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Her Heart Gave Up
the long ride
in the desert
was exhausting
He rode for home
to tell his beloved
he'll marry her
Five years away
trying to forget infidelities
was enough
he reached her
but only a marked grave
her heart just gave up
in the desert
was exhausting
He rode for home
to tell his beloved
he'll marry her
Five years away
trying to forget infidelities
was enough
he reached her
but only a marked grave
her heart just gave up
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Narrative Poem/Wordplay
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Re: Re. Her Heart Gave Up
21st Feb 2021 3:23am
Re. Her Heart Gave Up
21st Feb 2021 2:35am
This poem made shed tears for love that could have been. Keep on writing.
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21st Feb 2021 5:45am
Re. Her Heart Gave Up
21st Feb 2021 5:19am
Re: Re. Her Heart Gave Up
21st Feb 2021 5:46am
Interesting. What language did you think it was written in. Thank you for reading...:)
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