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Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
I maneuver quietly
through sparse bluish light
wearily navigating
a body's pulsating thrums,
whilst bold indomitable prowess
whispers sweet, my name
Trembling in anticipation,
sluggish thoughts
slowly tear away
the last mental cobwebs
spun from night's long frenzy
Robust revelry
clamors in organic ovation
encircling senses, alive
Natural enticements beckon
honing this, a marquee'd awakening
Caresses waft— teasing perfect
lost blissfully, savoring rich earthiness
whole body electrification
firestarts individual synapses
O' dance heady
upon this grateful tongue!
Caffeined courage travels
vein, artery,
brain and heart
liquid strengthening
stimulates my deepest epicenter
Potential pools solidly, undaunted
Breathing, beating,
becoming a better me—
with
every
sip
of my dear coffee.
Author's Note
Another ode added to an ongoing collection of, that pay deep tribute to the nectar of the Gods.
☕-💙
©Blu2022
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©Blu2022
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Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 10:34am
Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 10:42am
I splurge and usually get Whole Food's organic breakfast blend but I truly love Dunkin Donuts coffee, which I drink as a guilty pleasure.... Nom Nom Nom.... But yes yes, I know you were just being rhetorical... Haha 😂 😉
Thanks for giving me the opportunity to 'coffee talk!' lol.
Much obliged for the generous list add and your lovely visit, C!
Glad you liked it ;)
🌹 - ☕
xo
B
Thanks for giving me the opportunity to 'coffee talk!' lol.
Much obliged for the generous list add and your lovely visit, C!
Glad you liked it ;)
🌹 - ☕
xo
B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 10:37am
Got to love a cup of Joe lol
Great ode to the cup of life sorce beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Great ode to the cup of life sorce beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 10:44am
Mmmm.... It's true, there's nothing like it! I'm glad you enjoyed.
Thank you for coming to share in my deep love thereof. Much obliged, Ron!!
🌹 - 💙
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Thank you for coming to share in my deep love thereof. Much obliged, Ron!!
🌹 - 💙
☕
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15th Apr 2022 10:58am
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 4:39pm
Ohh R!!
Your thoughtful and kind conclusions /feedback have me smiling from ear to ear!! Thank you for seeing and feeling all that I hoped to be able to convey. I've penned several "love poems" dedicated to my sheer adore of Java, which has been long and dedicated; the topic never seems to lose it's appeal or fervor!!
I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed reading-💙
Much obliged, dear lady!
🌹 - B
x
Your thoughtful and kind conclusions /feedback have me smiling from ear to ear!! Thank you for seeing and feeling all that I hoped to be able to convey. I've penned several "love poems" dedicated to my sheer adore of Java, which has been long and dedicated; the topic never seems to lose it's appeal or fervor!!
I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed reading-💙
Much obliged, dear lady!
🌹 - B
x
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15th Apr 2022 12:27pm
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 4:51pm
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, dear Jay.
It's this deep enjoyment of something seemingly simple that really impacts me and gets my blood pumping. I have been coffee fascinated /hooked for such a long time, that now, it's just my way of life.... Lol... I am delighted you can relate and can see the beauty and devotion within these words!!
Thanks for the generous list add and for taking the time to leave me your considerate thoughts.
It's always a pleasure-✨
🌹-☕
B
It's this deep enjoyment of something seemingly simple that really impacts me and gets my blood pumping. I have been coffee fascinated /hooked for such a long time, that now, it's just my way of life.... Lol... I am delighted you can relate and can see the beauty and devotion within these words!!
Thanks for the generous list add and for taking the time to leave me your considerate thoughts.
It's always a pleasure-✨
🌹-☕
B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 3:59pm
I really do miss coffee. Such a lovely drink.
This was a treat for my mid-morning. Well done, Blue!
This was a treat for my mid-morning. Well done, Blue!
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 4:46pm
I feel for you, dear Daisy!! I deeply curse that dreaded covid side effect and truly hope that one day, your taste /smell capacities return to allow you to savor coffee's (true) delicious nature, once again!
I'm stoked that you enjoyed feasting upon this little poem.... Thank you so much for stopping by and for leaving me your thoughts!
🌹-☕
-B
I'm stoked that you enjoyed feasting upon this little poem.... Thank you so much for stopping by and for leaving me your thoughts!
🌹-☕
-B
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15th Apr 2022 4:39pm
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
Hmmm... In my very biased opinion, you're totally missing out!!! Hahaha... I too, enjoy the hell out of green tea, though!!... Lol.
Even though you're not a fan, I very much like that the various smells of coffee bring back poignant memories for you .... and viscerally so!! It's such a powerful and bold presence... Lol
I "cheers" you, for at least liking the smell! Ha!!
*🍵* tink *☕*
Much obliged for the kind words and list add, Tim!
🌹 - B
Even though you're not a fan, I very much like that the various smells of coffee bring back poignant memories for you .... and viscerally so!! It's such a powerful and bold presence... Lol
I "cheers" you, for at least liking the smell! Ha!!
*🍵* tink *☕*
Much obliged for the kind words and list add, Tim!
🌹 - B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 5:10pm
I didn't start drinking coffee until I was 50. I always loved the aroma, and loved coffee ice cream, but for some reason my story to myself was that I didn't like coffee- and I obviously believed that for a long time. Then one day at work I was falling asleep. I poured a cup of strong black coffee and never looked back.
I've read silly little poems about coffee, but never one as elegant and beautiful as yours. Awesome!
I've read silly little poems about coffee, but never one as elegant and beautiful as yours. Awesome!
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
Hey there, Pd :)
I'm glad you've fallen into our deeply dark bold cabal!! (Mwahahahaha..) Welcome!!
(I'll be sure to teach you the secret handshake at a later time!)
Your visit is a welcomed joy and I'm beyond delighted that you found a bit of beauty within my overly caffeined 'coffee ode.' Being openly and admittedly addicted to it's charms, makes my ongoing poem dedications easier and easier... Lmao...
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts-💙
Much love and warmest regards
🌹 - B
I'm glad you've fallen into our deeply dark bold cabal!! (Mwahahahaha..) Welcome!!
(I'll be sure to teach you the secret handshake at a later time!)
Your visit is a welcomed joy and I'm beyond delighted that you found a bit of beauty within my overly caffeined 'coffee ode.' Being openly and admittedly addicted to it's charms, makes my ongoing poem dedications easier and easier... Lmao...
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts-💙
Much love and warmest regards
🌹 - B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 6:56pm
So is Juan Valdez giving you orgasmic bliss, LOL.
Coffee is your orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
Coffee is your orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
17th Apr 2022 5:35pm
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
15th Apr 2022 7:31pm
i have always maintained that the nectar of the Goddesses and Gods is
LIBATION
libations (plural noun)
a drink poured out as an offering to a deity:
synonyms:
liquid offering · offering · tribute · dedication · oblation · sacrifice
Maybe it's just me and my twisted vocabulary, eh?
LIBATION
libations (plural noun)
a drink poured out as an offering to a deity:
synonyms:
liquid offering · offering · tribute · dedication · oblation · sacrifice
Maybe it's just me and my twisted vocabulary, eh?
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
Calling coffee "The nectar of the Gods" is just my own way of expressing my deep longstanding love, adoration and reverence for that beverage ...In my opinion, coffee can absolutely be a libation (because I honor it so!) as well as alcohol or anything else one deems just as worthy as an offering to a particular diety...
Yes, Libation is a term ... Usually means an alcoholic based beverage....
No, it's not you or your vocabulary ... Lol... I totally gotcha!!👍🏻
🌹 - 💙
-B
x
Yes, Libation is a term ... Usually means an alcoholic based beverage....
No, it's not you or your vocabulary ... Lol... I totally gotcha!!👍🏻
🌹 - 💙
-B
x
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
16th Apr 2022 4:07am
hello beautiful Blue this is so seductive
you know I know it's about coffee
but my mind took me to another level
I imagined you were speaking of the Gods as men
and then I imagined the earthiness being part of there imparted essence to you
kind of in a beautiful and sexy way...
I love this 💕
you know I know it's about coffee
but my mind took me to another level
I imagined you were speaking of the Gods as men
and then I imagined the earthiness being part of there imparted essence to you
kind of in a beautiful and sexy way...
I love this 💕
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
17th Apr 2022 5:39pm
Ohhh how I love where your mind went with this piece, Brenda... Absolutely gorgeous thought process of epic proportions!! Thank you for sharing that with me, it's feel so accomplished and utterly inspired that I could spark such terrifically visceral imagery / emotions. What a wonderful treat you've given me.... Thank you bunches dear lady.
Have a brilliant and beautiful day today!
🌹 - 💙
Xoxo - B
Have a brilliant and beautiful day today!
🌹 - 💙
Xoxo - B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
16th Apr 2022 6:59pm
I read this to my collection of coffee cups. And the coffee maker said that this was simply steaming! Lol. (I agreed)
I envy your ability to use more quality pieces in your word-crafts. I read sometimes and get left in wonderment how I know the same language, yet not know how to create bigger things with it. You use it all.
I write like a garage band. You're a symphony of words. Consistently.
Don't stop.
I envy your ability to use more quality pieces in your word-crafts. I read sometimes and get left in wonderment how I know the same language, yet not know how to create bigger things with it. You use it all.
I write like a garage band. You're a symphony of words. Consistently.
Don't stop.
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
Thanks for the motivation and push to continue forward, S. It's much appreciated.
Your own style and word choices become a whole painted picture fully created in one's mind. You story tell within a poem's space of conveyance... To me, that's incredible... Full stop.
A rare talent, indeed
I'm deeply grateful to your coffee cups... As we seem to be on the same steamy wavelength!! Please pass along my deepest regards... ;)
Much obliged, for your eyes upon my page /poem. Your visits are always bated breath, awaited.
🌹 - 💙
B
Your own style and word choices become a whole painted picture fully created in one's mind. You story tell within a poem's space of conveyance... To me, that's incredible... Full stop.
A rare talent, indeed
I'm deeply grateful to your coffee cups... As we seem to be on the same steamy wavelength!! Please pass along my deepest regards... ;)
Much obliged, for your eyes upon my page /poem. Your visits are always bated breath, awaited.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
17th Apr 2022 7:08pm
Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
17th Apr 2022 7:13pm
☕ - Cheers, KP
Thank you for your visit and for leaving me such kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading.
Have a lovely Sunday
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for your visit and for leaving me such kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading.
Have a lovely Sunday
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
Watching you dance after sipping some coffee would be a joy!! : )
As usual, your words make the common act of drinking coffee dance in our minds; and savour oh a delicious sip. Sip of the coffee or the poet or both?
☕💃😘
As usual, your words make the common act of drinking coffee dance in our minds; and savour oh a delicious sip. Sip of the coffee or the poet or both?
☕💃😘
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
Your lovely comments make me want to spin and twirl, indeed!
Who's to say you can't (and definitely should!) savor both!! Mmmm...yummy 😋
Love seeing you, my dear
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-B
Who's to say you can't (and definitely should!) savor both!! Mmmm...yummy 😋
Love seeing you, my dear
🌹 - ☕ - 💙
-B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
20th Apr 2022 3:08am
wow this was awesome -
a very powerful internalisation of the senses,
I think skillfully straddling the edge between caffeine and other pleasures
a very powerful internalisation of the senses,
I think skillfully straddling the edge between caffeine and other pleasures
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
21st Apr 2022 4:33pm
Blurring the lines between my love of coffee and sheer obsession was /is totally intentional and I adore that you saw and felt what I tried to do, my friend.
Your thoughtful remarks are deeply appreciated and I'm delighted that you took the time to leave me your personal takeaway.... It means a lot to me.
Much obliged-
🌹-💙
B
Your thoughtful remarks are deeply appreciated and I'm delighted that you took the time to leave me your personal takeaway.... It means a lot to me.
Much obliged-
🌹-💙
B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
13th Jun 2022 7:58pm
Oh that caffeine never tasted (or better yet sounded) so good.
Excellent spill Blue. It's enticing and very alluring in all forms.
Excellent spill Blue. It's enticing and very alluring in all forms.
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Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
13th Jun 2022 9:07pm
Much appreciated Walter.
It's often the lifeblood that gets me through the day!!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me
🌹 - B
It's often the lifeblood that gets me through the day!!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me
🌹 - B
Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
20th Sep 2022 6:10am
Re: Re. Dancing upon the delicate light of daybreak
20th Sep 2022 6:11am
I am coffee connoisseur and have many coffee odes... lol... It's probably one of my favorite things to write about... lol.
Thanks!
🌹-☕
Appreciate the read.
Thanks!
🌹-☕
Appreciate the read.