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My Diagnosis
Again they called me strange,
peculiar, deviant, depraved, sarcastic, insatiable,
completely crazy, stubborn ...
Yes, that is so. I do not deny
In these symptoms you are so right!
And this is my diagnosis
But it's a pity that in my case,
it seems to me that I'm not contagious,
For in such a disease we must be
chronically ill together
peculiar, deviant, depraved, sarcastic, insatiable,
completely crazy, stubborn ...
Yes, that is so. I do not deny
In these symptoms you are so right!
And this is my diagnosis
But it's a pity that in my case,
it seems to me that I'm not contagious,
For in such a disease we must be
chronically ill together
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Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 10:09pm
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1st Feb 2021 10:19pm
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1st Feb 2021 10:26pm
Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 10:18pm
You may not be contagious but your poetry is infectious
Love it, great write, awesome read
Love and light
Ron x
Love it, great write, awesome read
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 10:42pm
Oh, I love what you did there... Well, at least that's infectious for some then. That and subjected people to my weirdness will just have to do. 🌹 Really happy you loved it. Maybe you are catching what I have, time will tell. 🤪
Re: Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 10:45pm
Well I haven't been vaccinated against awesome poetry so time will tell
Lol
Love and light
Ron x
Lol
Love and light
Ron x
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Re. My Diagnosis
You keep fighting to get better, we are here if you need to talk. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 10:51pm
I am a lost cause in that diagnosis Francisco, but I always appreciate your kind words and comments. 🙂
Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 10:27pm
bang...good write. i dont know though...all of those traits sound awesome. :)
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 10:45pm
Right!?! That's what I think too! Okay, you can be crazy with me too. Thanks for appreciating my Diagnosis. 🤪
Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 11:02pm
We've heard diagnoses built upon diagnoses. one doctor coming up with completely different diagnoses unaware of previous doctors and diagnoses. It was put simply to us by those that we determined truly loved us, we can't all be the same. Every morning that we look into the mirror we tell ourself to be honest with self. This gets us through one day at a time. Be both good and honest with yourself lady, tight piece
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 00:04am
Yeah that's so true, I am sure they have a flow chart, a powerpoint, and a manual on me but they all agree on crazy; so at least there is some consistency. Stay honest, true, and at least a little crazy I_IS_ME. I am really happy you thought it was tight, I always love that! 🤪
Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 11:16pm
Valid point - your "symptoms" to be contagious require a mental / dna change. Although, behavior can be contagious, but not in the medical sense.
But even if you were contagious, I got my cootie shots as a youth. So we can still be friends. I gots immunization immunity! : )
But even if you were contagious, I got my cootie shots as a youth. So we can still be friends. I gots immunization immunity! : )
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 11:55pm
Well I suppose I am an alien so maybe I can change your DNA. I am certainly crazy enough to try but It might hurt though; yes, it will hurt a lot... Still if that doesn't work then you better get infected by my contagious behavior. Either that, or just go with it... It's great.
Wow, now you need to be immunized against me. I am not sure how to take that. I think I could bypass any immunity you have anyway. 🤪
Wow, now you need to be immunized against me. I am not sure how to take that. I think I could bypass any immunity you have anyway. 🤪
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
1st Feb 2021 11:45pm
Yes, I might just have to keep writing it out for you Relic, because no way that stuff is curable. :) I am sick for life. But it makes me a hell of a lot of fun. lol 🤪
Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 1:07am
What a fascinating point of view, Kristina. The idea that someone out there must share the same character qualities that make you Kristina. I agree with the diagnosis of peculiar, sarcastic, insatiable and perhaps a skosh stubborn . Based on on my test and examination I add creative, wise, erudite, kind, and poet to your diagnosis. Brava BD❣️❣️
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 1:49pm
A skosh stubborn, I love it. In some things you just have to be crazy together or else it doesn't work unless you infect the other person. Dr. Gahdess Worship, I am so happy to receive your additional diagnosis; I know there are many but I really love yours! I am touched by your really awesome thoughts. 🤪💖
Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 1:46am
It seems you are the type to help with your attributes, not hinder. And writers and poets are fortunate to have their outlets...all creatives are. Our crazy fuels our art and our art fuels/remedies the world. What this pandemic will have to show for itself in the end hopefully will be a wellspring of new mesmerizing, healing artworks...
Beautiful piece lady 🤩. Always inspiring!!!
Beautiful piece lady 🤩. Always inspiring!!!
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 1:52pm
I do try to help. :) You make a very good point regarding the pandemic. With the quarantine and restrictions, I think many people have pursued creative pursuits such as writing and painting more again, and other arts with more time to do such things. I am really glad you stopped by and liked this one. I appreciate your feedback so much. 'Alway's inspiring' made me feel really good. 🤪💖
Re: Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 1:54pm
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and the comment Meganne. I am really happy that you liked it and understood the message! 💖
Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 3:46am
I’ll nurse you back
Will cure everything except insatiable
Maybe I’ll assign you to the rubber room
Good vending machines there
Free lube too
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Will cure everything except insatiable
Maybe I’ll assign you to the rubber room
Good vending machines there
Free lube too
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 2:00pm
Well I feel like I have been in the rubber room far to often. With rubber suits, rubbers, lube, chains, whips, and all. lol I think it's more like I would infect you than be cured, I am probably contagious after all. What is it about the beauty of vending machines in hospitals and rest stops? They are horrible everywhere else but in those places they just have an irresistible appeal. And Dr. Poetspeak, I can imagine your therapies... Definitely censored... and no way that cures me when the Doctor is deviant and depraved also. 🤪
Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 5:30am
Dear K,
Stunning write. I have yet to figure out why everything and everyone has to be measured against a baseline considered “normal”? There’s no such thing.
There are social morés like you shouldn’t shout fire in a crowded venue. There are behavioral expectations like you shouldn’t kill people on a whim. There are manners that should be observed like saying excuse me if you bump into someone. Aside from all that we all think we don't fit in anywhere. Or, we’re different and need some sort of a fix. I’m flummoxed by this and the older I get the more obstinate I’m becoming to be as contrary as I possibly can just because. If that makes me strange, peculiar, deviant and for sure sarcastic then whoot whoot! Success!!
Thoughtful and insightful and blessedly off the beaten path. Great write. H🌷
Stunning write. I have yet to figure out why everything and everyone has to be measured against a baseline considered “normal”? There’s no such thing.
There are social morés like you shouldn’t shout fire in a crowded venue. There are behavioral expectations like you shouldn’t kill people on a whim. There are manners that should be observed like saying excuse me if you bump into someone. Aside from all that we all think we don't fit in anywhere. Or, we’re different and need some sort of a fix. I’m flummoxed by this and the older I get the more obstinate I’m becoming to be as contrary as I possibly can just because. If that makes me strange, peculiar, deviant and for sure sarcastic then whoot whoot! Success!!
Thoughtful and insightful and blessedly off the beaten path. Great write. H🌷
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 2:33pm
I have come to the conclusion that you love it when I am the deer caught in the headlights. :) I am really happy you think it is a stunning write. There is no such thing as normal but they sure try hard to define it to the nth degree. And then they make it so hard to kill people on a whim; because I want to do that every time I am unfortunate enough to have to go to Wal-Mart - well most stores really. And it seems like everyone is always trying to fix us. You might be a bit peculiar because you use the word flummoxed but I love that. You are just proving that strange, peculiar, deviant, and sarcastic is the best! like you... 💖 Always off the beaten path... Thank you so much for another absolutely wonderful and insightful comment. 🤪
Re. My Diagnosis
KX this intriguing write inspires my very own analysis.
And you just laid out the perfect recipe with every verse,
revealing a crazy hot & poetic super hero....
Warning Label:
if you add a double dose of deviant and insatiable,
Please put the DUP fire brigade on standby, because K-XXX is about to burn up the erotic poetry pages, lol...
Final Analysis:
Diagnosis = Crazy Beautiful Poetess
And you just laid out the perfect recipe with every verse,
revealing a crazy hot & poetic super hero....
Warning Label:
if you add a double dose of deviant and insatiable,
Please put the DUP fire brigade on standby, because K-XXX is about to burn up the erotic poetry pages, lol...
Final Analysis:
Diagnosis = Crazy Beautiful Poetess
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 2:53pm
Dr. Feet, I did want your analysis. And wow, a crazy hot & poetic super hero; I love it, damn right! lol Let's burn this place down, sorry you got me all excited so I want to light fires and destroy stuff but we can build it back up again after. Love the final analysis, okay - you can be my doctor. lol Just be very careful, that warning label needs a lot more pages and my fire will definitely burn you but you will love it anyway... 🤪
Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 9:59pm
Great write. You nailed it in the last two lines; masterful approach. Hugs and peace, oral
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 10:10pm
Oh yes, the last two lines are very important. ;) Just speaking my mind... It's just me... I do love masterful approach though, I wonder what part of my diagnosis you share? 🤪
Re. My Diagnosis
2nd Feb 2021 11:34pm
Re: Re. My Diagnosis
3rd Feb 2021 1:19pm
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and the comment Ljdynamic. I am really happy that you liked it! The last two lines are definitely the most important as far as the overall message. :) 🤪
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4th Feb 2021 5:31pm
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4th Feb 2021 5:36pm
Thank you so much for the great comment Adagio. I really appreciate the kind words. You still get a crazy face emoji though. :) 🤪
Re: Re. My Diagnosis
7th Feb 2021 11:13pm
Hey Marks! It is always great to see you and I am glad you enjoyed this one. Always love getting a thumbs up. 🤪
Re. My Diagnosis
8th Feb 2021 7:29pm
Re: Re. My Diagnosis
8th Feb 2021 8:09pm
I will take that as both you agree with my diagnosis and that we need to be chronically ill together Robert. lol Thank you for the comment. :) 🤪
Re. My Diagnosis
14th Feb 2021 00:16am
That second line where you listed alll the symptoms 😮.
Excellent spill Kristina. It’s always a pleasure to see your poetry light up the screen.
Excellent spill Kristina. It’s always a pleasure to see your poetry light up the screen.
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Re: Re. My Diagnosis
14th Feb 2021 00:38am
Can be loads of fun albeit completely exhausting for someone. lol But since it's a diagnosis I cannot blamed for what happens right? :p Makes me think of the 'To all those that Dare' write but in a different context. :p
It's always a pleasure to see your comments light up my screen Wally. I was having Wally withdrawals which was going to add to my diagnosis but now I can hold on a bit longer for the next one. 🤗
It's always a pleasure to see your comments light up my screen Wally. I was having Wally withdrawals which was going to add to my diagnosis but now I can hold on a bit longer for the next one. 🤗
Re: Re. My Diagnosis
19th Feb 2021 9:16pm
I’ve been catching up with all my readings while keeping a busy work schedule these last couple of weeks, but I like to make sure I get to everyone as best I can.
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19th Feb 2021 9:16pm
I’ve been catching up with all my readings while keeping a busy work schedule these last couple of weeks, but I like to make sure I get to everyone as best I can.
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