littlest things

I enjoyed going on the free flowing journey with you. For me some poems take on a more formal form, and others should be just how they first came out. I loved your use of bold and italics to highlight words and phrases. Thank you!

Thanks for the lovely kind words, senid. I'm all smiles that you enjoyed my stream of consciousness swim... lol... I appreciate you and you taking the time to stop by... reading feedback is always so valuable, imo... I appreciate the compliment.

It's nice seeing you, you're always welcome here!
✨ 💫✨
🌹-💙
B

Dear BV,

Seriously? This is your stream of consciousness? You just randomly think in poetic beauty?
My stream would read;
Forgot to go to the market. Now I’m hungry. I should’ve gotten gasoline. I think I only have 1/8 of a tank. Should’ve done laundry. No clean underpants. 🤭 Sure wish I could write like Blue...
Dreamy billowy poem that incites every romantic part of my brain (if I ever remembered to think like this) I’m hungry!
Great write. H🌷

Ohh H.... lol.... yeah, it is my silly stream of consciousness.... haha... However, it's totally not all it's cracked up to be, I assure you! I often forget to put my wash into the dryer - meaning I have to rewash everything again, because FL is humid and leaving wet clothes is never an option, I know better! Yet, forget I sometimes do... So, yes... that also means... No underpants... lol.... heh heh heh....Your comments made me giggle; I'm so appreciative for the generous list add, that you enjoyed reading and engaging your lovely brain.... Thank you for being so supportive, truly inspiring and funny as hell...
(hugs)
🌹-B

That crazy Lady, this piece is is totally on point. We love the breakdown of the simple almost free things missed from a relationship. To tight Lady, we see this getting a lot of comments. Hahaha, just enough tongue also made our top ten, tight

lol... I'm not too too crazy though... I do absolutely love your visits on my page, Me. It's some of my favorite time, reading your thoughts that is..... I appreciate a man who understands that 'just enough tongue' is really important.... lol.  
Thank you, my friend. It's a pleasure to get a "too tight" as feedback, your support and encouragement means a lot to me... 🙏🏻
🌹-💙  
B

roses for no reason

Awww... Thank you, for all the best reasons
🌹-💙  
B

Ty, Stan
Likewise, my dear
🌹 - 💙 - 🐶 - 🖤 - 🌹
xo

Sensuous read that subtly fires the erotic imagination. Favourite set of verses:

touching me there,
where passion ignites
to an almost immediate release
kisses with the perfect amount of tongue

when dark chocolate
finds it's way into the pantry
surprise ramen from our favorite place
surprise sex in the morning,
or in the middle of the night

orgasms instead of arguing
hugs instead of coolness
laughing and more laughing
drawn bathes with rose petals

already folded laundry
dishes emptied from the dishwasher
a gas tank magically filled
perfumed skin riddled in goosebumps
from a massage out of nowhere
messing up the bed that was just made

Yes, its the little things one does for another that can inspire so much more....

Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts with me, Solomon. I appreciate your time and the generous remarks.... I'm so glad you enjoyed yourself and those lines were some of my favorites too ;) .... it's always good to hear from you 🦋
🌹-B

Oooo... yes yes yes!!! Eye contact is up there for me too, definitely. You're so very correct, with the right person It's powerful and almost encapsulates attentions so deeply, it feels like a force field surrounding, that no one can penetrate.... Talk about goosebumps!! 👍🏻... I thank you for reading and your, always amazing, insightful comments.... I am all smiles you enjoyed reading and found something to move you.

Much love and endless enchantments... lol..
🌹-💙
xo
B

Oh my Princess, what a beautiful poem. Yes, it's the littlest of things, and sometimes the biggest of things too. Hugs, peace, and kisses. Oral

Your comments are unbelievably uplifting and extremely kind Oral. I thank you so much for reading and leaving me with such inspiration and insight.

🌹-💙
B

Never forget, YOU are my amazing Princess....nose to toes.....oral

;)
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The little pixels make up the whole picture.  Of course, you explain it much more poetic and eloquently.

And a random 🌹 for you.

PS. Lots of clues for 088.

I was hoping 088 was taking notes!!
Yes! 👀🕵️‍♀️👀

Lovely rose, Thank you , Leo
I'm glad you enjoyed floating in my stream... ;)
Always a pleasure ✨ 💫 ✨
💙
xo
B

You miss spontaneous sex with your mate.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.  Show him how really sexy you are.

I have no mate, so that's probably the bigger issue... lol.... I appreciate you, Francisco... it's nice that you leave your comments! Thank you.
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Then may I be your captain my sweet sexy woman,  LOL.

Beautiful piece, Lady Blue💕 Thank you for the recipe for sensual success🤠🌹 This is my favorite, super identifiable, funny passage,
"a knowing look of solidarity
when trapped in erroneous conversations"
In such circumstances I implement the "ir nos ya" technique by touching my ear, my nose, and my jaw Baseball style.🐻💞🐰

hahaha... that's a tad bit too spot on... I think the other conversationalist would catch on easily! .... lmao!!! You made me giggle 🤭 ... I thought for sure your favorite lines would lie elsewhere but hey, what do I know!?!.... Hi BB!! it's nice to see you 🦋... I've missed you so much but I know you're busy being fabulously sought after by company's, recruiters etc (good luck there!) .... I am so grateful for your thoughtful and kind remarks (very cute, too!) I appreciate the list add and all your loveliness in laughter as well your endless encouragements.  
I hope you stay on a good track, my friend 🙏🏻  
Much love and good luck in your days ahead,  
🌹-💙  
xoxo  
B

I pray soon someone is lucky enough to bestow all the little things back into your life I hope their adoration basks you in the warmest sunlight filling your heart with love my beautiful friend
Love and light
Ron x

Awww.... Here's to hope!! 🥂...
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, Ron. I appreciate that. It's kind of you. I'm grateful for the list add and all the wonderful capacity you have for warmth and generosity. I am so happy you enjoyed my little poem and found it touched you in some way....

Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹-B

the collected treasures

That's so true, SO
Ty for stopping by and for your thoughtful remarks
I have missed you and the particularly brilliant insightfulness that only you can bring to bear....

Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B

You are also very kind - I do so enjoy your verses

Wow, WF...That's extremely kind of you.
I'm awed and left speechless...
I thank you deeply, my friend 🙏🏻
🇺🇸 💙 🇬🇧
Your kindness is true
🌹
xo

I am glad you can relate, Tim.
That's really meaningful to me. I appreciate your honesty and I'm grateful for the list add and your visits.... they really attribute to building my confidence.... it's not taken lightly and I truly thank you, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
B

Sighhh! 😌  

My-MY, Sue,  
  Considering such an array of preciously perfect charm, romantic sensuality, and all your readers' surely envy of your enthralled mate, I can just hear the moans that you're not magically each of theirs. Still, I can only wonder and wish, too; but, if you're anything like me, most of my scintillating poetry lives and breathes in wondrously imagined fantasy … yet, would it be fair to compare You to Me. ; )  
   I'd rather close my eyes and dream BIG of all the genuinely important "little" things you've so eloquently brought to a simmer that gift life 'n love the sweetly delightful flavor every true passionately affectionate couple imagine when they're first married, and if things work out as they wish ~ for a lifetime.  
 
Well, Lady Sue, it appears you've touched me so deeply I wrote a treatise, instead of a useful and meaningful review.  
Splendidly rendered poetry tends to do this to me … LOL!  
This one's very special, Poetess … thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Sir, Richard  
Your charm and delightful presence leave me with such an inspired warmth of being. I giggle 🤭 and find myself in such revere for your writing prowess. It's definitely swoon-able (or swoon-worthy... I couldn't decide... lol ) indeed.... lol ;)    
 
Yes, my poems are often fantastical spun desires, too. Usually of those not in existence or that I 'Frankenstein' together from memories of my past. I do usually tend to write straight from my emotions, so there's always that kernel of truth hidden within my pen's imagination. It's just how my mind, heart and soul as well as my sense of catharsis need it's due.    
   
Your tremendous eloquence is my honour to read and ingest of. I fully devour your loveliness, each and every word, my bard of love and romance. (and apparently my innermost secrets, too!)  
   
Thank you for the generous list add and the wonderful tribute of your summations. I was/am rapt and the pleasure is certainly all mine.  
   
Much love and a renewed respect for the bards of long ago (that I now find extremely intriguing....)    
✨ 💫 ✨  
   
Warmest regards,  
🌹-💙    
-Susan

Whew, Susan!
  Goodness, I feel as though I've been breathlessly danced!!! 🎶
  Aren't warmly kindred imaginations ever-so enthrallingly stirring? ⚤

Stirring and Ohhh soo delightfully addictive... ;)
xoxo

the photo is perfection to accompany your words. Absolutely lovely write, as always.

Hi Ursa,
It's lovely to see you, I'm so glad you had an opportunity to swing by and leave your thoughts with me. I appreciate you, the kind words and I'm heartened that you enjoyed.

Please, don't be a stranger - 🙏🏻
In kindness,
B

This is a how to manual to woo ... perfect in its flow ... its honesty ... its authenticity ... splendid write from start to finish ...

Ohh... LilD... those are truly wondrous comments. I wholeheartedly appreciate you and your unrelenting supportiveness. I am so grateful, I really am.

You have me glowing!!
Thank you for everything and for being such a tremendous example.... 🙇‍♀️
Much love and all my respect,
🌹-💙
xo
-S

The most beautiful instruction manual ever written.  Laughing and crying at the simplicity of love. Peace, love, mirth.

lol... That's extremely kind, Richard. I am so happy you enjoyed reading and it's a lovely pleasure to see you 🦋  
 
I am grateful for your visits and the generosity of your list add. I hope that my words continue to hold some desirability in the days ahead ... ✨  

In true kindness,  
🌹-💙  
B

Gaia, Kali, poetress, gracious hostess, so many facets to you. show me more, write me something feral. Peace, love, mirth.  

well, ask and receive comes to the mind...
feral as in rage or lust... because you've counted stars of luck... that I've tackled both, my fine friend...

I shall now direct you... you needn't comment, I'm just answering your request....
(to clarify!)

in my opinion feral lust =
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/406238-the-vivid-nature-of-exigent-fucking-a/


and somewhat feral rage =

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/403128-a-righteous-flight-thoughts-of-icarus-a/

Gifts from heaven. But to clarify: feral = instinctual responses that don't exclude love [as an example]. Wolves instinctual response is mating for life and loving/ protecting family as well as lust and rage. I even see being feral within the quest for spiritual enlightenment, living with passion, living in the moment, existing without thinking of existing [if that makes sense]. Anyway, your poetry elicits and instinctual response within me that seems 'feral'.  peace, love, mirth.  

Ohh... ok... gotcha, R.
Thanks for the clarification!!
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Lol. I am such a bloviating, pompous wanker. Forgive.

haha 😂... Nothing to forgive....😉
(not any of those things, btw...)
🌹-🙏🏻
B

Had a very good day today, you are free to take a such mirth home as you can carry. have a gloriously frivolous evening.

Amazing how important those little memories stay with us.
Delightful writing.
Thank you.🙏

I think they stick even more so than the big stuff, sometimes.... It is amazing, I concur. Thanks for stopping by, KP. Your thoughts are always those that I am curious and interested in. I thank you for sharing them with me.... I'm so glad you enjoyed reading.
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Chivalry in day-to-day matters can make all the difference. I had a dream about my late wife last night that she was alive and we were driving. She lamented that she was getting old. I immediately told her she was always my princess. I miss those moments that you described in such grand detail. This poem is pure magic of the most intoxicating nature. I am spellbound by this desire for the little things that make a person feel truly loved.

Xo
John

Awww... this comment was passed by and I can't believe that I didn't notice, apologies - 🙏🏻 .... It's such a lovely recall, your dream about you and your wife... it's what typically would happen in the day to day... Right?? and I miss THAT.  I believe that our loved who've passed actually do come to visit us, in our dreams.It's just a belief that I hold. It makes me feel like they still keep an eye out and that comforts me. ....I'm smiling as big as I can muster, happy in that knowledge, that your relationship with your wife was that committed and connected. It's truly and utterly beautiful.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the generosity of your deep insights, John. I adore your visits and ohh my, do I look forward to them!
My warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
xo
S

Gotta put boxes next to each line, see how many checks you'd get.

That was simply impressive. As a guy, I know we men can sometimes take those little things for granted. Perhaps because I was mostly raised by women I understood the importance of chores and kind gestures.

Thanks so much for these comments... I absolutely 100% appreciate your POV and I'm so delighted you can relate and even more, that you deeply understand that female brain 🧠... lol...

Sorry for the late reply!
I happened upon this poem by accident...

better late then never... hahaha 😂

I am so grateful for your thoughtful remarks and generous presence, Wally
🌹 - B