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Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
Two guys hung from nooses on different branches of a big tree.
My, oh my said the visiting alien tourist
so that’s how humans are grown…, on trees … who’d have thought?
But do they fall to the ground naturally, then walk and talk —
or are they picked?
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
My, oh my said the visiting alien tourist
so that’s how humans are grown…, on trees … who’d have thought?
But do they fall to the ground naturally, then walk and talk —
or are they picked?
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 17th Jan 2021
| Edited 11th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.09 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/407516-gogyoshi-poem-nr-09-an-assured-journey/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.11 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410038-gogyoshi-poem-nr-11-wheel-of-unfortune/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/407516-gogyoshi-poem-nr-09-an-assured-journey/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.11 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410038-gogyoshi-poem-nr-11-wheel-of-unfortune/
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17th Jan 2021 3:26pm
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
17th Jan 2021 10:34pm
Thank you Relic-54 for commenting -- and the RL too. Sometimes things pop out of one's head and leave you wondering where exactly they came from. This poem was like that. And it's interesting to read what thoughts sprang to your mind on reading it. Cheers, Josh.
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17th Jan 2021 4:00pm
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17th Jan 2021 10:37pm
Thanks Kinkpoet for commenting, and the RL. The poem flowed came out of the title which in turn was a response to another poem I'd written, with the title "Survival of the Unfittest" about politicians (not posted on DUP). Glad it was thought-provoking.
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17th Jan 2021 4:54pm
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17th Jan 2021 10:38pm
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
17th Jan 2021 9:32pm
This made me smile. Perspective, interpretation, are practically everything. We're all labouring through the lens of our prior experience bias. I try to keep this in mind when interacting with others. 💖🙏
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
17th Jan 2021 10:43pm
Thank you Daniel. Trying to get away from our own selective bias is a tricky thing. Have been trying to 'straighten myself out' of late by reading Rolf Dobelli's "The Art of Thinking Clearly"; nice short 3-5 page chapters each containing one idea. An easy read. Hard to do.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
17th Jan 2021 9:55pm
Very much enjoying your Gogyoshi poems josh cleverly written short but complex 👍😀
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
17th Jan 2021 10:45pm
Thank you monkeyman, and for the RL. I've got a few more gogyoshis in the pipeline and am trying to limit my postings to one a week. So next one up in February. Hope you're doing o.k. Best regards, Josh.
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
18th Jan 2021 8:04am
I’m well my friend thanks for asking and I look forward to February’s edition 👍😀
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Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
19th Jan 2021 9:52am
Dear J,
I think this is terrifically clever. Why couldn’t we have grown from trees? In a parallel universe it makes perfect sense. I’m going to say they get picked and stamped with a sell by date. 😊
H🌷
I think this is terrifically clever. Why couldn’t we have grown from trees? In a parallel universe it makes perfect sense. I’m going to say they get picked and stamped with a sell by date. 😊
H🌷
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
19th Jan 2021 5:21pm
H, thank you.
"picked and stamped with a sell by date." ... good thinking taking it a stage further. According to a bok I've read recently our "sell-by date" only occurs when somehow deep down we agree with it. Otherwise we keep tick-tocking. Which I find a kind of conforting thought -- no-one dies "before their time", whatever it looks like to others.
"picked and stamped with a sell by date." ... good thinking taking it a stage further. According to a bok I've read recently our "sell-by date" only occurs when somehow deep down we agree with it. Otherwise we keep tick-tocking. Which I find a kind of conforting thought -- no-one dies "before their time", whatever it looks like to others.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.10 — Arrival of the Fittest
20th Jan 2021 9:18pm
Dark and witty humor! I liked this a lot. Pretty creative and ingenious, thinking outside of the box.
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21st Jan 2021 8:32pm