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Ransom Note
rAnSoM N⭕️tE
I am holding your heart ⬛️🔲⬛️ rAnSoM 🔲🔲🔲 If you ever want to have 🔳🔳🔳 ReaLfeelings of love again 🔜🔲⬜️🔲♥️🔲⬜️ you will ♏️eet me for dinner 🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳 at 8:00 pm 🕗Ⓜ️aKe no Contact to others🔲☑️🔲Do not let any1️⃣else follow🔲🔲🔲◾️◾️◾️your heart🔳◼️🔳◼️🔲Bring a 🅱️🅰️g filled with unfolded overnℹ️ght clothing 🔳🔳🔳 When Y⭕️U arrive 🔲⬜️🔲⬜️expect to be stri🅿️🅿️Ed of doubts🔳🔲🔳 This is NoN🚫negotiable 🔲🔳◽️🔲You will be taken💯 to an unknown, untrace🆎le location 🔲🔲⬛️⬜️your 🅿️hysical 🅿️leasure so heightened, 🔲▪️◾️◼️you will question ⁉️if you even have a S⭕️ul 🔳🔳🔲🔲you will barely ®️emember your name, 🆓⬛️🔲🔳and if
you comply to these terms 🔳🔳🔳🔳your heart will be returned to you🔲🔲◾️◾️◻️🔲🆎sorbed with a LiFeTime of Love 🆖
I am holding your heart ⬛️🔲⬛️ rAnSoM 🔲🔲🔲 If you ever want to have 🔳🔳🔳 ReaLfeelings of love again 🔜🔲⬜️🔲♥️🔲⬜️ you will ♏️eet me for dinner 🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳 at 8:00 pm 🕗Ⓜ️aKe no Contact to others🔲☑️🔲Do not let any1️⃣else follow🔲🔲🔲◾️◾️◾️your heart🔳◼️🔳◼️🔲Bring a 🅱️🅰️g filled with unfolded overnℹ️ght clothing 🔳🔳🔳 When Y⭕️U arrive 🔲⬜️🔲⬜️expect to be stri🅿️🅿️Ed of doubts🔳🔲🔳 This is NoN🚫negotiable 🔲🔳◽️🔲You will be taken💯 to an unknown, untrace🆎le location 🔲🔲⬛️⬜️your 🅿️hysical 🅿️leasure so heightened, 🔲▪️◾️◼️you will question ⁉️if you even have a S⭕️ul 🔳🔳🔲🔲you will barely ®️emember your name, 🆓⬛️🔲🔳and if
you comply to these terms 🔳🔳🔳🔳your heart will be returned to you🔲🔲◾️◾️◻️🔲🆎sorbed with a LiFeTime of Love 🆖
Published 8th Nov 2021
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8th Nov 2021 4:44pm
8th Nov 2021 4:53pm
8th Nov 2021 5:17pm
I hope its wheelchair accessible lol
What delectable idea,
Great fun write
Love and light
Ron xx
What delectable idea,
Great fun write
Love and light
Ron xx
8th Nov 2021 10:03pm
Fully accessible!
Delectable is always wonderful!
Glad you enjoyed!
Thank you Ron🌹
Delectable is always wonderful!
Glad you enjoyed!
Thank you Ron🌹
8th Nov 2021 6:21pm
8th Nov 2021 10:05pm
Fruity & different. A likeable read. P. S, I should warn you there's a man behind you! 😊
8th Nov 2021 10:08pm
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8th Nov 2021 10:15pm
Okay, I am packed, ready, and on my way over... ;) xo
P.S. I loved the note. very cool.
P.S. I loved the note. very cool.
8th Nov 2021 10:35pm
9th Nov 2021 2:02am
This was like reading fireworks on the 4th!
Love the creativity and the spice - with a smidge of mystery.
Love the creativity and the spice - with a smidge of mystery.
9th Nov 2021 2:55am
Adelphina, nice to meet you!
I love this…Fireworks is an awesome take!
Thank you for reading
NG 🌹
I love this…Fireworks is an awesome take!
Thank you for reading
NG 🌹
9th Nov 2021 3:07am
14th Nov 2021 00:52am
9th Nov 2021 3:51am
This is very clever. The layout is as much fun as the verse. You always look for ways to excite and draw your reader into the world your pen creates. Bravo!
9th Nov 2021 3:54am
I’m so glad you liked the layout, it was fun to create. Your comments are always so thoughtful! Thank you 🌹
10th Nov 2021 5:04am
So fun to read ! This was playful and made me smile…thanks for making my night!
10th Nov 2021 5:06am
11th Nov 2021 8:15pm
My tantric dream, a bit difficult for YWKISA but possible with a spell from you. One single touch, one single kiss you will love me forever. Only l can give you a tantric cervical orgasum, mind-blowing heavenly body orgasums going straight to your heart and mind. You will be in heaven for hours recovering. For the rest of my life in my heart, mind and soul. xx Nyx. Absorbed with a lifetime of love! xx YWKISA 💛💙
11th Nov 2021 8:52pm
I am weak just reading your reply MWKISA 😘 The spell has been cast as has the 2nd bite. 💙💛 Nyx xx
11th Nov 2021 8:48pm
Nyx, double trouble and meanings in this naughty Work of art damn this is so good. I may not remember my name but l know I'm your YWKISA expecting to be stripped of A , every read it draws you in, it' got heart you've always held mine, you will be taken 100 sOul mate. Sorry KristinaX and Adelphina l can't bring you there would be fireworks and l would be on top of the bonfire... love xx YWKISA💛💙💯 YouTube Annie Lennox - l put a Spell On You.. xx Nyx💖
11th Nov 2021 9:01pm
I so appreciate the critique on my poem!
I’m also thrilled you appreciate the art!
Yes stripped of A for sure.
The rest of your comment… Wow lol
Perfect time of the year for a bonfire though!🔥
I’m also thrilled you appreciate the art!
Yes stripped of A for sure.
The rest of your comment… Wow lol
Perfect time of the year for a bonfire though!🔥
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13th Nov 2021 9:25pm
13th Nov 2021 9:44pm
Thank you very much!
I’m thrilled you were into the visual part as well as the poetry!
RL thank you also! 💝
I’m thrilled you were into the visual part as well as the poetry!
RL thank you also! 💝
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14th Nov 2021 00:43am
🔲◼️Th🅰️Nk you! 💯%⬛️
It took me by surprise seeing that line in your comment! At first I thought I didn’t scroll down! Lol. I love you were Entranced! 🆒
Happy you enjoyed! RL, thank you! 💝
It took me by surprise seeing that line in your comment! At first I thought I didn’t scroll down! Lol. I love you were Entranced! 🆒
Happy you enjoyed! RL, thank you! 💝
14th Nov 2021 5:45am
Oh that second orgasmic bite so so naughty into the rush breathing deep to recover orgasmic bliss pc crazy for you Goddess of the Night a big orgasmic love bite back your YWKISA xx Nyx xx You put a spell on me l cast one back with a third love bite perfection T/U.xx💛💙
14th Nov 2021 12:57pm
And so it is done MWKISA
With me, your new life in the night will remain unfettered and finally
you will truly live
Nyx xx
With me, your new life in the night will remain unfettered and finally
you will truly live
Nyx xx
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14th Nov 2021 5:04pm
Damn, I love your comment!
I’m excited you enjoyed this, Ted!
RL, thank you! 💝
I’m excited you enjoyed this, Ted!
RL, thank you! 💝
Anonymous
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14th Nov 2021 7:12pm
I’m experimenting with various styles, but as with painting, I’m drawn to expressionism without limitations. Ted, thank you very much for all your encouragement!
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14th Nov 2021 8:40pm
24th Nov 2021 3:45am
Hello NG,
I love your style and boldness. But it an expression of vivid love, true love, love filled with pleasure and adoration.
Love
KS
I love your style and boldness. But it an expression of vivid love, true love, love filled with pleasure and adoration.
Love
KS
24th Nov 2021 7:52pm
I’m so happy you like my style! Yes, this really is about love, in a playful way. Nice to meet you, Kristopher and thank you! 🌹
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12th Aug 2022 6:23pm
Hi Relic (formerly Tim 😃)
I’m glad to share laughter and I’m so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you very much! 🌹
I’m glad to share laughter and I’m so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you very much! 🌹
12th Aug 2022 6:26pm
Hi Leo,
I agree to keep the authorities out! 😉
So glad you liked this.
Thank you! 🌹
I agree to keep the authorities out! 😉
So glad you liked this.
Thank you! 🌹
1st Oct 2022 11:47pm
This is creative, I think your writing/creative abilities would be at its finest if you would fuck me before you write. It's gets the juices flowing.
2nd Oct 2022 2:25am
