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a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
Lovers' hands entwined,
Then, a squeeze to remind her
how unique theirs is;
Two sides of the same rare coin—
Invaluable in whole
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 12th Mar 2021
| Edited 22nd Mar 2021
Author's Note
for the Take the Time to Tanka comp
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11851/#526969
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Re. a worth MORE than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
12th Mar 2021 6:12pm
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12th Mar 2021 6:14pm
Re. a worth MORE than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
12th Mar 2021 6:46pm
The whole is greater than the sum of its parts (Gestalt).
Nicely done, Blue.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Nicely done, Blue.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. a worth MORE than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
12th Mar 2021 7:15pm
Ohhh... nice quote, bk!!
Thank you for reading and leaving those thoughts, my friend. It's so lovely to see you! I appreciate you taking the time to stop by.... You know how I adore those furry hugs!
:)
Much love,
🌹
xo
Thank you for reading and leaving those thoughts, my friend. It's so lovely to see you! I appreciate you taking the time to stop by.... You know how I adore those furry hugs!
:)
Much love,
🌹
xo
Re. a worth MORE than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
12th Mar 2021 6:51pm
Re: Re. a worth MORE than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
Ty, Ron
I really appreciate your list add and the "beautiful" It means a lot to me, your opinion and even more so, your visits. It might not be steamy, but I took a cue about hand holding that stuck in my head... from a certain Knight. Plus, I have a hand fixation, so it was just me honoring that a little bit
😉
Thank you for everything...
Much love,
🌹
xo
I really appreciate your list add and the "beautiful" It means a lot to me, your opinion and even more so, your visits. It might not be steamy, but I took a cue about hand holding that stuck in my head... from a certain Knight. Plus, I have a hand fixation, so it was just me honoring that a little bit
😉
Thank you for everything...
Much love,
🌹
xo
Re. a worth MORE than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
I love that reassuring squeeze of a lover's hand. It speaks volumes. Thank you for the pleasant reminder.🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. a worth MORE than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
12th Mar 2021 7:20pm
I do too, BB... holding hands, especially in very personal situations, is just so erotic to me... I have a hand fixation, so I'm really ALL ABOUT the hands.. lol. Ty for reading and sharing your lovely and always meaningful sentiments... It's such a pleasure.
I do love picking your brain..... 🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻
Much love,
🌹
xo
I do love picking your brain..... 🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻
Much love,
🌹
xo
Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
12th Mar 2021 8:17pm
Re: Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
Ty dearest FeNyX
I appreciate your visits
Ty for leaving your thoughts ;)
Much gratitude, my lovely friend :)
🌹
I appreciate your visits
Ty for leaving your thoughts ;)
Much gratitude, my lovely friend :)
🌹
Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
13th Mar 2021 3:17am
Beautiful hot poem. Your mate is one lucky person, because you are worth more than gold. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
15th Mar 2021 6:19am
That's an extremely kind comment, Francisco. I appreciate it and I thank you for reading
🌹
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Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
13th Mar 2021 10:56am
Smooth flow with ... yet crisp ... last line brings the poem home ... excellent write ... good luck ...
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Re: Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
13th Mar 2021 12:00pm
💜
Ty so much, LilD
I really appreciate your thoughtful comments and the generous list add. Waking up and reading your sentiments ranks right up there with my first sip of morning coffee... ;)
🌹
xo
Ty so much, LilD
I really appreciate your thoughtful comments and the generous list add. Waking up and reading your sentiments ranks right up there with my first sip of morning coffee... ;)
🌹
xo
Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
13th Mar 2021 6:03pm
Re: Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
13th Mar 2021 6:38pm
Wow, Lj.... high praise, indeed.... I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I'm grateful for your thoughtful remarks. Always so nice to see you upon my page, my friend.... Ty so much :)
Good luck to you in the comp, too
🌹
xo
Good luck to you in the comp, too
🌹
xo
Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
13th Mar 2021 7:06pm
Re: Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
13th Mar 2021 7:14pm
Ohhh, I do so love the "returned squeeze"!!!
Yesss!
Thank you for that awesome sentiment, Leo.
You just made me smile, wide 😁
I wholeheartedly appreciate that, too
Much love your way,
🌹
-Susan
Yesss!
Thank you for that awesome sentiment, Leo.
You just made me smile, wide 😁
I wholeheartedly appreciate that, too
Much love your way,
🌹
-Susan
Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
15th Mar 2021 2:45pm
Wonderful work Blue. The emotion can be overwhelming and make any man (or woman) feel rich than all the gold in the world.
Best of luck in the comp.
Best of luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
15th Mar 2021 3:46pm
Hey there Wally :)
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments, my friend. Today is beating me up and my wherewithal seems depleted along with a portion of my self confidence, so your kindness really is very much appreciated. I truly thank you, so much for reading and taking the time you do.
Warmest regards,
-B
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments, my friend. Today is beating me up and my wherewithal seems depleted along with a portion of my self confidence, so your kindness really is very much appreciated. I truly thank you, so much for reading and taking the time you do.
Warmest regards,
-B
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22nd Mar 2021 1:59pm
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22nd Mar 2021 2:01pm
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29th Mar 2021 3:43am
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