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Re. From Pleasure to Pain
19th Nov 2021 1:48am
This whole piece packs a punch.
From the picture to the 3 lines
Love the picture.
I don't know what it is but she looks so innocent.
Then I read the poem and wow!!
From the picture to the 3 lines
Love the picture.
I don't know what it is but she looks so innocent.
Then I read the poem and wow!!
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Re: Re. From Pleasure to Pain
19th Nov 2021 2:09am
Re. From Pleasure to Pain
19th Nov 2021 2:33am
Re. From Pleasure to Pain
19th Nov 2021 2:37am
You always knock it out of the park, Nikki.
This was a rush of “awe” followed by “Oh!”, and you managed it all in 3.1 seconds.
Fucking love it.
This was a rush of “awe” followed by “Oh!”, and you managed it all in 3.1 seconds.
Fucking love it.
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Re: Re. From Pleasure to Pain
19th Nov 2021 2:54am
Re. From Pleasure to Pain
19th Nov 2021 4:03am
Re. From Pleasure to Pain
19th Nov 2021 11:04am
Dear N,
Righteous! There is never a wasted word in your poems. Teach me how to do that. Pleeeeaaaasssseeee….Brilliant write. H🌷
Righteous! There is never a wasted word in your poems. Teach me how to do that. Pleeeeaaaasssseeee….Brilliant write. H🌷
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Re: Re. From Pleasure to Pain
19th Nov 2021 3:03pm
Re. From Pleasure to Pain
22nd Nov 2021 4:45am
Re. From Pleasure to Pain
23rd Nov 2021 11:41pm
Re. From Pleasure to Pain
2nd Jan 2022 6:45am
Hi Nikki,
It reminds me a friend. She would come to me. She would play with me. She would get pleasure out of it. In end she confesses she doesn't love me, Next she would appear at my door. I have yet to figure out why she was like that?
Love,
KS
It reminds me a friend. She would come to me. She would play with me. She would get pleasure out of it. In end she confesses she doesn't love me, Next she would appear at my door. I have yet to figure out why she was like that?
Love,
KS
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