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I am your whim!
You burn, and I breathe in,
I let your smell through my lungs
Close the exit tightly behind you,
Squeezing a silk sash in your hand
There are people, faces, shadows, echoes,
But we are now in a completely different world
You leave stripes on my neck,
In the movements, giving rise to wild fear
Your voice knits like a web of passion,
Before a slight tremor sneaks into me
And only silence will punish so cruelly,
But I want a man's belt in your hands!
In my eyes I read the Dominant,
Who will subdue, I will lay down at your feet
Without the right to vote on everything,
without an option,
Driving high doses of You under the skin
I dare not ask, I beg with a look,
Ready to go down on my knees
I bleed with voluptuous nectar,
I catch shadows with my lips
"I will call you a little later, not now ..."
You said. I obeyed in my entirety
Awakening my ecstasy and desire more,
And my heart beat faster
Erotica etched in my impatient mind,
Untold phrases are hidden there
From now on I am your whim,
All instincts are bare to the nerve
I let your smell through my lungs
Close the exit tightly behind you,
Squeezing a silk sash in your hand
There are people, faces, shadows, echoes,
But we are now in a completely different world
You leave stripes on my neck,
In the movements, giving rise to wild fear
Your voice knits like a web of passion,
Before a slight tremor sneaks into me
And only silence will punish so cruelly,
But I want a man's belt in your hands!
In my eyes I read the Dominant,
Who will subdue, I will lay down at your feet
Without the right to vote on everything,
without an option,
Driving high doses of You under the skin
I dare not ask, I beg with a look,
Ready to go down on my knees
I bleed with voluptuous nectar,
I catch shadows with my lips
"I will call you a little later, not now ..."
You said. I obeyed in my entirety
Awakening my ecstasy and desire more,
And my heart beat faster
Erotica etched in my impatient mind,
Untold phrases are hidden there
From now on I am your whim,
All instincts are bare to the nerve
Published 28th Jun 2021
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28th Jun 2021 9:03pm
28th Jun 2021 9:30pm
Love it! Latin passion is a religion of it's own. ;) Thank you so much for the comment and blessing. And GOD BLESS YOU too! xoxo
28th Jun 2021 9:53pm
28th Jun 2021 10:29pm
Hey BC. I definitely want you to have fun so your comment makes me happy! ;) Thank you so much for reading and your thoughts. xoxo
28th Jun 2021 10:13pm
Absolutely awesome read, loved it from start to finish. Great job young lady
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
28th Jun 2021 10:31pm
Hey AJ. I am so happy you found it an awesome read! Thank you so much for the comment and feedback... Love and light to you as always! xoxo
I'm always in awe of your writing style
So much is packed in
Multiple reads and re-reads are necessary
Not only is there style and beautiful images but an aura is prevalent throughout this write. I'm pretty turned on and the shut off valve is no where in sight, thankfully....
BIG EXQUISITE LIKE
RL AWARD
So much is packed in
Multiple reads and re-reads are necessary
Not only is there style and beautiful images but an aura is prevalent throughout this write. I'm pretty turned on and the shut off valve is no where in sight, thankfully....
BIG EXQUISITE LIKE
RL AWARD
28th Jun 2021 11:38pm
Deer in the headlights!... in awe and multiple re-reads really makes me happy. I am here to turn you on and break the valve. ;) I love a continuous flow... And I love the BEL and RL always... Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. xoxo
28th Jun 2021 10:21pm
28th Jun 2021 11:37pm
I love the Wow! my dear Kink. But re-reading really tugs at my heart. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. xoxo
28th Jun 2021 10:21pm
28th Jun 2021 11:36pm
Always my dear Lyrically. I love being a good little submissive in the right hands. Thank you so much for giving me your thoughts. ;) xoxo
28th Jun 2021 11:41pm
We read this one and remembered that we didn't comment. But it's just great to see you return with something steamy and tight, tight work Lady
29th Jun 2021 12:47pm
I am really glad I could post something you like after being away for a while. Who doesn't love steamy and tight. ;) Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts, I_IS_ME. xoxo
29th Jun 2021 2:23am
Kristina it is nice to see your work again, I have lost a few favorite poet/poetess on here so I appreciate you posting again. I like this.
29th Jun 2021 12:51pm
It means a lot to me that you like my writing. I am sorry to hear you lost a few poet/poetesses. People like you are the reason I am still here. Thank you so much for the comment Remy. xoxo
29th Jun 2021 5:22am
29th Jun 2021 12:48pm
Hey Francisco, I love the Amen! ;) Thank you so much for the comment and encouragement. xoxo
30th Jun 2021 5:53am
Marvelous submission on your submissiveness. Using all your senses, and giving them to your Dominant. Thank-you for sharing your inner thoughts.
30th Jun 2021 3:50pm
Hey DaVinci. Being submissive is marvelous in the right hands. ;) and Ah yes... giving to the Dominant is so rewarding. I am really happy you like my inner thoughts. Thank you so much for the comment and your thoughts. xoxo
28th Jul 2021 3:37pm
Wow Kristina, I loved everything about this. It's sensual and eloquent, vivid in detail and leaves the reader yearning for more.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
28th Jul 2021 4:21pm
Your support is a reason I keep posting Wally when I consider stopping. Feedback like this makes me think I have contributed something worthwhile. Thank you so much for your continued support. It means a LOT to me. xoxo
31st Jul 2021 8:10pm
1st Aug 2021 1:31am
Thank you so much for the comment Poetspeak. I am so happy you think it's one of the best and I always appreciate your feedback so much!!! xoxo
22nd Nov 2022 8:49pm
The piece might have been overdone by another poet, but you kept perspective. I wouldn't change a word. This is a "drop the mic" poem!
