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a worth more than it's weight in gold~  (a tanka of truth)

     
        
       
Lovers' hands entwined,  
Then, a squeeze to remind her        
how unique theirs is;      
Two sides of the same rare coin—

     Invaluable in whole        
       
       
       
       
       
 
Written by Bluevelvete
Published | Edited 22nd Mar 2021
Author's Note
for the Take the Time to Tanka comp
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11851/#526969
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