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"Here, kitty kitty"
Cleaning out the back of my closet
I found an old friend
buried deep
among forgotten recesses
Blindly discarded
behind a fluffy feather boa
and some black and white striped
knee high socks,
it's there—
tucked cleverly between red furry handcuffs
and some leopard print something or other
(ok ok, it's called a position pal... Google it)
where rapture resurfaces
in remembered flashpoints
Cutely cat-shaped,
with a handle of strong curling tail
Soft pink on one side
leather 'justice' on the other
Memories of ardent meowing cries
cat-calling in all out heat
the verve is static electric
Oh pussy paddle extraordinaire!
My mouth reflexively waters
as I hold it, once again
Mmmm... just the feel of it
The perfect weight
causes my skin to tighten,
inflicting salient effects
upon such sensitive flesh
Renewing a deep sense
of ravenous need
An instant flashback
turns monumental pent up desire
into welcomed madness
Remembering
that jolt
of pleasurable pain
smacking against alabaster greed
is a recalled wonder of euphoria
that builds
crack
after penetrating
crack
Pulling hard my reigns
being directed in absolute
by fistfuls of raven hair
a masterfully corralling
of tangled dense fury
is how it floods back
uncovering what's been buried
for far too long
-I'm there... it's almost tangible-
Inhales and exhales
rise and spill
from steaming mouths
riding the pain of every paddle
ecstasy builds,
climbing a summit towards release
begging on hands and knees
Memories start to cloud reality
lost adrift heady mouthfuls of fingers
my own flavour and his sweet tongue
are spiked notes of sweat and pain
His direction is my drug
high on unconditional obeying
ass burning
tears falling
the paddle
and that
crack
the paddle
the
crack
composure is almost lost
summit in sight
I scream
and scream
in sheer disobedience
bad bad kitty.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 12th Apr 2022
| Edited 22nd Jun 2022
Author's Note
Sometimes it's so good to reunite with old friends..... ;)
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Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 00:32am
Don't deliver me from evil. Drag me right into the deep end.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
Understood, bk!
I know I have had those moments, too.
You are a courageous force...
Oh do I love that about you!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, bk.
I'm a sponge, soaking you in, always!
🌹-💙-🧽
-B
xo
I know I have had those moments, too.
You are a courageous force...
Oh do I love that about you!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, bk.
I'm a sponge, soaking you in, always!
🌹-💙-🧽
-B
xo
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 00:39am
A PURRRRRFECT spanking tool
Awesome. Made me giggle
Love and light sweetie
Ron x
Awesome. Made me giggle
Love and light sweetie
Ron x
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 2:52am
Lol... I told you that your poem had inspired a bit of fetishistic naughtiness!!
Loved that I could make you laugh, my friend 😁
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add! - 💋
🌹 - B
Loved that I could make you laugh, my friend 😁
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add! - 💋
🌹 - B
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 00:43am
I'm here if you need me to spank you, LOL. You a unique person with a naughty side. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
I do like to find my own distinctive niche!
Lol...
Thank you for stopping by, Francisco
You're always a smile maker!
🌹
Lol...
Thank you for stopping by, Francisco
You're always a smile maker!
🌹
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
I love, absolutely love your writing style. You have the most uncanny ability to build image upon image upon image until they're bursting out of the page. To be honest I've only ever seen this type of display of image building from one other DU poet...
In this piece the #confessional element starts to lure itself early, while the narrator is still digging through a past life in the cupboard and in a nonchalant way takes stock of items from a very personal history... it's masterful really because that hooks one in to the read in almost daunting expectation.
There comes a time in life (I think) where what we believed to be the private daring on the taboo is well, just part of who we are and what makes us.
I loved how you built the rhythm and flow to the write towards the end... almost a climax to cresendo and well it's a very relevant technique on this poem.
The closing is epic!
This is raw, personal and human and that I feel is what makes exceptional poetry!
Thank you for this. It was special being invited on the journey!
Enjoy it ;)
Al
In this piece the #confessional element starts to lure itself early, while the narrator is still digging through a past life in the cupboard and in a nonchalant way takes stock of items from a very personal history... it's masterful really because that hooks one in to the read in almost daunting expectation.
There comes a time in life (I think) where what we believed to be the private daring on the taboo is well, just part of who we are and what makes us.
I loved how you built the rhythm and flow to the write towards the end... almost a climax to cresendo and well it's a very relevant technique on this poem.
The closing is epic!
This is raw, personal and human and that I feel is what makes exceptional poetry!
Thank you for this. It was special being invited on the journey!
Enjoy it ;)
Al
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
Wow, Al!
Your in depth comments leave me beside myself with gratefulness.
Thank you-🌹
I have to admit that I am completely curious about the other poet I remind you of but if that's a nonstarter, I get it... No worries. I remain humbled and full of pride, having that information shared with me.
Hopefully that image building worked out like I visualized in my mind or how it sounded while reading aloud!! It felt good and I think that emanates a bit...
I often rewrite and tweak my poems, days or even weeks later, so your detailed insight leaves me with your viscerally clear POV, which greatly aids in that endeavor.... How cool, eh!! Yesss! 😎
I hope it's ok with you that your visits, comment communications and your wealth of experience here on DUP have become a valuable and coveted asset to me. Allowing a great opportunity to view things from a perspective all new and excitingly unique. It's part of the joy that DU can randomly highlight, imo. What a wonderful treat that I plan to reciprocate as best as possible 🙆🏻♀️
I adore you bringing the blue skies... I fully bask in them.
Much love and warmth your way... ✨
🌹 - B
x
Your in depth comments leave me beside myself with gratefulness.
Thank you-🌹
I have to admit that I am completely curious about the other poet I remind you of but if that's a nonstarter, I get it... No worries. I remain humbled and full of pride, having that information shared with me.
Hopefully that image building worked out like I visualized in my mind or how it sounded while reading aloud!! It felt good and I think that emanates a bit...
I often rewrite and tweak my poems, days or even weeks later, so your detailed insight leaves me with your viscerally clear POV, which greatly aids in that endeavor.... How cool, eh!! Yesss! 😎
I hope it's ok with you that your visits, comment communications and your wealth of experience here on DUP have become a valuable and coveted asset to me. Allowing a great opportunity to view things from a perspective all new and excitingly unique. It's part of the joy that DU can randomly highlight, imo. What a wonderful treat that I plan to reciprocate as best as possible 🙆🏻♀️
I adore you bringing the blue skies... I fully bask in them.
Much love and warmth your way... ✨
🌹 - B
x
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 1:33am
Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 2:22am
Hi there, L
I'm delighted you felt the stimuli! *wink
Thank you for stopping by and for leaving me your thoughts.
🌹 - B.
I'm delighted you felt the stimuli! *wink
Thank you for stopping by and for leaving me your thoughts.
🌹 - B.
Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 2:21am
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 2:37am
made me smile
aaaaaaaaaand remember the days before old age and vanilla nights
thank You for the visuals
aaaaaaaaaand remember the days before old age and vanilla nights
thank You for the visuals
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 6:00am
You're very welcome, dear Tallen. ;)
I'm stoked that you enjoyed my various delicious flavors!... Lol
It means a lot to me that you stopped by to say so.
Hope you are doing well!
I've been enjoying your NaPo entries and wish you continued success in posting!! 👍🏻
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm stoked that you enjoyed my various delicious flavors!... Lol
It means a lot to me that you stopped by to say so.
Hope you are doing well!
I've been enjoying your NaPo entries and wish you continued success in posting!! 👍🏻
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 3:09am
Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 4:02am
Hahaha... LOVE that poem-ply, C
You're so cool 😎
Thank you for being here with me!
🌹 - 💙
B
You're so cool 😎
Thank you for being here with me!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 4:13am
Good gracious! Lol.
Ya know ironically I just said something about saving practically any animal. But now I'm thinking of the game "kill the kitty". -Not literally!
............ where did I put that catnip.
This poem needs a warning label. "Steam will be hot upon opening"
Whew!
Ya know ironically I just said something about saving practically any animal. But now I'm thinking of the game "kill the kitty". -Not literally!
............ where did I put that catnip.
This poem needs a warning label. "Steam will be hot upon opening"
Whew!
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
Mmmm...
What a tantalizing comment, Styx
My motor purrrrs it's hum in all the various places that desperately resonate...
Sometimes the fury of all my passion needs a potent (and hopefully poetical) release... this being one of those moments.
They say honesty IS the best policy
*wink
Your visits make for smiles, welcomed chills and a wonderful sense of my own heady sexiness. (I say that with complete humility!)
Thanks for being so so lovely,
🌹 - 💙
B
What a tantalizing comment, Styx
My motor purrrrs it's hum in all the various places that desperately resonate...
Sometimes the fury of all my passion needs a potent (and hopefully poetical) release... this being one of those moments.
They say honesty IS the best policy
*wink
Your visits make for smiles, welcomed chills and a wonderful sense of my own heady sexiness. (I say that with complete humility!)
Thanks for being so so lovely,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 7:24am
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
12th Apr 2022 8:17am
A high fidelity melody of memories and allurings, this begs the questions of how long has it been and how long will it be?
It seems somewhere between time capsule treasure trove and fully outfitted home dungeon, clearly somebody has been Bogarting and sandbagging.
A hard point, a few lengths of hand twisted jute, a ball gag, and a blind fold shy, perhaps only a St. Andrew's, a sleeve of bamboo, and nitrite gloves might cover the court, and you'd be queen for the evening.
I might have to sleep in the blacklight room tonight just to get any shut eye.
Thanks for adjusting the lights; it's always vanilla to the front door.
It seems somewhere between time capsule treasure trove and fully outfitted home dungeon, clearly somebody has been Bogarting and sandbagging.
A hard point, a few lengths of hand twisted jute, a ball gag, and a blind fold shy, perhaps only a St. Andrew's, a sleeve of bamboo, and nitrite gloves might cover the court, and you'd be queen for the evening.
I might have to sleep in the blacklight room tonight just to get any shut eye.
Thanks for adjusting the lights; it's always vanilla to the front door.
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
13th Apr 2022 3:15am
I think that the questions raised are totally valid and completely warranted inquiries .... ;)
I'm still (respectfully) giggling at your profound and Masterful decision making conclusions, as to what would make for a deliciously spot on cornucopia of delights and a crowning of queen for the evening!!
I just howled @ the blackight comment.. 😂 😂
You're very welcome, dear RT.
Hopefully I entertained but kept some air of mystery... *wink
🌹B
I'm still (respectfully) giggling at your profound and Masterful decision making conclusions, as to what would make for a deliciously spot on cornucopia of delights and a crowning of queen for the evening!!
I just howled @ the blackight comment.. 😂 😂
You're very welcome, dear RT.
Hopefully I entertained but kept some air of mystery... *wink
🌹B
Re: Re.
13th Apr 2022 5:45am
I do try to be as factual as possible...
However, the blacklight room is verbatim....bamboo hardpoints....for back relief, mainly. Now winking.
However, the blacklight room is verbatim....bamboo hardpoints....for back relief, mainly. Now winking.
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Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
13th Apr 2022 8:17am
Dear Miss Blu
I couldnt help but read numerous pieces and it is absolute artwork!
When are you going to publish this material in books??
You have wordsmithed in ways I couldn't have imagined,
and in terms of the 14th Century,
I bend the knee, lift up my sword and resign myself to your tutelage.
-CIU
XXX
I couldnt help but read numerous pieces and it is absolute artwork!
When are you going to publish this material in books??
You have wordsmithed in ways I couldn't have imagined,
and in terms of the 14th Century,
I bend the knee, lift up my sword and resign myself to your tutelage.
-CIU
XXX
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
13th Apr 2022 11:30pm
Dear new friend,
You're a lovely cool breeze on a steamy day, blowing so kind and considerately... I am humbled, filled with appreciation
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, it makes for tremendous motivation and provides valuable insight and guidance. I am so thrilled you enjoyed reading and found pleasure within my various poems.
I am grateful for every single generous reading list add, my dear 🙏
I hope hope to continue our mutual exchanges and look forward to reading more of your lovely writes as well
Warm regards and again, vast appreciation
🌹 - 💙
B
You're a lovely cool breeze on a steamy day, blowing so kind and considerately... I am humbled, filled with appreciation
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, it makes for tremendous motivation and provides valuable insight and guidance. I am so thrilled you enjoyed reading and found pleasure within my various poems.
I am grateful for every single generous reading list add, my dear 🙏
I hope hope to continue our mutual exchanges and look forward to reading more of your lovely writes as well
Warm regards and again, vast appreciation
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re.
14th Apr 2022 6:06am
that is my absolute pleasure
I am so glad I have found a literary friend and support in you
I was quite apprehensive about joining DU, bit like stepping out into the fog, uncertain of the ground and what I will bump into in unfamiliar terrain...
but you have opened things up, given me leverage and light to my dark corner of the world
I am so glad I have found a literary friend and support in you
I was quite apprehensive about joining DU, bit like stepping out into the fog, uncertain of the ground and what I will bump into in unfamiliar terrain...
but you have opened things up, given me leverage and light to my dark corner of the world
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Re: Re.
14th Apr 2022 6:31am
Awww... Lovely sentiments! It's my deep pleasure—and I look forward to reading and learning much more in the days ahead.
Btw, there's such wonderful cornucopia of poets here on DUP that you'll find just as open and welcoming. It's my favorite past time, searching around and reading the different work's that are published and if inspired, leaving my feedback
It's helped me immensely with my own work, so I like to pay that forward....
Thanks again for your visit and the kind words. I'm glad stoked that you are feeling more comfortable here!
Good luck to you, my friend!
Regards,
🌹 - B
Btw, there's such wonderful cornucopia of poets here on DUP that you'll find just as open and welcoming. It's my favorite past time, searching around and reading the different work's that are published and if inspired, leaving my feedback
It's helped me immensely with my own work, so I like to pay that forward....
Thanks again for your visit and the kind words. I'm glad stoked that you are feeling more comfortable here!
Good luck to you, my friend!
Regards,
🌹 - B
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
13th Apr 2022 1:02pm
Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
13th Apr 2022 11:21pm
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
13th Apr 2022 11:20pm
Thanks for the visit, Tim
I appreciate the list add you taking the time.
🌹-B
I appreciate the list add you taking the time.
🌹-B
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
15th Apr 2022 2:31am
Although not necessary, it's most definitely a desire, yes.
;)
Thanks so much for stopping by!!
🌹 - B
;)
Thanks so much for stopping by!!
🌹 - B
Re: Re.
Ok, I'll just wait by the bus stop then in case you need me? Just trying to be funny really with my English sense of humour even though I'm living in Wales now, lol. Well. hell, it's all part of the UK anyway & I'm sure we'd have a laugh after a few cocktails & maybe even before, lol. Honestly, I can be such a flirt. I even believe in my own bullshit sometimes, haha, I'm harmless really, deep down, like Davy Jones. ;-)
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Re: Re.
15th Apr 2022 6:11am
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
15th Apr 2022 5:59am
love the depths of your journey so far Blu !
tantalizingly tempting and so full of purring promises ....
much more please. we love to be soaked...
thanks galore and much love too
to you and your creative charms beautiful belle blu :)
tantalizingly tempting and so full of purring promises ....
much more please. we love to be soaked...
thanks galore and much love too
to you and your creative charms beautiful belle blu :)
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
15th Apr 2022 9:51am
Hey there, t_b_m ;)
I thank you for visiting and for the kind words.
It's when my innate darker nature needs to sometimes grab a little bit of sunlight, that these type of erotic pieces get woven into being.... I'm delighted you found some joy or pleasure, within...it was poured from a true passion.
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
I thank you for visiting and for the kind words.
It's when my innate darker nature needs to sometimes grab a little bit of sunlight, that these type of erotic pieces get woven into being.... I'm delighted you found some joy or pleasure, within...it was poured from a true passion.
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
8th Jun 2022 4:15pm
Holy red furry handcuffs and nipple clamps Batman, we've peeked into Catwoman's closet!
And we're all smiling.
And we're all smiling.
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
8th Jun 2022 4:18pm
hahaha 😂 😂
I hope that smile is a bit mischievous too, Walter!!
😸😼🙀😈
Thanks for the RL add and the giggle!
Glad you liked it
🌹 - B
I hope that smile is a bit mischievous too, Walter!!
😸😼🙀😈
Thanks for the RL add and the giggle!
Glad you liked it
🌹 - B
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
22nd Jun 2022 9:20am
Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
22nd Jun 2022 9:41am
*wink
Takes one to know one. ;)
🌹-xo
I hope you've been well, Sweet lady.
It's nice to see you 🦋
Takes one to know one. ;)
🌹-xo
I hope you've been well, Sweet lady.
It's nice to see you 🦋
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
11th Jul 2022 5:35am
This the greatest compliment. I wish u would have wrote more, because, this was one exciting write. Each line has suspense to die for. Even if there was lack of understanding, u keep reading it will open up your own. Good Got Damn Great Job! 🍑🌷🍓🍭🍇🧐🦞💯🔥
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
11th Jul 2022 11:03am
Thanks, Birchel.
Glad you found pleasure here and enjoyed reading!!
It was a fun poem to pen and a terrific flashback for me!
Love all the emojis... lol!!
I always deeply appreciate your visits and your thoughtfulness!
🌹-B
**✿❀❀✿**
Glad you found pleasure here and enjoyed reading!!
It was a fun poem to pen and a terrific flashback for me!
Love all the emojis... lol!!
I always deeply appreciate your visits and your thoughtfulness!
🌹-B
**✿❀❀✿**
Re: Re.
11th Jul 2022 2:16pm
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
5th Aug 2022 4:46am
This is erotic absinthe for the soul. The story is intoxicatingly gorgeously on fire. I loved the session you illustrated with sexual wonder. Each level you took in this power exchange memory left me breathless and filled with the heat of a thousand suns. And that closing was the ultimate erotic high. Powerful as a tsunami. No one does it like you my friend.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
Yesss!!
I absolutely 100% love that description, my darling!
This, quirky little poem is one of my favorite pieces... ever. It's all true, inspired from my deep incredibly erotic recesses.... Mwahahahaha.... ;p
The fact that you felt such intoxicating power emanating, is such a valuable and beautiful compliment. I take your words and reactions to such heart and cherish them dearly.
I hope you're as excited to visit and read me again as I am to have your thoughts to devour.
You're such a gem..... I'm truly fortunate
🌹-💙
Susan
I absolutely 100% love that description, my darling!
This, quirky little poem is one of my favorite pieces... ever. It's all true, inspired from my deep incredibly erotic recesses.... Mwahahahaha.... ;p
The fact that you felt such intoxicating power emanating, is such a valuable and beautiful compliment. I take your words and reactions to such heart and cherish them dearly.
I hope you're as excited to visit and read me again as I am to have your thoughts to devour.
You're such a gem..... I'm truly fortunate
🌹-💙
Susan
Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
2nd Nov 2022 10:39am
The traces of naughty are always present in your poems
Your way of telling your poems is so amazing
I am fascinated day by day by your talent and the spontaneity of your poems
big like and hug
Your way of telling your poems is so amazing
I am fascinated day by day by your talent and the spontaneity of your poems
big like and hug
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Re: Re. "Here, kitty kitty"
2nd Nov 2022 12:41pm
Some are naughty, sure... It's part of who I am. It's innate. Plus, I trsjjyyenjoy expressing that side sometimes. It's not every piece of writing it's when the mood strikes.
Thanks for finding a bit of fascination here.
🌹💙
B
Thanks for finding a bit of fascination here.
🌹💙
B