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21st Nov 2021 3:15am
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21st Nov 2021 3:41am
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21st Nov 2021 1:16pm
i had a lot of routes while reading this little snippet especially with the line "broken do not attempt to fix" as well as the negative connotation that's often glued to it there's another side that says yes i'm broken, i'm flawed, i'm here and don't try to change me,
the line "intentionally disturbed" i felt that's an extraordinary finishing line by owning yourself as a whole, it also evoked the words "art should comfort the disturbed & disturb the comfortable" while i was reading it,
also the black photo of course upon reading i learnt it's your sweater, i don't know what it is but there's something about the colour black that seems to intimidate people and gets a bad rep too much, its actually one of the most comfortable colours to wear and own (i spend my whole time in black)
it reminded me of how it's better to stand out rather than blending in with the rest of the colour palette for other peoples comfort, it's an unapologetic colour that soaks up heat from the sun and warms our bones
this little snippet certainly did that and it made me smile
thank you for sharing 😊
-ethan
the line "intentionally disturbed" i felt that's an extraordinary finishing line by owning yourself as a whole, it also evoked the words "art should comfort the disturbed & disturb the comfortable" while i was reading it,
also the black photo of course upon reading i learnt it's your sweater, i don't know what it is but there's something about the colour black that seems to intimidate people and gets a bad rep too much, its actually one of the most comfortable colours to wear and own (i spend my whole time in black)
it reminded me of how it's better to stand out rather than blending in with the rest of the colour palette for other peoples comfort, it's an unapologetic colour that soaks up heat from the sun and warms our bones
this little snippet certainly did that and it made me smile
thank you for sharing 😊
-ethan
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21st Nov 2021 2:09pm
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21st Nov 2021 2:49pm
The entire package, down to the #themes is fantastic.
Not all broken things are asking to be fixed. I can seriously dig that.
Not all broken things are asking to be fixed. I can seriously dig that.
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22nd Nov 2021 2:12pm
A witty and somewhat memorable haiku-esque poem. The third line is what gives it something of an original perspective.
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23rd Nov 2021 4:59am
Woah, a fine sassy poetic way of saying,, 'leave me alone, let it be, let me be". It's awesome! Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
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24th Nov 2021 6:34pm