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Banana
The wind is warm, the windows are open,
A violent spring breathes with passion.
We are in the kitchen with appetite,
Different fruits and a sip of wine.
You are sitting opposite, looking greedily,
The table will serve as a chair for me.
I take a banana and eat it clearly,
Slowly peel the skin, it is naked.
Tasty so I take it deeper and deeper,
Sweetness, feeling on my lips.
You still look motionless,
But you are already sitting on knives.
I don't hide my gaze, I bite it,
Taking it in slowly, but very deeply.
I'm playing with a banana, as I play with you,
Your wine wets my lips.
To hell with everything: bananas, pineapples,
I'll drink you in completely with my wine
today on the terrace,
Be fruity with me, wound up!
Better than any fruit is your flesh,
I will be with you lustfully, neatly.
Today there are no inhibitions at all,
Love me both deliciously and perversely ...
A violent spring breathes with passion.
We are in the kitchen with appetite,
Different fruits and a sip of wine.
You are sitting opposite, looking greedily,
The table will serve as a chair for me.
I take a banana and eat it clearly,
Slowly peel the skin, it is naked.
Tasty so I take it deeper and deeper,
Sweetness, feeling on my lips.
You still look motionless,
But you are already sitting on knives.
I don't hide my gaze, I bite it,
Taking it in slowly, but very deeply.
I'm playing with a banana, as I play with you,
Your wine wets my lips.
To hell with everything: bananas, pineapples,
I'll drink you in completely with my wine
today on the terrace,
Be fruity with me, wound up!
Better than any fruit is your flesh,
I will be with you lustfully, neatly.
Today there are no inhibitions at all,
Love me both deliciously and perversely ...
Author's Note
Just having a little fun with one of my favorite fruits. 💋🍌
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I do love putting out the ripe sweetness. Okay, that sounds kind of bad on second thought. I mean I love being sweet and ripe. Never mind. :p Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. 💋🍌💖(fun and sensual is what I was going for)
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28th Sep 2021 10:14pm
All lovers love the games that lead up tooooo, well even role playing, hurry up and wait, or the endurance of the various arts seduction. The patience needed, sitting on knives, waiting to peel your intended as a banana. To have their juices dripping from your lips as the juiciest of of fruits, with a nice chunk of scotch bonnet under your tongues to add pain to the pleasure. You are a naughty one Lil X, we're trying to be a good Me. Tight work Lady
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28th Sep 2021 10:30pm
The naughty ones are the most fun, right? Don't worry about being good for me, what you say underground stays underground. Then again I see your point. lol Teasing and flirting is essential isn't it... Really gets the juices flowing along with all the games. Just divine... Boy that wait can feel like a long time but once you peel the intended banana then... ;) Scotch bonnet - ouch you are being bad adding some pain is... I am trying to be good too. I love getting a tight work. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! 💋🍌💖
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28th Sep 2021 10:44pm
This is different from some of your other poems--
The syntax is less fractured, riven--
The meter's more...pedestrian, regular, I guess--
There's a bit of aa rhyming--
Nice image of "sitting on knives" & the image of the woman sitting on a table--
Very strong opening lines:
The wind is warm, the windows are open,
A violent spring breathes with passion.
About fruits--
Full disclosure--I don't eat fruit.
Haven't eaten any fruit in...a long, long time. Can't remember eating a banana, but I know I have.
Many, many years ago, I was speaking with a young woman, from a wealthy family, who was having trouble teaching a writing class. She had alienated her students. They didn't like her. For her part, she didn't particularly care for them.
She had confided her problems to a mutual acquaintance, a man named Jon Anderson--a respected teacher and poet. Apparently, Jon had advised her to "do something that makes you feel silly right before class." When she asked him to be more specific, he said, "eat a banana."
I still remember that to this day.
Enjoyed the change-up in tone & style!
The syntax is less fractured, riven--
The meter's more...pedestrian, regular, I guess--
There's a bit of aa rhyming--
Nice image of "sitting on knives" & the image of the woman sitting on a table--
Very strong opening lines:
The wind is warm, the windows are open,
A violent spring breathes with passion.
About fruits--
Full disclosure--I don't eat fruit.
Haven't eaten any fruit in...a long, long time. Can't remember eating a banana, but I know I have.
Many, many years ago, I was speaking with a young woman, from a wealthy family, who was having trouble teaching a writing class. She had alienated her students. They didn't like her. For her part, she didn't particularly care for them.
She had confided her problems to a mutual acquaintance, a man named Jon Anderson--a respected teacher and poet. Apparently, Jon had advised her to "do something that makes you feel silly right before class." When she asked him to be more specific, he said, "eat a banana."
I still remember that to this day.
Enjoyed the change-up in tone & style!
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28th Sep 2021 11:03pm
Hey Mark! Your views are always so interesting and rarely off target. This one is indeed more regular and that's why the formatting is different. I could not target certain words to create other embedded messages because it really only had one message. It's meant to be some light hearted fun. No fruit, wow... I do love tropical fruits so I would have a hard time with that but I also avoid excess sugar so I do not eat a lot of it. I will have to remember the eat a banana trick. Thanks for sharing the story. I am happy you enjoyed the change up in tone and style. I am always changing but I guess you can see that in my writing already. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I really enjoyed your feedback. 💋🍌💖
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28th Sep 2021 11:05pm
Hey BP! I am so happy I could enlighten your views on the noble banana. You made me smile. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 💋🍌💖
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28th Sep 2021 11:31pm
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29th Sep 2021 00:37am
Bananas are great but definitely better with someone. ;) I'm sure he will peel it for you next time NG. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 💋🍌💖
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28th Sep 2021 11:49pm
Bananas give me heartburn
I could live with it with you around
Buying by the bunch
BIG SEXY ROMP
BIG I MEAN BIG LIKE
I could live with it with you around
Buying by the bunch
BIG SEXY ROMP
BIG I MEAN BIG LIKE
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Hey PS! I have never heard of Bananas giving heartburn. :p I thought it was opposite. 'Organic' bananas only. ;) Always have to have a banana around... 💋🍌💖
Love the that you went on this BIG SEXY ROMP with me, and the BL.
Love the that you went on this BIG SEXY ROMP with me, and the BL.
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28th Sep 2021 11:53pm
Go girl, super 🔥, great read. Awesome sexy write
Smashed this one
Love and light
Ron x
Smashed this one
Love and light
Ron x
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29th Sep 2021 00:40am
Hey Ron! Hell yes, I loved smashed it! You definitely know sexy so I am really happy you found it an awesome sexy write. Thank you for reading and giving me your thoughts. Love and light back at ya. 💋🍌💖
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29th Sep 2021 00:33am
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29th Sep 2021 00:41am
Damn right BC! I love honeydew melon. I will definitely take one please... ;) Thank you so much for reading and giving your thoughts to me. 💋🍌💖
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29th Sep 2021 2:14am
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29th Sep 2021 2:36am
Hey Francisco! Always looking to keep things sexy and I do love bananas. ;) Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. 💋🍌💖
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29th Sep 2021 6:16am
Toying with a banana can be a great turn on, nature's sex toy. Seeing the picture and reading got me up.
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29th Sep 2021 11:57am
Hey SS! Good to see you. Indeed, just about anything can be a big turn on if done right. ;) I am all about the ups. Speaking of ups, good morning it's time to get up again. ☕ Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 💋🍌💖
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29th Sep 2021 11:20am
Nice clever write ... so much fun ... know what I am having with my Greek yogurt this morning ... well penned KX ...
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29th Sep 2021 12:02pm
Hey LDF! I am so happy you had fun with me. ;) Two bananas... Greek yogurt is the best, now I want some so bad - going to have to find some with a banana of course. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 💋🍌💖
Re. Banana
29th Sep 2021 12:09pm
creative,
lighthearted,
you expressed in your appeal,
the observations of that yellow peel.
the round about way it makes one feel
encompassing the erotic of a fruit
the wonder of the tease and the fun
the prelude, the evening truly has begun.
fun is that write.
and more even to read.
lighthearted,
you expressed in your appeal,
the observations of that yellow peel.
the round about way it makes one feel
encompassing the erotic of a fruit
the wonder of the tease and the fun
the prelude, the evening truly has begun.
fun is that write.
and more even to read.
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29th Sep 2021 12:32pm
Hey mystic! Thank you so much for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. I love giving you some lighthearted fun to start the day. (or in the evening too) I am really happy you see the appeal of the banana; now if only I could rhyme like you. How dull life would be without teasing and flirting. Thanks again! 💋🍌💖
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29th Sep 2021 1:54pm
Very fun and flirty. I had a huge grin on my face the whole time reading.
Great one Sultry Kristina:)
Great one Sultry Kristina:)
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29th Sep 2021 3:03pm
To see your beautiful smile is the best reward Adelphina. ;) Grinning the whole time definitely has me smiling too. You made my day! Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 💋🍌💖
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29th Sep 2021 6:16pm
You've really learned to be unabashed in your expression, whilst retaining proportion of expression. It's a beautiful thing to see.
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29th Sep 2021 7:24pm
Hey Daniel! I am so thrilled you see growth in my expression; that really means a lot to me! I appreciate it so much. Thank you for reading and giving me your thoughts. 💋🍌💖
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30th Sep 2021 5:05am
People should experience more mornings like this, maybe it could lead to less drama in the world? Pretty awesome Kris.
LJ
LJ
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30th Sep 2021 12:28pm
Hey LJ! I love that, I hope your mornings are filled with happiness ... ;) The world could definitely do with less drama; it is so pervasive online. I am really happy you think it's awesome. :) Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 💋🍌💖
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30th Sep 2021 6:57am
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30th Sep 2021 12:29pm
Hey Harry! it's so good to see you. I am really happy you found it hot and juicy. ;) Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. 💋🍌💖
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19th Oct 2021 2:16am
And that's why potassium is an important supplement in everyone's diet.
Hot erotic write Kristina.
Hot erotic write Kristina.
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19th Oct 2021 1:49pm
Oh yes! and bananas are definitely the best source of potassium. They are so sweet to wrap lips around and suck out every bit of the sweet essence. ;) Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. 💋🍌💖