Aching the language— The art of oration

Hi Blue,how are you?

You've crafted a powerfully evocative/seductive piece here.
The sultry,roll off the tongue,penetrative words,
Provoke Raw,compelling emotions.
Succinct,2 some respect,yet taking you on a amazing and interesting journey.
Where words,use words,2 illuminate words!
The use of "concrete", visually works really well.
You are a pure Orator!
So Distinguishable is your Work Of Art.
Fantastic!  
I'd love 2 hear this red out loud. Or can that be done?DUH!!
Disregard that question. I'm listening 2 it now.  
A sensual voice 2 boot!  
Go Girl!!  
X

Hey there, Wired6
I'm hanging in there, today-thanks for asking!

Sometimes there's a poem that's just itching to be born a spoken word piece— hence, this little idea here! I deeply appreciate your own thoughtful kind words - it's truly wonderful to know that you could feel the emphasis on my love of words, which I was hoping would emanate.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, it means a lot, my friend 🙏🏻

Warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
B

You are more than welcome Blue.
Take Care. X

Ok now I'm in love, this my beautiful girl is absolutely awesome. You have truly smashed this piece out of the park. Truly a amazing write and read
Just brilliant
Love and light
Ron xx

Dearest Ron... 🤭 hahaha.... Now, you say!!??? I guess this was the 'straw' that pushed you over the ledge, huh?!?... lol... I am sooo very glad to read that you think this was a home run, fancying it like you have. It means a lot to me to feel those encouragements, keeping me motivated and inspired!

Thank you, so deeply!
🌹 - 💙
B

Quite the offering...it flowed as if a flower blooming from bud to beyond

'Tis the purity of my sheer love of words, our mutal muse; whose wondrous beauty never ceases to amaze and awe, and that I bow in continual reverence....Oh, how I do love trying to string together different, fresh ways of showing my cavernous appreciation.

I am beyond delighted that you felt the birth of this particular blossoming-🙏🏻
It's always a pleasure, Tim. Thanks for the RL add and the lovely comments.
🌹 - 💙

Dripping sexuality...love a good drip...😊

Mmm... likewise ;)
Thanks for listening and leaving your thoughts, L
Glad you enjoyed!
🌹 - 💙
B

Lady, BCPoet hit it square on the head with the word drip only we would say dripping. We like these oral pieces by the poetess of this site, we see it as a craft within itself. You have definitely mastered this side of things also Lady. Totally tight piece

*all smiles*
So glad you enjoyed my little oration, Me. I get in the groove sometimes when recording, so I'm not always sure if something is working. I'm stoked that the headiness and palpable truth I felt myself was successfully transferred to the page / spoken word, allowing you to feel it too.  

Thanks for the lovely visit and for leaving me your thoughtful remarks and insights.  

I'm deeply appreciative for them.
🌹 - 💙
B

A mouthful of slidable syllables....read well...

I'm glad it read well.... I hoped it would 'listen' even better....

Always appreciate your thoughts.  

🌹-B

There's definitely an art to mastering it well! ;p
Har Har....

Glad you enjoy a little oration!
Much obliged for the generous RL add, my friend 🙏🏻
Lovely seeing you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B

You're so funny.... I meant your one sentence reply to your own questions asked poem!! Silly 😋 .... hahaha...
I'm aok with however long you reply here, my lovely friend.... haha.  

(Expanding your thoughts here was super kind and really meaningful, though, I appreciate it... and giggle heartily!)

Damn... Why delete your comments!?! .... that's pretty brutal, relic.

I am confused by this and saddened you felt that need.


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I'm totally belly laughing at this one!!! 🤣😂😅🤭
You are extremely kind and totally cool as hell for adding these comments back onto my page. It was an unexpected surprise that I really find incredibly awesome and so telling of your terrific character.

No, not stalker-ish at all ... I get a little bit of a high reading the impact and the provocative thoughts that my writing /spoken word, evoked. I'd be lying if I'd said otherwise. I have an ingrained (perhaps pent up) deeply erotic nature, so it feels like such an enormous pleasurable release to write some of that emotion out and even more so, when I (hopefully) capture an alluring spoken word performance... I think that need to release and to feel fully satisfied, gets translated into the recording... Maybe?... Just my thoughts....

I giggled again, reading your desire to listen for a second round.... Hahaha... Definitely no pants, then, I bet....heh heh heh 😈 😏

I'm honored you enjoyed this as much as your kind words conveyed and like I had hoped many would, too. I'm beyond humbled by this lovely addition of your thoughts, insights and rewarding supportive encouragements.

You made my night, my friend 🙏
Much love and appreciation sent your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

Sexuality is very hot.  You need chocolate syrup all over you,  LOL.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

I will absolutely keep on writing and yes, being proud of one's own sexuality is total amazing!

Much obliged, Francisco!
🌹 -

My Princess, I am so awed by your poem and voice. WOW! A++++ Can imagine sitting by candle light and listening to you...don't stop. Hugs and kisses, (O)

Dearest Oral!
It's always a pleasure to see your return and an even bigger delight to read your lovely and thoughtful remarks upon my page. What a wonderfully tender and romantic scene, you've set my imagination aglow!!
I'll never stop, my dear

Much love,
🌹-💙
B

Thanks for being amazing you and needed inspiration. Hugs and kisses to my Princess (O)

Hi B:)

This is mighty sensual. I loved listening to your voice as well but I also love
the creative side of the words on the page. (Hope that makes sense).
Such a great flow. Like a sensual waterfall of words just cascading in no hurry at all.
Meant to be absorbed. Just totally awesome!!!

Hey there, beautiful lady!!
I am extremely lucky and beyond delighted that you felt the slow deliberate nature of my spoken word and the allure, enticing!! That's like getting a gold star 🌟 to me!! I have been practicing forever to slow myself down and to emotionally attach to the piece I'm reading without sounding hokey or just plain silly. A long time member here, who is a master at SW and a total mentor, told me that he uses the "William Shatner" ( Captain Kirk) school of acting philosophy, when he records himself.... haha... Slow and intentional. That advice always stuck with me (and totally made my nerd 🤓 girl inner self giggle 🤭) and I've really tried to hone it. Long story longer, (hahaha) that's why I deeply appreciate you alluding to it not feeling hurried!! It's refreshing and soul reaffirming that someone just easily gets it.  

I am so humbly grateful you felt exactly what I was trying to convey. It's so wonderful!!

All my warmest appreciation and deep thanks,
🌹 - 💙  
B

Wow...  Just...  Wow.

-💙

Clever girl - another masterpiece.

Love your voice. 🎶🎼

Thanks, Leo ;)
I'm so glad you enjoyed listening


🌹 - 💙
B

I had to let this one wash over me a few times... poetry is by its nature a spoken art... this is an exemplary example of why... everything about this is exquisite... the perfect marriage of your excellent poeting with your perfect delivery... perfectly matched with cadence and line breaks... excellent tour de force dear B...

Ohhh my...  
I too, had to take in this dream-like comment; letting your kind, constructive words marinate and take hold.  
 
My heart and soul are forever branded and willingly held captive by the delicious beauty that is poetry. In big part because of the way you and a few others have influenced, guided and shown me how I simply can't live without it. Your helpful and supportive ways of improving my understanding and teaching me to feel the experience of my own writing, were and are paramount in my character building and growth as a writer. I have been trying my best to follow the example you beautifully set, in a way that feels genuine and authentic to me. Without my very good fortune of befriending you and the other valuable poets and poetess' that I cherish and hold so dear here, on DUP, I'd have never had the wherewithal or confidence to write or record anything remotely close to what this piece reflects. I know that to be a complete and utter truth.  
So I bow 🙇🏻‍♀️ down in reverence, my dear lady—thanking you from the bottom of my heart. I am awed by your feedback/sort of love letter (as I view it.. lol) that you left upon my page.  This is what pure joy feels like!!...  
I'm totally beaming.  
 
A thousand thank you's, LilD  
Much love and limitless respect,  
🌹-B  
 

Whoa! Is it hot in here? Oh my god, I need a cold shower!

Great write!

Awwww (blushes)
You are too too much... hahahaha 😂
All my deepest thanks and appreciation, dear poet.

I'm tickled that you found the steamy lines to your liking... 🌹-🚿

Much love -
B

There are no words to express the beauty of this poem.
❣️🙏🏼

Wow! Tremendously high praise, KP
I'm humbled and sincerely grateful for the kind words -🙏🏻
 Plus, I'm ridiculously ecstatic that you, especially, enjoyed listening/reading like you alluded.

Day. made.
🌹 - 💙
B

So this is what an oralgasm is like?  I want one!  

To be honest, if a woman spoke like this, with these words, to me, she'd not make it to the finish.  My mouth would be all over hers, sucking in her syllables.  There's absolutely no way I'd be able to just chill while she tongue-fucks my ear with such oration.  
Some things bring out the masculinity and the passion far more than tits and ass.  For me, it's way more mental.  We all have bodies. Whoopie do.  But we all damn sure ain't wired the same.  And 99.99 percent of the time, i am all about their eyes and expressions and how their lips move when they talk and smile.  Because that is the allure.  How they project their own sensuality and intrigues.
 So with that in mind, as a guy, I'm letting you know that yes, your words are superb. But adding the sounds of seduction is a whole new level of intoxication.  

Stop this insanity!  Or at least add a warning label beforehand, that heart rates will reach maximum levels.  
Fuck it, i ain't scared.  I don't tap out, bring it!  Lol.

You've inadvertently given me such an amazingly beautiful start to my day today, after reading these incredibly freaking awesome comments, S.

I hope losing your oralgasm virginity was all it was cracked up to be... heh heh heh.... 😈... I tease!

Ohhh myyy.... "Sucking in syllables" purrrrr... That definitely sounds like it could possibly be the title of my next poem?!... Mmmm... Ohh an imagination runs wild! The brain is definitely the biggest sex organ, I'm so with you, there. I notice first (and get highly aroused by) intelligence, quick wit and the way someone carries themselves. It's my Achilles heel, if charm and intellect project this particular confidence that is like my catnip, that to me, oozes of everything that my own mind and body have been made to specifically respond to. It's hard to explain, I've only encountered it a few times in my life and... Holy fucking hell.... It's like a key starting the ignition.... MY ignition!... lol....  

I literally laughed out loud, at "I ain't scared... I don't tap out, bring it!!"..... haha 😂  
Fuck yeah!! That's exactly the attitude!! Fearlessly forging ahead, that is entirely enticing!!!

A thousand thank you's for such badass, honest and hot af feedback... ;p

I'm truly lucky in receiving your exquisite sentiments but even luckier knowing that I found a kindred spirit, indeed  
🌹 - 💙  
xo
—B

O dear God Blue
I just listened to your voice reciting that poem.
For a moment in time I was on another plane of reality.
Reading your poem, listening to your voice purring in my head, I was in heaven
What an orator you are, devine voice swept me away.
I could listen to you all day 😊

Amazing poem, amazing vocals,
Love n peace my friend
💜💜💜💙🙏🙏

I appreciate such lovely feedback and the generousity of your kind compliments, WM  
I'm so very glad you enjoyed listening /reading.

Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.

Regards,
🌹 - B
x

Thanks for reading.

-B

Even better the 5th read. Wow! You, Lady Blue, are beyond Amazing. (O)

Awww.... You're truly lovely, O
I absolutely love that you continue to listen and feel connected to my little spoken word piece.

Thank you for sharing that with me, it made my morning.
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
—B

You are more than welcome! Hugs and peace, xoxox (O)

Dearest, Lady Blue
OMG❣ OMG❣ OMG❣ I am in sensually charged awe and love with this poem. And, oh my, oh my. how your voice renders me helpless to sweet and beautifully naughty urges 😈💞 This masterpiece is replete with scintillating (or sintillating) innuendo and double entendre. The overwhelming titillation had me flush-faced, and tingling in all the right places.
This passage is so cleverly constructed,
"An iota
of sleaze
mixes with
pure
 Pollyanna    
please"
And, mi querida conejita 🐻💞🐰, this passage caused my mercury to rise and burst my hedonic thermometer,
"especially when
inflecting
that particular
favorite'd
fucking
swear"
I apologize, profusely, for not reading/listening to this sooner. I saw it late one night and thought I would give myself time to luxuriate in your words and then life intervened 😒
Bravissima! I am so impressed by your dominance of words and your elegant style.  My week is made 🙏🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Hey there, BB ;)
I'm blazing red (blushing) with all your enormously thoughtful, kind and alluringly enticing remarks. My heart overflows in appreciation, my dear poet!

I giggle at 'sintillating'.... 😈💙😈💙😈

To know that I could inspire tingles and flushing of any body part means that my oration was indeed all that I hoped and wanted it to be!! How truly wonderful you think so.... I do so love leaving a lasting impression  ;)))

You have brought sunshine and true inner warmth to my day, today.... I'm glad I was able to do the same! 🔥💞👅👄🔥

Much love, dear BB!!
🌹-🐻-🐰-💙
xo
B

The voice is perfect to the erotic, sensual and demanding words. You are an artist, you write, you voice, you express your passion in many ways. I shall always crave to hug and hold you tight until...

Love,

KS

Your kindness is epic and deeply appreciated, KS.
Thanks for the lovely comments and for leaving me your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed reading /listening and found some connection within.

That's wonderful and meaningful to me,
much appreciated!!
🌹 - B
x

Ms Blue.
   Anything I say In description of this performance. And it is a performance.  Has either been echoed more beautifully each time someone wrote it. Or will fall failingly short of any attempt to do it the justice it deserves. I read it without. And then with your voice and I had the sensation of falling down your words almost like an incantation, a spell or a recipe for wellbeing, life, love and lust. All at once. The peaceful confidence in your voice is spellbinding. Literally. You have that siren sound and melting words that I would follow onto the rocks. I’ve said enough but to listen to it again.  Thank you.

Hi there, Twitch Sway :)
What a beautifully unexpected visit!! I am so taken aback by your considerately observant kind words. There was absolutely nothing that fell short, after reading what your conclusions were of my penned work / spoken word. I'm beyond delighted and completely humbled that you felt such an enormous response like this the one you've described. I aim to keep a connection via my recorded 'performance' (yes, you were correct... it is a performance, indeed!) to whoever might be listening. My hope is that it ultimately ends up feeling like I'm talking directly to one person, bringing myself and the reader that much closer to understanding my intended penned feelings.

It is I who should be thanking you in abundance, for taking the time to explore my writing and for leaving me with your incredibly generous and heartfelt thoughts.... It really meant a lot to me.

Such a true pleasure, ✨
please don't hesitate to return! You're always welcome here...

Warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
B

Beautiful poem Amazing performance! BRAVO 👏🏾

Why, thank you kind sir... ;)
It brings me much joy that you think so.

What a lovely pleasure seeing you return! 🦋  
Hopefully I can look forward to seeing more of you..... Don't be a stranger ;)  

🌹 - 💙
xo

Wow that was just (while picking up the skittles off the floor) amazing beyond words. Your readings really heighten the senses reading and listening to his masterful piece.

Hahaha... What a truly wonderful image you delight me with, W! Yesss!!! I do so love leaving a deep, lasting and hopefully memorable effect. Spoken word used to terrify me, so I really practiced, in hopes of improving. I'm stoked that you felt the experience was heightened with my voice's addition.... Purrrrr worthy and an awesome awesome compliment. Much thanks, my friend
🌹 - 💙
B

Sensually alive with poetic prowess of a priestess of the English language. Sometimes words can be even more sensually than pure carnality and this poem shows me the way to a paradise of the mind. There is a genuine passion here that is an encounter of spoken concupiscence as enthralling as its twin lust. The oration of love burns steady and strong through the aural g-spot that tingles through the magic of timbre. And with each sound wave comes a holy mantra of love.

XoXo
John