Reverie

Gorgeous

Thank you, very much
🌹 - B

Scouring indignation  
sourcing to a found
of twisted roots  
my paramount of pain
that lay hidden  
creeping and winding
behind sadish eyes  

We like that stanza, you can really lay it down  Lady. Tight work

Awww... I am very grateful for your visit and for your extremely kind words, Me.

I'm all warm smiles, that you felt my words and liked them.

It's always such a terrific feeling to get a 'tight work'..... thank you, my friend 🙏🏻

🌹 - B
x

Another one knocked out the ball park.
Beautiful and brilliant
Go gorgeous great job
Love and light
Ron x

Glad you enjoyed reading, Ron. I deeply appreciate your lovely comments, my friend.... I wasn't sure about publishing this piece, so it's nice to know that you think I hit a home run.... We're always our own worst critics, I suppose.... lol....  

Warm regards,
🌹 - B

Love is in your heart tonight.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

the whispers
of a dream
have an impact
on the heart
so profound
it brings those
needy aches
pangs from
depth of xoul
and beauty
inside the

heart....

your inspirations aee always
a delight to read

Awww.... that comment.....=wow.


I cherish each and every word, C
My deepest, and most profound thanks.

🌹 - 💙
(hugs)
B
xo

This is a pretty read, thoughtfully written, nicely presented, has mystique, dreams are a great subject :)

Hey there, PR :)
I can't thank you enough for for your visit and for leaving me your beautifully kind words. I am happy you enjoyed reading.
You're spot on, daydreams and whimsical musings are definitely a favorite writing topic!!

I hope you are doing well - 🍃

All my warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
B

I like your style.... impressive and continual.


There's a sense or undercurrent of something that piques one's interest...

I often come back again and again.

Wow, that's definitely powerful, thanks for the kindness shown...
🌹 - B

I always enjoy reading your poems dear Blue. I make up my own visions of it. Such a talent.

Ohh wow!!! That's one of the best comments I have received... Thank you so very much for sharing that, Grace ..... it truly elicits such joy for me!!  I am so so glad you enjoyed reading - 💙  

Thinking of you -
🌹 - B

🌹

This is beautiful. Hard not to feel envy at your lovely use of language!
"Every hushed word becomes proselytize sermon deliberate in delivery..." Where does such beauty come from? So wonderful!

Oh, wow! Nizana
I am so blown away by your lovely thoughts! Thank you very much for taking the time to leave them with me...I am truly overjoyed that you found a small sense of beauty here. It's extremely meaningful to me.

All my humble gratitude, lovely lady and please feel free to visit anytime

Warm regards,
🌹 - 💙
B

The dictionary in your head never ceases to amaze me.   What lovely vocabulary, the best to express what is in you. It  makes the  reader's heart  (at least) vibrate a bit...

Ohhh my!! Such moving and in credibly thoughtful comments, Robert. You really know how to say just the right things to a lover of words and avid reader like myself..... they're total catnip! All my thanks and deep appreciation.

I'm overjoyed that you felt the 'vibrations'...

Beaucoup d’amour,
🌹 - 💙
B

I love how palpable this was, like a heart beating with every breath, coming to life.

Outstanding.

Ohhh myyyy.... I adore that... to pieces!!

All my gratitude and warm thanks Walter-🙏🏻
🌹 - B

I was lost
Now am found
Your words have bound me
Found me, thrilled me
I see light and hope
Your diction is my addiction
Somehow you light the fire
My sense of peace
May at last return
To my almost beating heart
Thank you for lighting the way forward

You really bring up a good point, LtDansLegs! I can get that feeling, too... Where I might be bordering on, just a hodgepodge of alphabet soup.. lol... It's something I struggle with, trying to NOT overcomplicate things....I think I'll always be a work in progress, there.

Yeah, my vocabulary is probably 'not usual'... I read a lot.... a whole lot!... I think that definitely adds to it.

I'm so very glad you enjoyed reading and found some worthiness, my friend. I deeply appreciate that as well as all your thoughtful comments.

Lovely seeing you! 🦋
🌹 - B

Read once again: recounted very smoothly. But the ''sadish eyes'' bring images of nasty doings involving monks and nuns in very non-religious togetherness. Some roughness, if i remember correctly.  Perhaps I should go and re-read some of Sade............Kisses, as always, Robert.

Thanks for the reread and your mind's conjuring... lol... It's much appreciated - 🙏


Warmest regards
🌹 - B