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Scarlet traces
Inflicting pain on me, under the order to be silent,
You will not say a word. You play with me. Again.
The mask awaits, the illusion, the sweet pain ...
As if I'm far away, as if I'm not with you.
There are scarlet traces on my back, but does it hurt me?
And my cry will not be heard in the silence of the night.
Getting rid of feelings is a panacea for troubles.
The scourge doesn't hurt like life. Here's the answer.
You will not say a word. You play with me. Again.
The mask awaits, the illusion, the sweet pain ...
As if I'm far away, as if I'm not with you.
There are scarlet traces on my back, but does it hurt me?
And my cry will not be heard in the silence of the night.
Getting rid of feelings is a panacea for troubles.
The scourge doesn't hurt like life. Here's the answer.
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Re. Scarlet traces
24th May 2022 9:08pm
Wrapped in pains loving arms. He calms the world
Great job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
Great job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
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24th May 2022 10:00pm
Love and passion can be expressed in so many ways and the answer is definitely not the same everyone. My experience and affair with pain is an intricate one. Scarlet traces written in cursive on the body, and in the journal of my life. Certainly an intensity of physical sensation can calm my mind and troubles disappear in those moments. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me Ron. X
Re. Scarlet traces
24th May 2022 9:17pm
The last line sums it all up, you must like numbers. Tight work on the darkened need to release or be released
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24th May 2022 10:11pm
You are always very intuitive, I do like numbers but that's another story. ;) And I am always so thrilled to get a tight work from you I_IS_ME. I can tell you understand that darkened need to release or be released... So perfectly worded. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. X
Re. Scarlet traces
24th May 2022 9:56pm
This is red meat for sadists and submissives alike.
Hard to understand if you don't walk this line but a walk in the park for those in need ...
As usual a provocative photo to entice even those who don't bear witness.
Nobody understands or writes this better than you Kx
BIG STRAP LIKE
Hard to understand if you don't walk this line but a walk in the park for those in need ...
As usual a provocative photo to entice even those who don't bear witness.
Nobody understands or writes this better than you Kx
BIG STRAP LIKE
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Re: Re. Scarlet traces
24th May 2022 10:58pm
You know how I always want to serve up a filet mignon for sadists and submissives alike. ;) I want you to savor the red meat, blood, flesh, and all. I will wait on my knees for the order, I have so many side orders running through my head - and so many provocative images to entice those orders. And I am so happy you understand me, I can definitely be confusing, oh this chaos in my head. :p
LOVE the BIG STRAP LIKE. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. X
LOVE the BIG STRAP LIKE. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. X
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24th May 2022 10:47pm
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Re: Re. Scarlet traces
24th May 2022 11:10pm
I always want to be smooth and thought provoking so that you cannot resist touching me with your mind as I get your heart racing along the curves of my track. The most thrilling ride and when you lose control the wreckage will be spectacular. :p Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. X
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25th May 2022 7:38am
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Re. Scarlet traces
25th May 2022 00:46am
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25th May 2022 1:50am
I thought it captured the mood well and who doesn't love a very hot picture. ;) Oh definitely, making a very hot motion picture filled with orgasmic bliss is so much more fun. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. X
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25th May 2022 00:58am
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25th May 2022 1:58am
Oh yes! Such beautiful strokes so elaborately laid out on the naked canvas of a passionate hot body. Spelling out what is to come in such wonderfully crafted letters and words. Sensual inscriptions indeed. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. :) X
Re. Scarlet traces
25th May 2022 1:57am
Awe Kristina, this is so relatable to me, I felt every thought thru this, very heart tugging ink, enjoyed, purple luv & hugs xo :)
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25th May 2022 2:03am
Hey there FG, I am so happy to see you! Your purple luv and hugs always warm my heart and make me smile. I love that you can relate to and feel me so intimately. When you play the heart strings, the sound is truly beautiful. X
Re. Scarlet traces
25th May 2022 3:11pm
Hello K,
Beautifully worded feelings. sometimes, physical pain helps to take away mental agony and aching of heart. I like it.
Love,
KS
Beautifully worded feelings. sometimes, physical pain helps to take away mental agony and aching of heart. I like it.
Love,
KS
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25th May 2022 4:26pm
What is worse than mental agony?, and there are so many coping mechanisms - could write volumes about that. Everyone is different, but whatever can pull you out of your anguish is something to be very passionate about. When you are stuck in your head physical intensity can be such a salvation. X
Re. Scarlet traces
27th May 2022 1:51pm
All my Sadistic wants are here for the taking
I don't visit much but when I do, you're my first stop.
Often I don't need anyone else after reading you ...
I don't visit much but when I do, you're my first stop.
Often I don't need anyone else after reading you ...
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Re: Re. Scarlet traces
27th May 2022 2:05pm
Oh how exciting it is to be a canvas on which all the sadistic wants and desires can be expressed, on me. I adore knowing that I am a first stop on a journey through the underground. It is so important to me to satisfy all those needs. ;) X
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27th May 2022 2:11pm
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27th May 2022 2:16pm
I suppose it's not for everyone but it's definitely a win for me. It's ironic, that pain can alleviate pain moving you into intense pleasure pulling you into your body completely. X
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27th May 2022 2:33pm
Pain is gift from beyond the senses.
If you're wired that way the canvas explodes with symmetry
If you're wired that way the canvas explodes with symmetry
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Re. Scarlet traces
Maybe because I'm a fan of Anne Rice's Sleeping Beauty series, this had that tinge of reflection in the sub's mind. It's certainly titillating in the psychological sense that one can submit to these depths and then express it with eloquence.
Amazing work K.
Amazing work K.
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Re: Re. Scarlet traces
6th Jul 2022 10:22pm
To be even loosely associated with something from Anne Rice is such a great compliment. ;) There is so much to reflect in a sub's mind. I suppose submitting to these depth is how you express it with eloquence. :) I definitely love that it was titillating in the psychological sense and how you see that so well. I can tell you have looked in some mirrors Wally. ;) X