anytime soon. Burning hot all night long...
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
5th Jul 2022 8:02pm
Sleeping is a thing of the past
This babe needs to be plugged
No time for sleep
That's what work is for ....
This babe needs to be plugged
No time for sleep
That's what work is for ....
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
5th Jul 2022 8:32pm
Yes, not a lot of sleeping going on, but it's really fun trying hard... ;) The harder you try the less sleep you get but that's just fine with me. Always lots of things to try... ;) Exciting ways to plug things.
Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
31st Jul 2022 3:19am
"You will forever remember me as a crazy chaos " I loved this line. Ramping up those fantasies and machinations will certainly make a good use of the time being spent awake.
Incredible work.
Incredible work.
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Re: Re. Insomnia, Sleep with me...
31st Jul 2022 9:50pm
I think I get called something like crazy chaos often. lol It was an easy line to write. :p I am really glad you understood and loved it. I love making fantasies come true, mine or another's. That is one of the true beauties of life and an incredible escape from all the other difficult stuff. I really love the incredible work, thanks so much Wally.