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when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
I found myself
rereading,
delving into
each. nuance.
Finally
laying you down
and
leaving it
there.
Realizing—
the breadth of it all,
of lessons learned
Regret
is wasted time
A choice for others
who choose
to slog through it's weight
Because,
my forward movement
is now
permanently
lighter
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 31st Aug 2021
| Edited 8th May 2022
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Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
31st Aug 2021 1:22pm
Dropping your baggage makes you lighter I guess
Great write beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Great write beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
31st Aug 2021 1:43pm
Letting go of all that yuck.... clogging up where it doesn't belong.... I guess was my point... lol...
Thanks so much for reading and your comments, Ron. I appreciate the list add and your kindness.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks so much for reading and your comments, Ron. I appreciate the list add and your kindness.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
31st Aug 2021 2:21pm
Another example of your endless creativity. This is a short but powerful less we all could learn with profit. Thanks and hugs, O
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
31st Aug 2021 11:01pm
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
31st Aug 2021 3:59pm
A poem about a poem hehe 😁 I always love when I read a poem that hits me. I often get jealous of poets that can make me feel a strong emotion. It's like "why didn't I write that?" lol
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
31st Aug 2021 4:05pm
Hahaha... EXACTLY!!
I totally relate.... although my jealousy might be more akin to a humble yearning of resignation or wishing (maybe) .. hahaha .... being so hard on myself, my jealous nature is next to nil..... I need to be more aggressive, probably.... lol.... Thanks for the thoughts DC.... I appreciate you reading and taking the time.....
I totally relate.... although my jealousy might be more akin to a humble yearning of resignation or wishing (maybe) .. hahaha .... being so hard on myself, my jealous nature is next to nil..... I need to be more aggressive, probably.... lol.... Thanks for the thoughts DC.... I appreciate you reading and taking the time.....
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
31st Aug 2021 4:00pm
Theres a random poetry button? haha. No... I think I did see that somewhere. Have yet to spin the wheel but now I am geeked up to try. :)))
... This is a marvelous write Blu.
I like how you personify the piece by "BadAssErrie". She is indeed, BadAss.
And also superimpose in real time as you transition and evolve into a portal of that which you proclaim...
Viddy kool me lady.
... This is a marvelous write Blu.
I like how you personify the piece by "BadAssErrie". She is indeed, BadAss.
And also superimpose in real time as you transition and evolve into a portal of that which you proclaim...
Viddy kool me lady.
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
lmao.... Yep, there sure is!!
Look here! 👇🏻
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/
I'm truly glad you liked my little nugget of inspiration! I love it when poetry sparks poetry!! One of the best things about DU, in my opinion 👍🏻
Thanks for the lovely comments, Cipher
You're a bright spot, indeed! 🔆
🌹-💙
B
Look here! 👇🏻
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/
I'm truly glad you liked my little nugget of inspiration! I love it when poetry sparks poetry!! One of the best things about DU, in my opinion 👍🏻
Thanks for the lovely comments, Cipher
You're a bright spot, indeed! 🔆
🌹-💙
B
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
31st Aug 2021 8:14pm
The last stanza and last word is a thing I most desperately seek. You've given me the push I needed❣🌹Brava, Goddess Blue🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
That's such a truly lovely sentiment, BB... I am so flattered and humbled by your kind words. There's nothing I could have ask for that would've been better.... than knowing I could inspire quite like that.... Wow!!
All my gratitude and heartfelt appreciation-💞
(I miss you!!!)
Sending loads of love your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B
All my gratitude and heartfelt appreciation-💞
(I miss you!!!)
Sending loads of love your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
31st Aug 2021 8:54pm
Letting the past go helps you get rid of your baggage. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
31st Aug 2021 11:00pm
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
31st Aug 2021 9:44pm
Nicely penned ... like where this took you ... insightful ... laced in poetic magic ...
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
You're a lovely sight, to read, LilD.
Thanks for the kind remarks and the truest magic; the kind that I derive from poets like yourself and others that deeply deeply inspire me.
Much appreciated, dear poetess!
I hope you and Jade are doing well ;)
🌹 - B
x
Thanks for the kind remarks and the truest magic; the kind that I derive from poets like yourself and others that deeply deeply inspire me.
Much appreciated, dear poetess!
I hope you and Jade are doing well ;)
🌹 - B
x
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
31st Aug 2021 9:55pm
Isn't it true: we never know when the light will come on and we'll move to a beautiful and new place. Thanks for the reminder, hope the new will be magic for you dear amazing Princess, and creative poet. Hugs and peace, O)
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
31st Aug 2021 11:10pm
You're absolutely correct, O!
It's nice to know that an epiphany can occur changing the trajectory of a day and ultimately realign an entire outlook.... on life...
What a difference a day can make, indeed
Your insights are truly valuable and I'm so appreciative of you, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
It's nice to know that an epiphany can occur changing the trajectory of a day and ultimately realign an entire outlook.... on life...
What a difference a day can make, indeed
Your insights are truly valuable and I'm so appreciative of you, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
31st Aug 2021 11:50pm
thank you for directing us to your inspiration. Love your poem. Letting go is one of the hardest things to do, whether regret or other deep and useless emotions (guilt is another big one) it is the best thing we can do for our present moment. It does not mean forgetting, it does not mean ignoring, it means consciously choosing to move forward without the weight that have held us down. You have done a great job in expressing this here, and inspiring me too.
Lovely.
Lovely.
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
1st Sep 2021 2:26pm
Hey there Ursa :)
One of the best things about DU is the talent that you randomly come across, that continually motivates and inspires. It's a marvelous opportunity /feeling and one that I truly cherish to be able to have access to.
You're so correct- in putting those emotions that usually bite and gnaw, nonstop; in their proper places. To stop dragging them around and to take the experience as a lesson and moving on, sans so much baggage.... It's a huge sigh of relief to finally come to terms with..... For sure!
I am all smiles that I could pass along inspiration, that's what it's all about, in my opinion!!
Thank you so much for reading and for being so generous with your kind remarks.
I am deeply appreciative 🙏🏻
Warmest regards ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
One of the best things about DU is the talent that you randomly come across, that continually motivates and inspires. It's a marvelous opportunity /feeling and one that I truly cherish to be able to have access to.
You're so correct- in putting those emotions that usually bite and gnaw, nonstop; in their proper places. To stop dragging them around and to take the experience as a lesson and moving on, sans so much baggage.... It's a huge sigh of relief to finally come to terms with..... For sure!
I am all smiles that I could pass along inspiration, that's what it's all about, in my opinion!!
Thank you so much for reading and for being so generous with your kind remarks.
I am deeply appreciative 🙏🏻
Warmest regards ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
1st Sep 2021 2:34am
It's true, regret is absolutely senseless... yet it's so hard to lay it down sometimes. Nice write, and bravo on giving the nod back to your inspiration too.
🙂k
🙂k
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
1st Sep 2021 2:44pm
I felt that difficulty of not letting it go, for years and years, too, k.... I think you get to a point where all the lessons of specific long standing regret are learned and you consciously decide (or your mind kinda sling shots your understanding) ... to a decision of "No more!" to constant 'self injury' ... in a manner of speaking. I previously only continued to repeatedly hurt myself with the pain and the pressing weight of it... I understand now that is (and was) nothing but 100% wasted time. Putting regret (or any untoward pressing pain, like guilt) in it's proper and purposeful place, learning and hopefully growing from the experience of it..... becomes the only way that I now can stay within a healthier and much lighter and even mental keel....
It's like stepping on the scale to see you've lost 10 lbs!! ... hahaha.... freeing and joyful....
I appreciate your thoughtful comments so very much... You always leave me swimming in smiles and with some truly terrific thought provoking. :)
Danke, k.
🌹 - 💙
B
It's like stepping on the scale to see you've lost 10 lbs!! ... hahaha.... freeing and joyful....
I appreciate your thoughtful comments so very much... You always leave me swimming in smiles and with some truly terrific thought provoking. :)
Danke, k.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
1st Sep 2021 6:13am
Forgiveness is the cruelest act, regret ties you to past emotions and people but forgiveness cuts these emotional ties forever and you are free. Are you a shapeshifter sorceress? I saw a hawk soaring across heaven today, was that you flying free?
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
1st Sep 2021 5:40pm
🍃 🦅 🍃
lol....
Ohh to be a shapeshifter!!! Yes, I would love to be able to soar.... The closest I'll ever come to flight, will be within my imagination's penned ink upon the page....
I thank you so much for reading and your always thoughtful kind words, my dear poet 🙏🏻
My smile is yours today!!
☺
🌹 - 💙
B
lol....
Ohh to be a shapeshifter!!! Yes, I would love to be able to soar.... The closest I'll ever come to flight, will be within my imagination's penned ink upon the page....
I thank you so much for reading and your always thoughtful kind words, my dear poet 🙏🏻
My smile is yours today!!
☺
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
1st Sep 2021 6:22am
Dear BV,
Shedding all that crap is an emotional weight loss isn’t it. If only I didn’t make up for that loss in chocolate and potato chips. (That’s not regret. It’s remorse. There’s a difference! Ish.) wonderfully reflective write as continued inspiration from E’s write. Great piece. H🌷
Shedding all that crap is an emotional weight loss isn’t it. If only I didn’t make up for that loss in chocolate and potato chips. (That’s not regret. It’s remorse. There’s a difference! Ish.) wonderfully reflective write as continued inspiration from E’s write. Great piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
1st Sep 2021 5:46pm
Hey there, H!
I was thinking it felt like stepping on the scale and seeing you've lost 10 lbs!!! 😲... 😏... 🥳... hahaha!
I very much appreciate your thoughts here, Honoria ....I am so grateful to have those poets /poetess' like you and E that continue to be such wonderful inspiration via your terrific poetry. It's one the best parts of DU, I believe.
Much love and gratitude ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I was thinking it felt like stepping on the scale and seeing you've lost 10 lbs!!! 😲... 😏... 🥳... hahaha!
I very much appreciate your thoughts here, Honoria ....I am so grateful to have those poets /poetess' like you and E that continue to be such wonderful inspiration via your terrific poetry. It's one the best parts of DU, I believe.
Much love and gratitude ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
2nd Sep 2021 11:03pm
i envy that you can go so lightly having learned to leave that huge baggage behind.
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Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
21st Sep 2021 7:27am
Letting go of the hopes and people who never seem to carry their own weight can lighten ours. Very wise my friend. You got it right on the bullseye.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
21st Sep 2021 12:58pm
Thanks, John
I appreciate your read and the generous comments.... My smile is yours this morning!
🌹 - 💙
xo - S
I appreciate your read and the generous comments.... My smile is yours this morning!
🌹 - 💙
xo - S
Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, learned
6th Oct 2021 4:11pm
"Regret
is wasted time
A choice for others
who choose
to slog through it's weight"
Not sure why these lines hit hard, perhaps because in the past I delved in it and carried guilt without nothing productive out of it.
It's a wonderful write Blue, aspiring and enlightening.
is wasted time
A choice for others
who choose
to slog through it's weight"
Not sure why these lines hit hard, perhaps because in the past I delved in it and carried guilt without nothing productive out of it.
It's a wonderful write Blue, aspiring and enlightening.
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Re: Re. when clarity is like lightning ~A random (potent) lesson, lear
7th Oct 2021 4:52pm
I fully understand and relate, W!!
I think trying to carry that guilt comes from a place of goodness, within. In the end, it's a lesson hard taught by time.... Not easily learned, at all— that, that particular guilt IS solely non-productive and only hurts ourselves. Finding ways to reconcile it and leave it where it needs to be left and buried, is difficult but (in my experience) the only way to REALLY move forward.... Until then, it's like an albatross around your neck....
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, my friend!
I appreciate you, so much.
🌹 - B
x
I think trying to carry that guilt comes from a place of goodness, within. In the end, it's a lesson hard taught by time.... Not easily learned, at all— that, that particular guilt IS solely non-productive and only hurts ourselves. Finding ways to reconcile it and leave it where it needs to be left and buried, is difficult but (in my experience) the only way to REALLY move forward.... Until then, it's like an albatross around your neck....
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, my friend!
I appreciate you, so much.
🌹 - B
x