deepundergroundpoetry.com
cradle.
O' mossy earth
of whisper'd secrets
hidden, deep
ahh,
the languid richness
wafts thoughts
of wooden decay
temperate forest
in intrigued wonder,
teasing your spectacular
flaring gossamer spray
c o m e
~ lie naked ~
with all your
exquisite horror
have the nightingale fly,
taking with them
all the sorrow
Yes!
forest of thy very
cherished own
bare all
your mysterious floral
cradle me,
within your densely brow
as i inhale
the perfumed thicket,
so
cradle me,
dearest forest
help my heart take
root
to grow
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 23rd Jan 2021
| Edited 17th Feb 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2020
Inspired by the picture
pic: via Pinterest
Inspired by the picture
pic: via Pinterest
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 17
reading list entries 10
comments 29
reads 589
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 2:37pm
Just awesome cradled in the arms of mother nature
Beautiful just beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Beautiful just beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
1
Re: Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 5:52pm
Ty, Ron
I love that idea, too... being swaddled by mother nature, it's calming to me. Thanks for your comments and the generous RL. I'm glad you enjoyed it, as always, I love your eyes on my page...
🌹
xo
B
I love that idea, too... being swaddled by mother nature, it's calming to me. Thanks for your comments and the generous RL. I'm glad you enjoyed it, as always, I love your eyes on my page...
🌹
xo
B
Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 2:48pm
Love everything about this ... from its layout on the page ... the amazing flow ... the epic theme ... the great line breaks ... I have to say this one your best that I have read ... love how your poetry has blossomed since you first came here ...
1
Re: Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 5:57pm
LilD,
Ohhh my, that's a bountiful comment of sunshine! I'm wowed, and humbled.... really. It means the world to me that you see growth, I'm over the moon, by that. I try to better my poetic attempts however I can, so your kinds words are impactful. Thank you for the list add and all the thoughtful sentiments, my heart is swelling with gratitude!
Pet Jade for me!
Much love,
🌹
xo
-S
Ohhh my, that's a bountiful comment of sunshine! I'm wowed, and humbled.... really. It means the world to me that you see growth, I'm over the moon, by that. I try to better my poetic attempts however I can, so your kinds words are impactful. Thank you for the list add and all the thoughtful sentiments, my heart is swelling with gratitude!
Pet Jade for me!
Much love,
🌹
xo
-S
Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 3:08pm
i concur with the above comments...i like the idea as well - like she is being planted as a seedling upon the earth - do you know about the release of serotonin initiated by naked skin upon earth? it is a real thing...look it up :). nice write!
1
Re: Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 6:02pm
Ohhh, I didn't know that about serotonin and skin contact w/soil (how very interesting!) but it now makes sense why I adore mud baths the way I do !! hahaha... Ty, for your comments, my friend. I to, love the idea of being sowed in the soil or swaddled by the forest itself....It's dark, erotic and cool in a soothing kind of feel. I appreciate your visits so much! Thank you for reading and your thoughtfulness.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 3:21pm
BV, Your metaphoric splendor gives way to the most beautiful picturesque poetry. You emotionally paint your wonderful affinity to nature in verse with this incredible write. Even in solitude you exquisitely illustrate an essence of spiritual satisfaction in nature's wonders.... ''help my heart take root
to grow'' ....climactic profoundness!!! .......my medicine for the day, ''Blue's Healing
Power of Nature''!
to grow'' ....climactic profoundness!!! .......my medicine for the day, ''Blue's Healing
Power of Nature''!
0
Re: Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 6:07pm
FF,
I 100% believe that there's healing power in nature, without a doubt. This visual was the total impetus, I was just along for the ride. My thanks to you, for your eloquent review, Ron. I'm grateful that you enjoyed my write and was able to derive some pleasure of connection from my words... Its amazing to see and hear that! and so appreciated
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
I 100% believe that there's healing power in nature, without a doubt. This visual was the total impetus, I was just along for the ride. My thanks to you, for your eloquent review, Ron. I'm grateful that you enjoyed my write and was able to derive some pleasure of connection from my words... Its amazing to see and hear that! and so appreciated
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 3:28pm
I have to say, I enjoy your tone in this piece
because I feel your writing has taking on yet another growth spurt Susan. The subtle erotica laced with urgency of wisdom is just wonderful Poetess 👍🏻
Write on sister
Love Jackie 🌹♥️
because I feel your writing has taking on yet another growth spurt Susan. The subtle erotica laced with urgency of wisdom is just wonderful Poetess 👍🏻
Write on sister
Love Jackie 🌹♥️
2
Re: Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 6:29pm
Jackie,
I'm all smiles from your thoughtful review and very astute assessment. I'm humbled that you can see something in my piece, like you have. It's more than appreciation that I feel, it's wonder and amazement! I thank you so much for your beautiful soul, your support and the mystery game!! ( which I'll never be able to funnel my intuitiveness correctly, but I try...Lmfao!!) You are a sweet, awesome lady
All my gratitude and thanks for all of it!!!
🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
I'm all smiles from your thoughtful review and very astute assessment. I'm humbled that you can see something in my piece, like you have. It's more than appreciation that I feel, it's wonder and amazement! I thank you so much for your beautiful soul, your support and the mystery game!! ( which I'll never be able to funnel my intuitiveness correctly, but I try...Lmfao!!) You are a sweet, awesome lady
All my gratitude and thanks for all of it!!!
🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 3:47pm
Re: Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 6:23pm
Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 4:35pm
There is a darken tint to this that draws I IS ME to it, simply thinking of the forest and of it's darkened pockets. It's the epitome of life itself, a menage of you, the darken pockets, and pockets of light. Life in itself, you and your up and downs, with the trees and vegetation serving as spectators. Hahaha, excuse our ranting on your piece but we like darkness
1
Re: Re. cradle.
I COMPLETELY feel this comment, Me. Those were almost my feelings when I was lost in this visual (which was the total impetus of his piece!) I just love the idea of nature being so alive, twisted and beautiful in a way, that it's comforting. Swaddling me within it's forest floor and cool moss. The varied flowers and all their profound scents wafting about, the plays of light and dark that poke in and out of the vegetation... I think of fairies and trolls and making a home within the underbrush... lol... it's a bit sexy, dark (I love the dark, too!) and magical imo!...
Thank you for reading and enjoying!
I'm appreciative 🙏
xo
B
Thank you for reading and enjoying!
I'm appreciative 🙏
xo
B
Re. cradle.
Mother Nature is caring for us. Would you cradle me, LOL. ? Keep on writing.
1
Re: Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 7:42pm
You're feeling frisky!
Thank you for reading, Francisco
I'm appreciative
🌹
xo
Thank you for reading, Francisco
I'm appreciative
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
23rd Jan 2021 8:21pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 11:44pm
Tim,
You mean they POOP ON THE GROUND?!?!?
🤷🏻♀️ OMFG... THE NERVE!!!
smh 🤦🏻♀️
Is there no decency left anymore???
heh heh heh 😜 😏
I thank you for your lovely comments. You're correct about the value of nature and our forests.
Without their delicate balance of oxygen production around the world, our ability to survive would cease to be, over time. They're that imperative!
I'm appreciative of the list add, your visit and the smile you've left me with... have a wonderful weekend!
🌹
xo
-B
You mean they POOP ON THE GROUND?!?!?
🤷🏻♀️ OMFG... THE NERVE!!!
smh 🤦🏻♀️
Is there no decency left anymore???
heh heh heh 😜 😏
I thank you for your lovely comments. You're correct about the value of nature and our forests.
Without their delicate balance of oxygen production around the world, our ability to survive would cease to be, over time. They're that imperative!
I'm appreciative of the list add, your visit and the smile you've left me with... have a wonderful weekend!
🌹
xo
-B
Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 9:19pm
Dearest Blue❣❣ This piece is a feast for the senses. I love the dark, dense forest setting. And, as it to be expected, I am enthralled by your description of fragrances. The scent that is, to me, iconic forest is that of the sugar pines of the Sierra Nevada mountains. The idea if making love in that setting is so sensually appealing to me. I can understand the fear a forest conjures, especially at night. The secure and comforting feeling of being cradled, perhaps in one's lap or the being the cradleler is so beautiful to me. Bravissima tres belle S🐻💋🐻💋🐻🌹
1
Re: Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 9:53pm
Dear, B
You're speaking my language when you describe the eroticism of the forest and the enveloping of two becoming one under starlight with nature's blessings all around... so arousing, indeed!
I'm appreciative of your delicious comments, the list add and your thoughtful visits.
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
You're speaking my language when you describe the eroticism of the forest and the enveloping of two becoming one under starlight with nature's blessings all around... so arousing, indeed!
I'm appreciative of your delicious comments, the list add and your thoughtful visits.
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. cradle.
23rd Jan 2021 11:16pm
this is the bordering on erotic emotional of the spill You just commented on of mine
oooooooooooooooooo!!
am getting warm electrical fuzzies...........
oooooooooooooooooo!!
am getting warm electrical fuzzies...........
1
Re: Re. cradle.
24th Jan 2021 1:19am
You didn't need to comment! I only wanted you to see your inspiration!.. lol.... you are so sweet, 🙏
Ty for your kind words and for not listening to me... lol.. hahaha... I'm very happy you enjoyed it. ;)
🌲🌿🌳🌱
I'm appreciative of the list add and all the good vibes I feel...
Enjoy your weekend!
🌹
-B
Ty for your kind words and for not listening to me... lol.. hahaha... I'm very happy you enjoyed it. ;)
🌲🌿🌳🌱
I'm appreciative of the list add and all the good vibes I feel...
Enjoy your weekend!
🌹
-B
Re. cradle.
24th Jan 2021 7:33pm
May the forest’s detritus cradle you like a mother to her bosom, nurturing you until you blossom into flora or possibly a mighty redwood poet tree that matches the beauty, talent, strength, splendor and grace of Bluevelvete.
1
Re: Re. cradle.
25th Jan 2021 00:20am
Your comments are blush inducing, Leo.
I am lost in your vision and basking in the momentary break of reality, dreaming of such loving moments within nature's arms.... it's a heady notion and the feeling that's so enjoyable . Thank you for reading and the care you've shown with your remarks, so were beautifully stated.
I'm humbled and appreciative ....
🌹
xo
B
I am lost in your vision and basking in the momentary break of reality, dreaming of such loving moments within nature's arms.... it's a heady notion and the feeling that's so enjoyable . Thank you for reading and the care you've shown with your remarks, so were beautifully stated.
I'm humbled and appreciative ....
🌹
xo
B
Re. cradle.
26th Jan 2021 9:05pm
It's as if taking communion with nature, a stellar and splendid prayer that bears some aching as well.
Outstanding work.
Outstanding work.
1
Re: Re. cradle.
26th Jan 2021 9:32pm
Thank you for reading, Walter
I'm still yearning for such an opportunity. No forests where I am, but eventually I hope to visit the pacific northwest this year.... I can hardly wait!
Ty for your comments... I love your visits and pov
🌹
xo
B
I'm still yearning for such an opportunity. No forests where I am, but eventually I hope to visit the pacific northwest this year.... I can hardly wait!
Ty for your comments... I love your visits and pov
🌹
xo
B
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
1st Feb 2021 3:41am
<< post removed >>
Re. cradle.
28th May 2021 8:57pm
Re: Re. cradle.
28th May 2021 9:04pm
thanks Lj...
I am stoked you liked it.
one of my favs, too...
and I am extremely hard on myself.. ha!
....
You're very very kind in adding to your RL... I wasn't expecting that or anything... that's very nice... I appreciate you.
🌹-💙
I am stoked you liked it.
one of my favs, too...
and I am extremely hard on myself.. ha!
....
You're very very kind in adding to your RL... I wasn't expecting that or anything... that's very nice... I appreciate you.
🌹-💙