Butterfly

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add, sultry lady🦋
It means a lot to me and excites, as well ...-x


My smile is Cheshire cat-like
*wink
🌹 - B

So you are my sexy butterfly, that is very hot.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Awww.... LtDansLegs... You're a lovely, kind soul!
Thank you so much the wonderful word.... I am beyond thankful that you've returned and have taken the time to leave me your thoughts.

Glad you enjoyed -
🌹 - B
x

in the surety
of surrender
lays the strongest
bond of trust
knowning that
pain given is for love
each soulful plea
to be set free
like birdsong
a floating butterfly
feline panther
at his side

Ahhhh such a deeply poignant poetic reply is truly moving and a beautiful way to compliment, C.  
I feel these your comments.... and since they were inspired after reading my poem, which really gives me the biggest high...I covet them even more deeply.  

Thank you for sharing your talents with me, dear C
It means very much and I appreciate you on a level that only you reside as well as each word you've left me with.

In endless gratitude,
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
B

I simply love your use of language...in itself a compelling reason to savour every syllable....words are fun!  Love it (very sexy too). L

Awww... thank you so much for those kind sentiments, Lawrence. Words are totally fun and to me, can be truly sensual and erotic. I am so delighted you found some sexiness while reading... THAT is in and of itself, a turn on! *wink

Always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
x

Sensuous 🌹a true Blue write. 🌹

Really kind and uplifting words, Grace. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave me your thoughts...

Your visits truly uplift me and always leave me smiling. I cherish them and you.
🌹 - 💙
B

Absolutely beautiful, sensual, delicate truly a great write gorgeous
Love  and light
Ron xx

Hey there, dearest Knight!
Your comments warm me through and through and I thank you deeply for sharing them with me. I adore you and love that you found some pleasure while reading. That's an exciting and amazing notion.

All my warmest gratitude and love from across the pond...
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
xoxo

Wow this piece of liquid gold has me speechless for words like a beautiful butterfly watching it in flight 🙏🦋 you smash it 👊🦋

Ooooo!! How is so love love love your delicious comments, Stoney. Thank you deeply for such wonderfully kind feedback . I am beaming and truly delighted that you found joy and worth within my words.... I humbly thank you, dear shaman!

You're a true light that shines beautifully bright 🔆

Much love and respect - 💙
🌹 - B
xo

Respect and support and love dearest poetess 🙏🤗👊your shaman😉

Exhilarating, taken, right to the edge

Hey there, Tim.
It gives my tummy butterflies (no pun intended.. lol) to take you right to the edge.... So very deliciously precarious.... *wink  

Thank you for stopping by and for sharing your thoughts... - 🌹
I deeply appreciate it.  
 - B
x

Dearest, Lady Blue❣🌹 I love the butterfly pupa to mature butterfly imagery. The sensuality of the piece is thrilling. My first twinge came with  
"hum their aching why's
from each one of her
tied closed
yet displayed inner thighs"  
What a glorious vision.
Bravissima, voluptuous goddess, BB...you stir me in such delicious ways 🐻💞🐰

Ohh how my mind does turn over and over those ways in which I hope to stir and entice deep emotion! It's truly what makes my mouth water with delicious possibilities.... Yum. *wink.
I am beyond beaming, BB— thank you. It means so much to me that you've found such pleasure in reading and dreamy pondering.... I adore your thoughtfulness with words, your consideration and insight; so much so that I take them them to heart, with full sincerity..

You're always such a joy to get feedback from and I am so happy to see you on my page 🦋
I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving holiday and here's to a great holiday season ahead

Much love and endless appreciation,
🌹 - B
🐰💞🐻
x

Wow! Powerful.

Hi Elenore :)
Your kind sentiments are very touching and I feel fortunate you've taken the time to leave them with me. I'm all smiles you felt a semblance of power.
Thank you - 🙏🏻

Always a pleasure, dear lady
🌹 - B

The more I read  your poetry
, the more I fall for  ??????
😍🌷🎄😍

New EROTIC poetry Coming soon
?????

Ohhh yes yes! fall, dear Trome!
I adore it and love that you love the erotic intensity! Yes, always more coming.... soon!
🌹 - 💙
Much love sent your way, my Latin lovely
-B

Thank you, T
I appreciate the visit, the list add and your nice comments.

Very much obliged,
🌹 - B

I've got one for that , too! .... *wink
Thanks for sharing your deliciously astute comments, Tim
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
x

I already posted it awhile ago.... It's a senryú... lol. No worries though, I doubt it'll be the last.

There's always the need that builds...
*wink

Wow!
Susan, the imagery from this highly expressive and rhythmical erotic art is magical.
Your erotic poetry brilliantly stimulates the body and mind with such power and grace.
This write truly leaves an ''indelible mark'' in the pages of DUP.
I swear I found myself so incredibly immersed in this sensual poem.
I will read this over and over again... cannot get enough !!!
I am completely held ''Captive'' by your artfully arousing Poetry.
The Climax is pure metaphoric brilliance!

...on a lighter note, any mention of ropes or being bound with ropes literally stirs something up in the pit of my 'stomach'-
a belly full of BUTTERFLIES & Excitement,
''I shit you KNOT'' (thinking of ''Rope''), lol.
Seriously it really does!..haha
Erotic Masterpiece!!!

I am still belly laughing @ "I shit you knot!'... hahahaha 😂 😂 😂....
You're avatar is a sight for sore eyes, Ron. It's absolutely lovely to see you 🦋!  

I am so deeply delighted that you feel similarly about this poem' s theme as I do. It's often a fine line that people walk as to what they might consider erotic vs what another might not. Your comments and thoughtful insights have me beaming from my very depths, all the way to my Cheshire cat-like smile. No one lays out their reasonings and summation better than you do. I am blown away and various shades of red by yours, and I humbly thank you. There's such an arousal factor and definitely a pull towards the idea of rope, skin and pure desire pulsing... that I know I relate to and answer the call for..

Seems we both get the butterflies 🦋 for reasons that not many people would expect... How exciting is that!?!?

Thank you again, for being so generous and open... You're incredible, as always!  

Much love and sexy smiles your way...
🌹-💙
B

The truth, in what I felt was well written erotica, has been completely negated. Now, after reading your poem, is where my education truly begins.

Wow... what a declaration!!
I can only say that I am grateful and thankful for such a wonderful kindness, shown by your feedback, the generous list add and taking the time to visit.

In warm kindness,
🌹 - B

I don’t know what to say other than I freaking love this piece blue

That's pure music to my ears and more than enough, Swagger.  
Thank you.  
- x

(I always get a yummy thrill from seeing you on my page! It's got to be my innate eagerness to please, sparked by the knowledge of your nature....I just can't help myself ... lol)
...(blushes)

All my warmest appreciation,  
🌹 - 💙  

That's some graceful erotica Blu.  Always a pleasure to read how you place and charge your words.

LJ

Hey there, Lj :)
Your comments really make me feel like I've been able to properly convey what I've sincerely hoped and tried desperately, to do. Penning my innermost intentions are something that I continually struggle with; so it means a lot to me to read that you enjoyed the placement and the effects of my little poem. I am so grateful for that, dear lady... 🙏🏻

I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving holiday and here's to a great holiday season ahead....
Cheers! 🥂 and warmest regards,

🌹 - 💙
—B

Love me some shibari art poetry but your goes beyond all expectation. Cheese us that was good.
Thoroughly enjoyed that butterfly metaphor/emotion.
Outstanding work.

Ooooo.... I feel the warmth, Walter....  How I do so love trying to bring some smoldering intensity!!  I'm fully basking in your glorious comments with deep appreciation, exuding. So ecstatic that you now need some crackers for that cheese! 🧀.... lol 😂...

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, for the generous list add and all your awesome kindness.
🌹 - 💙
B

Hi
I love your imagery, It is a beautiful read, love the butterfly image. I have used the same in some of my poems in the past, I'm not sure if I'll ever post them online.
As I was reading it, I found that little green monster poking me,, I too wanted those ropes wrapped tightly around me.
❤️✍️👏👏

Hello :)
It's lovely to meet you. Your kind words are very touching and I delight in your solidarity of being 'bound' in/with potential, as well as with the air of true freedom that comes with consensual submission.... Ohhh the possibilities! *wink

I hope that you will look around DUP, read a ton and ultimately decide to post some of your personal writing, even if you're scared or worried.
I more than empathize and sympathize with that trepidation, However, let me assure you that you're without a doubt, in right place to find the BEST in support and encouragement, if you do decide to take the publishing leap.  Think about it!

No pressure. –good luck and welcome to DUP!
I hope you enjoy your time here. Thank you, again!

In warm kindness,
🌹 - B

Thank you B 😌
I will take a look around as you say, a lot of mine is dark and heavy, some of if is light, vanilla even.
Maybe it can hone in on a home here within these vaulted walls.

Ahhh...I see someone knows her Shibari ! :-)    Engaging poem; enjoyed it!

Ah, my hearts a flutter!
❣️🙏🏼

Mmmm.... I was hoping to maybe get it to skip a beat.... *wink


Thank you so very much, KP
🌹 - 💙
B

well there you go! very nice exploration of desired helplessness - and i really enjoyed the treatment of the afterglow. nice balance.

Thanks, P.
I appreciate your thoughtful and terrific insight. It's from your perspective and particular viewpoint that my admiration for you and your comments, fully blooms. You comprehension of that balance that not too many others would catch.... Little things like that... reinforces my gratitude.

Sorry I missed these comments until now... they really speak to me.

🌹 - B

Thanks for braving this one then!! I often find myself pulled to darker writing, it's certainly one of my top favorites. Fortunately not all of my writing is erotic or explicit, I tend to use 'Observational' as my go to category placement because I hate pigeon holing myself if I don't have to or if it doesn't specifically warrant it, like erotica does.

Thank you for taking the time and the leap of faith.. lol.. I am extremely appreciative and glad you could find a some beauty within.

Nice meeting you and warmest regards,
🌹 - B

Truly have enjoyed the journey through your mind in your words.

Love the bondage to freed butterfly who spreads her wings wide to capture the beauty within

I'm delighted you found the beauty as well as the passion during your exploration... there's oh so much more...

Thank you again
I'll be sure to read your work!
🌹

Looking forward to it :)

The perfect chrysalis poem is rendered in exquisite sensuality of submission. The beauty of those marks and bound bliss makes for heaven on earth. To find that one man whom you can trust and who fills your body and soul with the paradise of surrender to his masculinity is a wonder for the supplicant. And when you bow down to this deity you found your desire requited fully and masterfully through the ultimate subspace of his trustworthy arms.

XoXo
John

Your understanding is a sweet sighed breath of relished relief.... Thank you for taking the time, my dear poet. I am so grateful and thrilled you have had the opportunity to speak your wonderfully intuitive insights. I am so appreciative 🙏


I'm incredibly moved.... thank you.
🌹 💙
xoxo
-Susan