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anew.
... then...
the sun rose,
burning it all away
silent bursts
of
magical exquisite
nothing else mattered.
Author's Note
©Blu2020
An older sunrise pic of my own that I use as wallpaper on my phone.
An older sunrise pic of my own that I use as wallpaper on my phone.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. anew.
4th Feb 2021 5:17pm
I understood this as someone waking up and reaching for their phone before their eyes open. Then waking up the phone and seeing the unlock screen. Feeling like if it isn't on social media or their phone is it of little importance. Ha... probably and completely way off. I just took into account your author note.
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4th Feb 2021 5:56pm
I like your takeaway very much!
Ty for reading and sharing that spin, it's a thought provoker... ;)
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Ty for reading and sharing that spin, it's a thought provoker... ;)
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Re. anew.
4th Feb 2021 6:06pm
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4th Feb 2021 7:14pm
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5th Feb 2021 11:14am
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4th Feb 2021 7:31pm
......there nothing like the limitless possibilities of the dawn of a new day!
Susan your beautiful poetry accompanied by your incredible photo set the tone for a real optimistic outlook on life, thank you for this share
Pure Art!
Susan your beautiful poetry accompanied by your incredible photo set the tone for a real optimistic outlook on life, thank you for this share
Pure Art!
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Re: Re. anew.
Ron,
Sometimes I do forget to be positive and optimistic. The glass usually looks half empty to me, most days, but when I do catch a good sunrise, I'm reminded.... one of the reasons I've saved this one pic (the uploaded pic is so distorted here) because the real one , the one on my phone is just stunning; a perfect reminder to keep the faith of promise and hope alive ~ to let a new day BE a new day. I thank you for that reminder, too. ;)
as well as the list add and all your loveliness.
I love you stopping by, you're always so welcomed!
Much love and hugs,
🌹
xo
B
Sometimes I do forget to be positive and optimistic. The glass usually looks half empty to me, most days, but when I do catch a good sunrise, I'm reminded.... one of the reasons I've saved this one pic (the uploaded pic is so distorted here) because the real one , the one on my phone is just stunning; a perfect reminder to keep the faith of promise and hope alive ~ to let a new day BE a new day. I thank you for that reminder, too. ;)
as well as the list add and all your loveliness.
I love you stopping by, you're always so welcomed!
Much love and hugs,
🌹
xo
B
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4th Feb 2021 7:47pm
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Re: Re. anew.
Awww, Ty Wilber
Your kindness is beyond all I could ask for... ;)
I'm appreciative of you, the list add and all you have contributed here.... you bring with you smiles and such joy.... it's lovely..
Always such a pleasure to see you!!
Much love from across the pond,
🇺🇸 💙 🇬🇧
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xo
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Your kindness is beyond all I could ask for... ;)
I'm appreciative of you, the list add and all you have contributed here.... you bring with you smiles and such joy.... it's lovely..
Always such a pleasure to see you!!
Much love from across the pond,
🇺🇸 💙 🇬🇧
🌹
xo
-🐝
Re. anew.
4th Feb 2021 7:54pm
Somebody once said that we are reborn every time the sun rises, and this is the most poignant thing I’ve ever heard. Every day we get the chance to start again, and that’s really beautiful.
I’m a sucker for these short impactful captures of space and time. In a lot of ways I like them more than the longer pieces. This was everything and more.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
I’m a sucker for these short impactful captures of space and time. In a lot of ways I like them more than the longer pieces. This was everything and more.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
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Re: Re. anew.
Missy,
I think it came with aging maybe but starting fresh every day; wiping the slate, is my mindset as well. I usually awake, well before sunrise and have my coffee as I watch the change of colors from darker to barely light (my favorite) and so on... The Florida sunrises can be epically phenomenal and inspire just THAT, hope. Hope that you can be, do, say, create, correct or go forward fresh.... a new day =
a new way.
Your comments mean so much to me, I'm appreciative and happy to see you on my page :)
Thank you muchly for the RL add and your insights...
... always so welcomed here,
🌹
-B
I think it came with aging maybe but starting fresh every day; wiping the slate, is my mindset as well. I usually awake, well before sunrise and have my coffee as I watch the change of colors from darker to barely light (my favorite) and so on... The Florida sunrises can be epically phenomenal and inspire just THAT, hope. Hope that you can be, do, say, create, correct or go forward fresh.... a new day =
a new way.
Your comments mean so much to me, I'm appreciative and happy to see you on my page :)
Thank you muchly for the RL add and your insights...
... always so welcomed here,
🌹
-B
Re. anew.
4th Feb 2021 7:59pm
The sunrise and you are in my heart. You bring out in yourself and me. Keep on writing.
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5th Feb 2021 00:03am
Your romantic is showing! Ty for reading and for your comments, Francisco!
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5th Feb 2021 1:48am
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4th Feb 2021 8:59pm
So short but oh what a powerful message, causing one to engage the imagination, which you are perfect at in your writings A+++++. Hugs, kisses, and peace, oral
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4th Feb 2021 11:52pm
Thank you for reading and the motivation, Oral
it's always enjoyable to see you and know that you're encouraging and as supportive as you are! I'm appreciative 🙏
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it's always enjoyable to see you and know that you're encouraging and as supportive as you are! I'm appreciative 🙏
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4th Feb 2021 9:35pm
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5th Feb 2021 00:32am
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5th Feb 2021 1:12am
You can believe I'm going to try!
Ty for reading and your comments, Grace...
I appreciate your encouragement!
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xo
Ty for reading and your comments, Grace...
I appreciate your encouragement!
🌹
xo
Re. anew.
5th Feb 2021 3:30pm
Gorgeous Brevity spill
(i love how nature and natural phenomenon inspires writers and artists)
(i love how nature and natural phenomenon inspires writers and artists)
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Re. anew.
6th Feb 2021 2:48am
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6th Feb 2021 2:52am
that "Excellent"
just made my shitty night, so so much better...
-just fyi
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xo
(it's the little things, indeed)
*returned furry hugs
just made my shitty night, so so much better...
-just fyi
🌹
xo
(it's the little things, indeed)
*returned furry hugs
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6th Feb 2021 3:15pm
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Re: Re. anew.
11th Feb 2021 12:33pm
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11th Feb 2021 4:26pm
The pic is even prettier when this DU upload doesn't distort it...
Thank you for reading, PS
it means a lot
Glad you enjoyed it
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:)
Thank you for reading, PS
it means a lot
Glad you enjoyed it
🌅
:)
Re. anew.
14th Feb 2021 3:54am
The rays of light from the sunrise always offer hope, looking forward to the coming day.
Excellent spill Ms. Blue.
Excellent spill Ms. Blue.
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14th Feb 2021 3:56am
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21st Feb 2021 11:48pm
Away from the dream(s) and onto reality....maybe even a rainbow out there
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21st Feb 2021 11:58pm
I keep my eye out, always 🌈
Ty for reading, Robert
🙏
I'm deeply appreciative
xo
Ty for reading, Robert
🙏
I'm deeply appreciative
xo
Re. anew.
21st May 2022 1:42pm
May you and your Karma have a wonderful weekend; enjoy the sunshine. Put on some spf it will allow you and the sun lover to spend more time together! : )
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