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Drink my blood... Again...
You are my red-hot vein, pierced through and through,
Subduing me in your voluptuous sins
You are the ban of the great bloody bunch,
You are my impudent and violent exciting fear
You are a drug running through closed veins,
You are the line beyond which I fall up
And in flight, I will wear wings with you,
And over the abyss I will soar like a bat
You tied my thoughts, stole my flesh,
Drank the blood, you give an unthinkable high
And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,
Begins to break my heart without a dose ...
Subduing me in your voluptuous sins
You are the ban of the great bloody bunch,
You are my impudent and violent exciting fear
You are a drug running through closed veins,
You are the line beyond which I fall up
And in flight, I will wear wings with you,
And over the abyss I will soar like a bat
You tied my thoughts, stole my flesh,
Drank the blood, you give an unthinkable high
And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,
Begins to break my heart without a dose ...
Author's Note
Thank you so much Poetspeak for letting me use your amazing artwork.
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Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 00:56am
When I loan a painting to poet to enhance their words you better know that I believe in their prowess 100 percent. Makes me look good too lol 😆
Fine write
Blood Makes me shiver
Make mine a double
BIG BLOODY LIKE
Fine write
Blood Makes me shiver
Make mine a double
BIG BLOODY LIKE
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 2:57pm
Thank you so much for the support and believing in me. :)
Absolutely it does. :p
Ah, the shiver as the nails make trails on the back.
And a bite to the shoulder...
You know you are doing something so right. ;)
Make it a double indeed.
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Love the BIG BLOODY LIKE.
Absolutely it does. :p
Ah, the shiver as the nails make trails on the back.
And a bite to the shoulder...
You know you are doing something so right. ;)
Make it a double indeed.
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Love the BIG BLOODY LIKE.
Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 1:09am
Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 2:58pm
Two awesomes, I am so stoked. Thank you so much Ron!
I will happily take the Love and light, reflecting back so brightly for you.
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I will happily take the Love and light, reflecting back so brightly for you.
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Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 1:17am
Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 3:07pm
And what a passionate bite it is Francisco, the taste of blood comes in so many flavors. Keeping on. :)
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
21st May 2022 00:46am
Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
21st May 2022 2:06pm
Like Honey Pepper Vodka, sweet but very spicy... ;) Really it tastes like whatever your heart desires... So many different flavors to choose from.
Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
22nd May 2022 1:47am
Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 3:15am
Hi Kristina
Love this line.
And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,
It is all amazing but that line is a powerhouse!!
Thanks for posting this bloody drink. hehehe
Love this line.
And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,
It is all amazing but that line is a powerhouse!!
Thanks for posting this bloody drink. hehehe
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 3:31pm
Oh how the hurricane of emotions and feelings always circle around us. I love seeing your beautiful smile. :) And I appreciate your thoughts so much.
It's so lovely to share a bloody drink with you. ;) 🥂
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It's so lovely to share a bloody drink with you. ;) 🥂
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Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 4:03am
Dear K,
There’s something chillingly sexy and mesmerizing about vampires. I remember being in love with a guy when I was in college that this write made me think of. He had a pasty look which wasn’t my usual type but…he sure did bring the ruckus 😉. Terrific write and excellent choice of PS paintings.
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There’s something chillingly sexy and mesmerizing about vampires. I remember being in love with a guy when I was in college that this write made me think of. He had a pasty look which wasn’t my usual type but…he sure did bring the ruckus 😉. Terrific write and excellent choice of PS paintings.
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 4:10pm
That chilling sexiness and mesmerizing look seduces me every time and gets me in big trouble. :) And the darkness always finds me and draws me in. Oh boy! I can imagine the ruckus that you caused. lol I love that! Thank you so much for your thoughts, you have definitely brought on a smile. 😉
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Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 4:54am
Love is an addiction. And lover is a drug. Both make the love world full of joy. Very nice writing.
Love
Ks
Love
Ks
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 4:15pm
You represent that relationship so perfectly. The intensity of emotions and the need for love is absolute. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and Love. :)
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
20th May 2022 8:33pm
Dear K,
You are a loving beast with an adventure to express and share our wildest feelings unhesitatingly. I know I have a woman who would ask me to kiss and give her hicks on her neck and boobs. Sometimes, she would ask me to drop warm wax on her body which really made her horny, lustful, and sexually charged. I believe you are the same being as I. If you like we can discuss and share our ideas in our personal mail.
Love,
KS.
You are a loving beast with an adventure to express and share our wildest feelings unhesitatingly. I know I have a woman who would ask me to kiss and give her hicks on her neck and boobs. Sometimes, she would ask me to drop warm wax on her body which really made her horny, lustful, and sexually charged. I believe you are the same being as I. If you like we can discuss and share our ideas in our personal mail.
Love,
KS.
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Re. Drink my blood... Again...
21st May 2022 9:52am
Like, Adelphina, I found this line quite potent:
[And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,]...
To me this indicates something like
a state of hyper awareness amidst inputs of chaos...
This line as well:
[And over the abyss I will soar like a bat]...
Such a cool image...
[I will wear wings with you]...
I sometimes think of the nature of wings...
How it is the reunification of duality... (amongst other insights)
But yes... Your application=Real cool.
Each stanza in this piece has such an exquisite movement,
bursting with oblique & linear energies...
A cool combination...
And the title... :)))
[And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,]...
To me this indicates something like
a state of hyper awareness amidst inputs of chaos...
This line as well:
[And over the abyss I will soar like a bat]...
Such a cool image...
[I will wear wings with you]...
I sometimes think of the nature of wings...
How it is the reunification of duality... (amongst other insights)
But yes... Your application=Real cool.
Each stanza in this piece has such an exquisite movement,
bursting with oblique & linear energies...
A cool combination...
And the title... :)))
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
21st May 2022 3:26pm
You read me well. That is certainly one of my thoughts behind this line. I was also thinking of how a storm of intense physical 'activities' on the body can silence the mind. :) Sometimes we must find calm within the chaos. To fly gives you such a spectacular view of the world. Taking in everything and allowing you to oppose that gravity which holds you in place, that strong desire to challenge or break the rules... It makes me so happy you could feel an exquisite movement and the bursting energies that come from my mind.
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Re. Drink my blood... Again...
22nd May 2022 4:19pm
So yeah, I'm at the tail end of the line. (Damn coffee, I had to pee).
But my accolades are no less as enthusiastic as all the above. It's always awesome to read about the peaks achieved, the euphoria. Obviously including the physical ones. Who can't relate to that? Even if we can't describe it as well as you did.
Even in envy, it's pretty awesome for the kite-tail as well the kite.
Good stuff, chaos.
But my accolades are no less as enthusiastic as all the above. It's always awesome to read about the peaks achieved, the euphoria. Obviously including the physical ones. Who can't relate to that? Even if we can't describe it as well as you did.
Even in envy, it's pretty awesome for the kite-tail as well the kite.
Good stuff, chaos.
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
22nd May 2022 4:47pm
It's never to late to get into the tail end. lol (I hope it was a big relief, time for a cup of me. ;) )
I adore the enthusiasm my dear Styx. Always climbing to the peaks, an expedition in search of that Euphoria... To feel ones body completely, to share it, and test the limits of the extreme. I am glad you can relate. :) I am so happy you could relate to me so well. I can feel the wind blowing me about as I ascend into chaos. It's always an adventure to fly this kite. ;)
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I adore the enthusiasm my dear Styx. Always climbing to the peaks, an expedition in search of that Euphoria... To feel ones body completely, to share it, and test the limits of the extreme. I am glad you can relate. :) I am so happy you could relate to me so well. I can feel the wind blowing me about as I ascend into chaos. It's always an adventure to fly this kite. ;)
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Re. Drink my blood... Again...
8th Jun 2022 2:51pm
Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
8th Jun 2022 3:16pm
Hey there ZZ I am so happy you liked it. It can be so fun to get a little bloody, to taste passion so intense you cannot resist biting.
before * passing the bong * :p 🩸🩸🩸
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before * passing the bong * :p 🩸🩸🩸
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Re. Drink my blood... Again...
28th Jun 2022 3:51am
Damn, this was fire, straight up.
And to add Poet's visual piece also gives it a dimensional representation of words and strokes.
Amazing stuff Kristina.
And to add Poet's visual piece also gives it a dimensional representation of words and strokes.
Amazing stuff Kristina.
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
28th Jun 2022 1:14pm
You know how much I love catching stuff on fire Wally. lol I have been called a little arsonist. :p And I do love art, it's great when you can put it to words or vice versa. Representing strokes is always fun and gets the paint and blood flowing. Made me think of sitting there as a nude model for a painting making it impossible to paint on the canvas because you need to paint in the body for real. That's just how my mind works I guess. :p 🩸🩸🩸
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
7th Oct 2022 2:34pm
Ah, my dear Ted. There are so many erotic elements. ;) A passionate addiction can be to so many things. One of the very few poems I have written that is more specific geared towards a meaning of drugs. Quite a subject to cover. There are so many different substances, many illegal, many legal... Some are not substances at all like sex. But we can crave them so strongly, stronger than any substance so often. They get into our blood and stay there forever... as we seek the next fix always. I am so happy you found it well written. As usual it has many meanings. Thanks so much for looking back and reminding of this one.
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Re: Re. Drink my blood... Again...
7th Oct 2022 3:45pm
Read all of them, wow! That's truly an incredible compliment, thank you! I think love is worth the risk but perhaps I will change my opinion in the future who knows. It leaves scars but it leaves an impression that lasts for a life time also. That impression can be the most beautiful thing in the world. No drug could ever approach that. In regards to the art, I suppose now you have said a lot. But often people think they see something and so often they only see what they want to see.