Secrets of camouflage

Bravissima, Lady Blue!    
I just watched a documenatry about the Who and the impact that "Tommy" had on their career. What hit me like a bolt of lightening was hearing that oft heard chorus,"See me, feel me, touch me, heal me."It struck me that these 4 actions are to humans like the elements to the earth. These passages in your beautifully written poem evoke those same thoughts and yearnings,    
"To feel    
    
To be.... felt    
  
Basking in all    
that defines    
sated"    
   
You are the goddess with the "potent fiery pen."    
   
XXOO    
Bobby Bear

Awww... You are too too kind BB.
Thanks for the lovely and thoughtful comments.... You definitely bring with you that energy "BB energy", which leaves me warm and smiling ☺
I deeply appreciate you and all your lovely kindness..... I am so lucky!
Much love and respect, my lovely poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B

Wow you just better by the write, I love the firey pen. That is do you
Love and light
Ron x

Thanks for the kind words.... I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.

🌹 - B

Keep on giving good wisdom obi one.  May the force be with you.  Keep on writing my smart beautiful strong sexy woman.

lol... Thanks for the smile, Francisco
I appreciate it
🌹

Fire, fire, fire...
There it is...
You've got it...

This is an incredible write...
The art purely amazing....

Awww... That's very kind, POft.
I thank you for reading and for some really amazing remarks....I appreciate you and your thoughtfulness.


Glad you enjoyed it as whole, my friend
🌹 - B

your words are such a pleasure to read.
even better the second time around.

I had a very very good source of inspiration.... and couldn't help but let out my feelings ..... It's a rarity for me to be so instantly affected....


Thank you for sharing your thoughtful insight with me, Ms...✨.... It means a lot.





All my warmest appreciation - 🌹
x-B

The pen is a mighty instrument, and yours dear, Blue...well, it is both mighty and and oh so beautiful my friend.

Cheers...Harry

Your comments are smile inducing and quite lovely, my awesome friend-🙏🏻 .... Thanks for the read, the list add and your supreme thoughtfulness..... I deeply appreciate you...

Sending well wishes ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

This is the second poem I've read tonight about muses. I really need to get me one!!!!  Didn't you used to be a really good rhymer, or am I confusing you with somebody else? I like the style but it's not very lyrical. But you're obviously very talented. Nice one.

Thanks for taking the time to read and leave me your thoughts, it's much appreciated.

I guess I enjoy the feel of a sense of the lyricism within line breaks and the flow of the phrasing ... Hopefully, others can as well ....Sorry it didn't come across for you....


No, rhyming poems aren't my forte... I used to attempt them, but I never thought that it came naturally to me nor that I was any good at them....


Regards,
🌹 - B

Sorry, wrong person. My bad.

I am reminded of the idea of how there is mathematics in the depths of everything, or how there is a blue print (blu print;) behind every sky scraper.  

...  In this way, our thoughts very much underwrite the design of our existence and reality.  

...  but in regard to thoughts, I think a certain level of embrace is perhaps necessary?  at least at a certain stage of the life cycle of the manifestation.  (I feel like you allude to this in Stanza II.)

...  To me, it seems that you have poured forth energies into such an embrace, like the clay of a golem, and the breath of life unto the clay, in an adept & electric form of sorcery.

...  Oh yes:  Though shalt manifest.  Though shalt manifest.

...  Love both you and this write, my beautiful friend.

:)))

Your comments are truly appreciated, my dear  🙏🏻. Ty for seeing something within me , what I sometimes miss, of myself.  I am truly grateful for all your loveliness and so very thankful for you and for your amazingly incredible brand of friendship.... It means so so much to me.... 🌈 ✨🪐-💙
🌹 - B

Quite lovely!

Thanks NG, You're a peach 🍑
🌹 - 💙
B

Thank you kindly, Milady!
I wholly appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts..... it's lovely to see you on my page 🦋


🌹-B
x

disciple and sensei of sensual spirituality, following a path you blazed in your mind finding yourself existing at the end of everything.
Your devote desire is so well hidden, as is the path you lead others to follow. Within plain want lays the completion of the soul. I never in my wildest imagination would I have looked for my soul in the impulses we are taught to control. I am crying over this poem and the simple beauty of being.  

Your comments are so wonderfully appreciated, my dear shaman. I have only ever dreamed that there could be at least one soul out there, that I could connect to and perhaps, just maybe, stir something within, (like what you've described) .....So, it's a true honor and my extreme joy to read your very beautiful sentiments /thoughts.... I am so humbly grateful-🙏🏻 and I thank you for being so open and understanding to my particular brand of pen to paper..... It's mind blowing and I feel truly blessed...  
 
Much love and untold and amounts of respect your way... ✨ 💫 ✨  
🌹 - 💙  
B  
x

Wow Amazing!!

very special Blue,
🖊🔥pen was on fire!!

this is what talent reads like


OG RESPECT

This poem is perfectly matched with the image ... the flow ... the complexity ... killer spacing throughout ... then the crescendo at the end ...

A series of ideas woven together into a rug of extraordinary beauty and punctuated with the fire of a pen that knows the power of words. Finer than most writing I've come across and with your signature lyrical profundity

Xo
John

"Consumed by a will
of intent
and driven by
the very spark" and those closing lines are pretty phenomenal.
It's a very inspiring write.
Thank you for sharing.

Thanks for thinking so, Walter....
I really enjoy your point of view(s) and really enjoy reading your comments, my friend

Warmest gratitude,
🌹 - B