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Bloom
There’s nothing I’d like more
Than to peel back your delicate petals
One by one
As you open your tender heart to me
As a flower to the blazing sun
Have no fear—
Trouble me with your every tear
And I will hang on to every single drop
As if it were your last, my dear
I want to hear your deepest thoughts
And the parts of you that make you whole
To feel the drum of your beating heart
And see the secrets of your soul
Speak to me the essence of you
Of all the beautiful things you do
Sing me the sweetest of melodies
And the most mournful of elegies too
You were always the type of woman
Who could light up an entire room,
And I’d be blinded by your light…
For a chance to watch you bloom
Than to peel back your delicate petals
One by one
As you open your tender heart to me
As a flower to the blazing sun
Have no fear—
Trouble me with your every tear
And I will hang on to every single drop
As if it were your last, my dear
I want to hear your deepest thoughts
And the parts of you that make you whole
To feel the drum of your beating heart
And see the secrets of your soul
Speak to me the essence of you
Of all the beautiful things you do
Sing me the sweetest of melodies
And the most mournful of elegies too
You were always the type of woman
Who could light up an entire room,
And I’d be blinded by your light…
For a chance to watch you bloom
Author's Note
It's been awhile, but I'm still writing :)
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Re. Bloom
7th Sep 2021 11:24pm
Ahhhh...... Reading you again is like the freshest breath of air, caressing me just right, NB...
Your poem is truly exquisite, from beginning to end. What a wonderful surprise to see you've returned , dear poet 🙏🏻
I am all big smiles and renewed with a sense of hopefulness that I was missing a bit, methinks...
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
Your poem is truly exquisite, from beginning to end. What a wonderful surprise to see you've returned , dear poet 🙏🏻
I am all big smiles and renewed with a sense of hopefulness that I was missing a bit, methinks...
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
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Re. Bloom
yes.. great to see you spilling again
you came back strong too!
missed your feedback and encouraging comments NB
hoping everything is well with you
looking forward to hearing your thoughts :-)
outstanding 🖊!!
OG RESPECT
you came back strong too!
missed your feedback and encouraging comments NB
hoping everything is well with you
looking forward to hearing your thoughts :-)
outstanding 🖊!!
OG RESPECT
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Re. Bloom
7th Sep 2021 11:58pm
Re. Bloom
8th Sep 2021 00:06am
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Anonymous
8th Sep 2021 1:04am
Awe NB…….this beautiful ink was so soothing to read……..I’ve missed your talent and the gentleman you are…….RL for me…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Bloom
8th Sep 2021 2:58am
Dear NB,
“ I want to hear your deepest thoughts” well, get comfortable because this will take a while…
It’s a pleasure and a joy to read this poem. Your eloquence, sincerity and talent have been missed.
As for me trying to “Sing me the sweetest of melodies” only if the screech of nails on a chalk board is your favorite key.
I really don’t have words to define how lovely this poem is. Lucky is the person/muse who had you creating this piece of perfection.
H🌷
“ I want to hear your deepest thoughts” well, get comfortable because this will take a while…
It’s a pleasure and a joy to read this poem. Your eloquence, sincerity and talent have been missed.
As for me trying to “Sing me the sweetest of melodies” only if the screech of nails on a chalk board is your favorite key.
I really don’t have words to define how lovely this poem is. Lucky is the person/muse who had you creating this piece of perfection.
H🌷
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Re. Bloom
8th Sep 2021 4:33am
Re. Bloom
8th Sep 2021 5:54pm
Re. Bloom
8th Sep 2021 8:59pm
This is gorgeous, and you managed to make the metaphor of a flower for a loved one seem new and refreshing. I, too, long for deep relationships, and this could be applied just as well to friendship as to romatic love.
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Re. Bloom
9th Sep 2021 10:59am
This is blooming beautiful! This flowed exquisitely ... So wonderful to have you back NB
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Re. Bloom
13th Sep 2021 6:05am
Good to see you back, NB...I too took some time off. Just a beautiful poem my freind. Bravo!!!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re. Bloom
14th Sep 2021 11:44am
I love the word choice, symbolism, and empathy in this piece. Nice write. Also, very smooth feel I liked as well
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Re. Bloom
14th Sep 2021 5:40pm
Bro! This is beautifully felt. Had me in tears and I am not too ashame to admit it. Good stuff. Keep pushing man
-Charles
-Charles
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Re. Bloom
17th Sep 2021 2:01am
If creativity is a flower bud than how beautiful the bloom when it is set free in the sun of admiration..
Excellent metaphors in this, nice love poem :)
Excellent metaphors in this, nice love poem :)
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Re. Bloom
12th Nov 2021 8:26am
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23rd Nov 2021 5:46am
Wow an awesome charming deeply romantic appreciation of a woman she ought to cherish.
The first tje petal stanza unfolds the muse exquisitely. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
The first tje petal stanza unfolds the muse exquisitely. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
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Re. Bloom
5th Sep 2022 00:48am
Re. Bloom
5th Sep 2022 00:49am