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permanence in a given word
the uncertainty
quiets with a perfect resolve
hopes of light through dark
Published 25th Jan 2021
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25th Jan 2021 11:57am
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25th Jan 2021 9:36pm
lol...I could give lessons there. (almost) With the pandemic, I feel like I'm Michelin star rated... I've cooked recipes that I've never made before and watched so much food network, it's probably unhealthy (the TV watching, not the recipes!)......
hahaha 😂
I appreciate the comment, Tim.. it made me smile
🌹
-B
hahaha 😂
I appreciate the comment, Tim.. it made me smile
🌹
-B
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25th Jan 2021 10:03pm
Leo,
I agree... I'm usually drawn towards it, too. Yet when dealing within the context of friendship, it's the light I want us to bask in.. (while taking holidays within the darkness, maybe... lmao!)
I love your visits,
and welcome them muchly
🌹
xo
-B
I agree... I'm usually drawn towards it, too. Yet when dealing within the context of friendship, it's the light I want us to bask in.. (while taking holidays within the darkness, maybe... lmao!)
I love your visits,
and welcome them muchly
🌹
xo
-B
25th Jan 2021 5:27pm
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26th Jan 2021 4:56am
Ty Daniel... titling is like my coffee.... I love it so.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I take pains to title
(if I can)
Much thanks,
🌹
xo
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I take pains to title
(if I can)
Much thanks,
🌹
xo
27th Jan 2021 5:52am
simply beautiful. (5)
Steadfastness with our friendship. (7)
brilliant companion. (5)....thank you for sharing your amazing talent Blue!
Steadfastness with our friendship. (7)
brilliant companion. (5)....thank you for sharing your amazing talent Blue!
27th Jan 2021 6:00am
My heart swells with thanks (5)
at every word you leave me (7)
love, peace, kisses hugs (5)
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at every word you leave me (7)
love, peace, kisses hugs (5)
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27th Jan 2021 2:54pm
I love these brief spills, especially in the haikus and senryus that deliver impactful messages.
Nicely done Ms Blue.
Nicely done Ms Blue.
27th Jan 2021 2:57pm
Good morning, Walter!
I am a sucker for a good senryś /haiku and I strive to become better... it's definitely an art! My mind isn't wired to think in 17 syllables so they're definitely a challenge for me and I'm extremely appreciative of your comments!
Ty, my lovely friend.
Enjoy your day!
🌹
xo
B
I am a sucker for a good senryś /haiku and I strive to become better... it's definitely an art! My mind isn't wired to think in 17 syllables so they're definitely a challenge for me and I'm extremely appreciative of your comments!
Ty, my lovely friend.
Enjoy your day!
🌹
xo
B
