Take the Time to Tanka
Remy_L
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Remington Lancaster
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Poetry Contest Description
Write a Love Tanka
"One of the oldest Japanese forms, Tanka originated in the seventh century, and quickly became the preferred verse form not only in the Japanese Imperial Court, where nobles competed in Tanka contests, but for women and men engaged in courtship." Poets.org
The format is: 5, 7, 5, 7, 7 syllables.
Rules
• Any kind of love.
Ex. music, sport, poetry, best friend, nature
• One Entry Per Poet
• Visuals allowed (no graphic images) and no audio.
• New written work only.
• Erotica allowed (not graphic)
Example:
bearings
your lips quietly
whisper enchantments to me
red will be my death
it should be my warning sign
but I’m a bull and I charge
The Tanka above is part of a bigger poem I wrote with 3 tankas in it. The poem was about my gf's hair Tanka 1, eyes Tanka 2, and lips Tanka 3. I didn't want to link the whole poem because I didn't want to confuse as to what I am looking for.
I look forward to reading the entries.
I will not be posting after every post to keep the channel clear.
The format is: 5, 7, 5, 7, 7 syllables.
Rules
• Any kind of love.
Ex. music, sport, poetry, best friend, nature
• One Entry Per Poet
• Visuals allowed (no graphic images) and no audio.
• New written work only.
• Erotica allowed (not graphic)
Example:
bearings
your lips quietly
whisper enchantments to me
red will be my death
it should be my warning sign
but I’m a bull and I charge
The Tanka above is part of a bigger poem I wrote with 3 tankas in it. The poem was about my gf's hair Tanka 1, eyes Tanka 2, and lips Tanka 3. I didn't want to link the whole poem because I didn't want to confuse as to what I am looking for.
I look forward to reading the entries.
I will not be posting after every post to keep the channel clear.
AspergerPoet56
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Tyrant of Words
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Essence
forgetting to breathe
as i become lost in her
a name on my lips
that simply tastes so divine
the very essence of love
as i become lost in her
a name on my lips
that simply tastes so divine
the very essence of love
Written by AspergerPoet56
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Remy_L
Remington Lancaster
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Remington Lancaster
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Appreciated 1st entry AspergerPoet56! Thank you for kicking that off.
Razzerleaf
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Procession
The crows are blowin
two step jazz, linked wings shoulder
the crooners coffin,
mama magpie second lines,
all her finery showin.
two step jazz, linked wings shoulder
the crooners coffin,
mama magpie second lines,
all her finery showin.
Written by Razzerleaf
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Ljdynamic
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Dangerous Mind
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Kinkpoet
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Harmonic Agape
true symbiosis
conjointly beneficial
synergistic pair
subliminal creation
stewards of the universe
conjointly beneficial
synergistic pair
subliminal creation
stewards of the universe
Written by Kinkpoet
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Remy_L
Remington Lancaster
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Remington Lancaster
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/412966-take-the-time-to-tanka/
Something clever I was joking around with.
NOT A COMPETITION ENTRY
Something clever I was joking around with.
NOT A COMPETITION ENTRY
Tanka - Amorous Flow
Eyes strumming heart-strings
beating in double four time
making hot blood race
to erect a monument
dedicated to our love
beating in double four time
making hot blood race
to erect a monument
dedicated to our love
Written by Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
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deathrainsdown
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Strange Creature
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wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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The Relativity of Speed (a Tanka)
...is when a small snail
Hangs tight to a turtle shell
While the turtle sails
At full speed running like hell
The snail will yell: Please, SLOW DOWN!
Written by wallyroo92
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