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Traces of pain
You touch the body
After stiff blows of the whip
Showing traces of pain
After stiff blows of the whip
Showing traces of pain
Author's Note
KriSenryu - yes, I am off by a syllable - the story of my life. ;)
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Re. Traces of pain
30th Jun 2021 10:12pm
They want to look but a little afraid to say anything....
I have no fear
Astonishing and incredible heat
BIG HAIR PULL LIKE
BONDAGE RL
I have no fear
Astonishing and incredible heat
BIG HAIR PULL LIKE
BONDAGE RL
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Re: Re. Traces of pain
1st Jul 2021 2:03am
Maybe I should be afraid to say anything... :p But I am happy you said something and like the heat Poetspeak.
Hair pulling, whips, and handcuffs ;) Really happy to be part of your bondage RL and appreciate the BIG LIKE.
Hair pulling, whips, and handcuffs ;) Really happy to be part of your bondage RL and appreciate the BIG LIKE.
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1st Jul 2021 2:09am
Thank you so much for the comment Francisco, I am really happy you think it's cool, and yes Dominatrix are hot too. ;)
Re. Traces of pain
1st Jul 2021 4:22am
Dear K,
This poem held another thought process to me. That by which we can intimately share with someone who truly cares. The sexy part is the outside of it. It’s the emotional turmoil inside that lured us toward each other where we can allow that “ Showing traces of pain” part.
I’m so glad to see you back. It’s been a while. I hope you’re well and have just been busy.
Great write! H🌷
This poem held another thought process to me. That by which we can intimately share with someone who truly cares. The sexy part is the outside of it. It’s the emotional turmoil inside that lured us toward each other where we can allow that “ Showing traces of pain” part.
I’m so glad to see you back. It’s been a while. I hope you’re well and have just been busy.
Great write! H🌷
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1st Jul 2021 2:24pm
I always love your thought process and so often we are in sync. There is a lot more than meets the eye sometimes. You always explain things so well "where we can allow that "Showing traces of pain"" part is perfectly said.
Thank you so much for the kind words. Time passes so quickly when you are dealing with lots of things. It's been a combination but I am hanging in there, at least for now. x
Thank you so much for the kind words. Time passes so quickly when you are dealing with lots of things. It's been a combination but I am hanging in there, at least for now. x
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1st Jul 2021 4:51am
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1st Jul 2021 2:21pm
Those pesky syllables... I suppose I could have said 'Showing stripes or ghosts of pain' but I like traces better so damn the rules. ;) And thank you so much for the wonderful comment BC. I thought it was a great image too. :)
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1st Jul 2021 1:41pm
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1st Jul 2021 2:21pm
I am really happy you liked it LDF. Thank you so much for the comment and your thoughts. :)
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2nd Jul 2021 11:44pm
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4th Jul 2021 7:07pm
Hey Robert! ah yes, I like it - 5 syllables and who does not love the color of pink... ;) Thank you so much for the comment.
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3rd Jul 2021 4:23pm
The traces, like braille, if you know how to read them; are very informative.
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4th Jul 2021 7:09pm
That is so true, obviously you know how to read them, right? ;) Those beautiful patterns and colors are very informative indeed; and they tell such lovely stories of pain and pleasure desperately waiting to be repeated.
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Re: Re. Traces of pain
6th Jul 2021 3:12pm
Not sure exactly what to make of your comment BP but I like
it! :p and Hey back....;)
it! :p and Hey back....;)
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29th Jul 2021 12:08pm