Soliloquy of submission.

Brava, Lady Blue
I love how you capture the psyche of BDSM. This passage peaks my olfaction satisfaction,
"breathing in domination
while he inhales
all my need to be fixed in discipline"
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Thank you BB.
I appreciate you reading and those remarks. Like usual, I wasn't sure of this piece, as it was a last minute post to #Nopoo... to make it in time for the day... lol... I hope you catch the recording... I think it propped it up a tad but who the hell knows?!? 🤷🏻‍♀️ ... hahaha... I'm my own worst critic.!
I thank you tons, for stopping by!
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xoxo
-B

The recirding is sublime and evoked in me a greater understanding of your verse. Two beautiful ekements I glossed over while ewading. One, uwavering of "cast-iron control." And two, the complete vulnerability of "flayed."
Positively exquisite dear goddess BB🐻💋🐻💋🐻💋🐻

I am glad that I don't sound as harsh as I imagined... and I'm deeply appreciative of your thoughtful selections of stand out moments /lines you picked up on, that's awesome, BB! Thank you so much for that detailed feedback and I'm so so happy you liked it.
Much love,
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xo
-S

Good morning, my friend!
I'm extremely grateful for your lovely comments and that's the line that sticks out for me, too, for
so many reasons as well as the one you alluded to... I thank you for the list add and reiterate my gratitude. Your visits and input, aren't taken for granted and I wholly appreciate them and you.
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Much love and respect,
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xo
-B

Oh my god girl, the partnership between Dom and Sub. You have captured it perfectly. Girl you really have smashed this out the park. I bow to your brilliance
Absolutely amazing  beautiful Absolutely amazing
Bravo 👏 👏 👏 👏
Love and light
Ron x

You made my morning, Ron ;) Your "absolutely amazing's" are still ringing of true motivation!
I appreciate the list adds and all those sweet and kind sentiments... It's humbling and I'm glad you like it.

Thank you so much for all the loveliness
🙏  
Much love,
-S

Beautiful writing. Loved all but enjoyed lingering over these lines speaking of trust.
"Trust incarnate
body, mind and soul  
controlled  
taught, in part by  
trials, tribulations and revelations"

I thank you so much for your visit, LV... it's been awhile and it's genuinely lovely to see you. ;)
I loved your thoughtful preference on line choices. It's true in all relationships but imo, even more so in a D/s dynamic. It's trust that allows for a full release of control which brings each other closer to their longed for desires.... I am all smiles you enjoyed reading /listening and I hope you're not a stranger going forward.
Warmest regards,
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xo
-B

Ah yes ... to relinquish ... to surrender ... perfectly poeted Bv ...

I know you know.... Yesss ,THAT surrender. ;)
Much thanks for the RL add, my lovely friend.
I'm really so very glad you enjoyed it - 🙏
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xo

There you are!! ;)
I am overjoyed to see you upon my page, Ru. I know it's not your comfort zone and I wholeheartedly appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughtful remarks. It's really made me smile, sincerely. Even more so, reading that I've stolen your breath, an amazing notion and indication that I'm doing something right,
hopefully....I am ear to ear smiles, you enjoyed.
Thank you so much for visiting,
Much love and respect,
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xo
-B

I have to join this chorus to sing your praises, Blue.
This poem is truly the work of an artist.
A great write.
Lovely and strong.

Good afternoon Javalini :)
I am taking your remarkably kind words of 'lovely and strong' and humbly keeping them close today, as a personal impetus /reminder that I sometimes need to push away my nagging insecurity. I thank you so much for reading, listening and I'm deeply grateful and sincerely aglow that you visited and left that imprint with me.... Always such a pleasure seeing you,
Much love and respect your way, my friend 🙏
🌹 xo
-B

Have you ever notice how much of what we truly seek is an increase of what we claim we don't want. The thought that true freedom borders on being capture, the most pleasure can come from the most intense pain. Our sense of love at times is only satisfied by someone that seems not to care, yes pampered but neglected. Some of us crave love making like we're fighting, haha borderline abuse. We are turnt up we need fire with our ice, yes tight piece Lady, really tight

Hmmm.... perhaps. I know for myself it's a personal choice of being set free within that decision to relinquish control and by valuing and trusting someone else so dearly, and they vice versa to allow us  both to give one another what it is that makes us each feel complete. It's not easy to do the work on yourself and to realize this kind of need /behavior is the core of what will really make you happiest... however, I'm always a work in progress. Which I hope means, continually growing, evolving.  
 
It's a interesting notion, you bring to light... it's true (and it took a while for me to get it) that needing certain things, especially of the erotic, makes me a more fully rounded person. Imo, yet It's not a requirement (at leat not as of today) but it's certainly something I do prefer. haha. I thank you for such a great comment, my friend. I'm so glad you enjoyed.  
Hopefully the audio was worth it! :)  
Much love,  
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xo

Submission must always be a game entered willingly and limits set beforehand.  You are not a slave.  You want to enjoy the service (and the sévices...) while you are doing so for pleasure....to a point. I get the feeling that you enjoy getting down, bowing to your master.

I appreciate you reading as well as your thoughts, Robert. I thank you very much for visiting :)  

I believe that being a submissive is a choice that one makes after careful consideration and lots of research. Entering into a D/s dynamic, in my mind isn't a game, whatsoever. It's a lifestyle or a portion of a lifestyle choice. You're very correct that a Dominant /Master need to set limits and expectations with their subs /slaves participating in that, 100%. Ones that have been discussed fully in advance and agreed to. Their type of relationship is based first on unmitigated trust and second on unmitigated trust... lol... It's that important. Then communication. Most Dom/sub relationships are way more healthy than vanilla ones (that I've encountered) because of these facts. What I do enjoy is finding a Dom who's worthy of me and hopefully cultivating a unique connection that's able to blossom into the trustworthiness I described, allowing me the security I need to relinquish my control... that's how I feel and what I find desirable.  

Again much appreciations,  
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-x

Hello:  I agree with you to a point.  it is a lifestyle if the person(s) which for it to be so.   It can also be  an ''in passing'' thing, as when you might want to try a new dish. Long term rships are great for some people but not for everybody.   Kisses (if I may), Robert.

I agree! I was just speaking about myself and my personal wants desires. Fetishes vary from person to person, sure  that's why it's imperative to be on the same page!    
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Returned kisses, (of course!)  ;)    
xoxo    
-Blue

Susan this is the most profound and exquisite exploration of the dom-sub relationship I've ever read. You give the underlying meaning of what it is to be a sub and put it into eloquent poetry that shows me the emotional mindscape of the experience. Truly a grand poem my friend.

Xo
John

Ohh my goodness!!! I was just shooting for not sounding like an idiot... lol. Wow, John. I'm glowing at your comments, my friend. I'm extremely appreciative and your compliment of "a grand poem" is truly exhilarating. Thank you for the list add, all your supreme kindness and eloquently making me feel like less of a SW idiot (I say in jest and self-deprecating humor!!)
Much love and have a terrific Sat night!!
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xoxo
-Susan

My Princess, I have listened to this several times, recorded it, and struggled with control of UPS. I am "blown away" by this presentation. Wish you were reading to me right now by candlelight. (Dreaming, okay)

I assumed you'd PM me your thoughts.. lol.. .. this was unexpected, and I am nothing but appreciative, my Oral loveliness. Oh, how I would adore watching your react as I read, directly to you, slow and purposely, my undivided attention on you, alone.... accentuating ..All. The. Right. Places...purrr!!

You would always remember this spoken word, I'm certain ;)
Thank you very much for all your sweet sentiments and kind remarks
I love seeing you on my page --
please don't be a stranger 🙏
Much love,
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xoxo
-B
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Like a hungry bear, I long for your honey. Like a thirsty eagle, I need a drink of your nectar...and there's more. Hugs, kisses, and peace, oral

Two hearts beat as one.  Keep on writing.

Hi there , Francisco.... That's certainly the idea!
Thank you for reading
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Oh that first stanza followed by more awesomeness, then the last stanza!  I enjoyed this.

YOU are so awesome, Lj and extremely kind with your thoughtful remarks. My heart expands and contracts in gratitude - I thank you for visiting.  
It's such a pleasure ✨  
You're always welcomed here.  
;)  
Much love and respect,  
🌹  
xo  
-B

The more I listen the better it gets and the stronger the UP. Thanks. xoxoxo,, Oral

Hee hee hee hee hee... I just Cheshire Cat, smiled.
Thank, YOU!
😁
xoxoxoxo
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You said it, Blue. As always...a beautiful talented write that went deep into my ...consciousness...(🤔) Within. Awesome.

I always love that "thinking" emoji 🤔.. it makes me chuckle every time.... haha...I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece, Grace. Thank you for reading / listening.....Your kind words =🙏
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xo

Really liked the reading of this and then I listened to the audio and this made the piece so much more interesting to hear the poet read her words. Always love hearing a poem read from the poet as then you hear what they were trying to get across. One day I will have to try adding audio to my poems which is easy but now to get them to the Deep.
Now you have another tune spinning in my head "When two become one..."

Really enjoy this : )

Cheers    

Hey there :)
I love the contrast between reading and listening, I always do the same with other spoke word pieces, too. I'll read it first then listen, because I like to get my own viewpoint, first... it's so interesting!
I'm so relieved you enjoyed both... whew 💦.... lol.I am hard on myself and this SW didn't feel like it went like I would have liked. It was the best I could do, so here it is... hahaha. I enjoyed your thoughts.... think you should absolutely record a SW piece!.... and I giggle at your earworm..... whoops 🤭....hahaha
Thank you so much for visiting!
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xo
-B

You always make me feel..... so much better, Tim.
I have shied away from the erotica for a while, this one just spilled forth, so I was concerned with the feel of it..

I'm so appreciative of your visits, the generous list add and the extremely kind and motivational sentiments. I find it very helpful to know that I'm appealing and still on the right track...
It's always a pleasure, my friend
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xo

Really loved the sensuality in this. "it's lessons and teaching" parts complimenting parts fitting perfectly together.
This is one of those pieces where it's highly erotic and yet classy, certainly to be enjoyed over and over again.
Bravo.

Ohh Wally! That's such a lovely sentiment and I'm so very appreciative 🙏 A sexy, Lil smile widens, knowing that you enjoyed reading /listening. I am so grateful for your continued support and encouragement... even with your full plate of NaPo stuff... it's really really nice of you to make time!
Much appreciated, my friend
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xo
-Susan

Dear B,
I read and also listen to your video. This is a journey to awakening and awareness instead of a biological or physical need. This is a spiritual experience through the sensuality. You are an enchantress with super natural power where complete unison takes place. I love it.
Love from core of my heart.

KS

You're extremely kind, KS.

I'm happy you found these older works and some enjoyment therein.

Your heartfelt comments are deeply appreciated. Thank you -
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Dear B,
I read and also listen to your video. This is a journey to awakening and awareness instead of a biological or physical need. This is a spiritual experience through the sensuality. You are an enchantress with super natural power where complete unison takes place. I love it.
Love from core of my heart.

KS

You capture the feeling of freedom of giving up control and floating in sub space. Beautifully conceived and written