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Picturesque
I imagine you,
timidly
sitting there
with a flower
in your hair
patiently
awaiting
my arrival
dressed
to impress
not
a
crinkle
in your velvet dress,
with a fire
in your eyes
that could
only be described
by the most talented of linguists
if even...
I'd arrive
at your doorstep
ten minutes in advance
with a
dozen
red
roses
held tightly
in my hand
nervously
waiting outside
until the last minute,
rehearsing my lines
a thousand times
before
knocking at your door
wondering what the night has in store
timidly
sitting there
with a flower
in your hair
patiently
awaiting
my arrival
dressed
to impress
not
a
crinkle
in your velvet dress,
with a fire
in your eyes
that could
only be described
by the most talented of linguists
if even...
I'd arrive
at your doorstep
ten minutes in advance
with a
dozen
red
roses
held tightly
in my hand
nervously
waiting outside
until the last minute,
rehearsing my lines
a thousand times
before
knocking at your door
wondering what the night has in store
Published 19th Nov 2020
Author's Note
Daydreaming...
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19th Nov 2020 8:31pm
19th Nov 2020 8:37pm
Thank you so much, Eerie! I'm glad that you thought so. It was certainly sweet to imagine. I appreciate you stopping by to read and comment :)
19th Nov 2020 9:09pm
19th Nov 2020 9:49pm
19th Nov 2020 9:17pm
19th Nov 2020 9:51pm
Aww, I'm glad that you liked it, Blue! Thanks so much for your sweet comment and your the continued support ❤️
19th Nov 2020 10:55pm
Beautiful imagery from a beautiful heart, I can imagine what the night has in store. :)
19th Nov 2020 11:11pm
Aww, thank you so much, Kristina ❤️. That's super sweet - I'm so glad that you liked it!
19th Nov 2020 11:18pm
20th Nov 2020 8:05pm
Thank you, Brenda! It's good to hear from you ☺️ Your writing lately has been especially tender as well ❤️
20th Nov 2020 00:57am
Such a wonderful romantic poem...that beginning of a new love...ah, what to say. Bravo NB.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
20th Nov 2020 8:27pm
Glad you thought so, Harry! I always appreciate the love and support you bring to my page. Thanks so much ❤️
20th Nov 2020 2:25am
What a lovely and very romantic daydream! It made for a truly beautiful spill. Nothing beats a great love poem and this is definitely one. Amazing poem. I applaud you!
20th Nov 2020 3:29am
Always be the romantic, open doors for her, and put out her chair before she sits down. Be her knight and shining armor. Keep on writing.
There is such vulnerability here; the anxiety and excitement of new love, in equal parts. Excellent spill, NewB 💜. (I hope she appreciates the flowers 💐.)
21st Nov 2020 3:43am
Dear NB,
You were at the wrong house! My house was next door 😉.
What I loved was the sweetness behind
“ rehearsing my lines
a thousand times
before
knocking at your door”. I so appreciated the kindness behind this write. Even your daydreams exhibit care and concern for someone else’s happiness. For me your poem made me daydream that there is still goodness among people who aren’t just in it for themselves but truly care. Lovely piece. H🌷
You were at the wrong house! My house was next door 😉.
What I loved was the sweetness behind
“ rehearsing my lines
a thousand times
before
knocking at your door”. I so appreciated the kindness behind this write. Even your daydreams exhibit care and concern for someone else’s happiness. For me your poem made me daydream that there is still goodness among people who aren’t just in it for themselves but truly care. Lovely piece. H🌷
24th Nov 2020 1:50am
I love this comment so much, H...
Just had to let you know that you made me smile a huge wide ear to ear smile reading this!
💜
xoxo
B
Just had to let you know that you made me smile a huge wide ear to ear smile reading this!
💜
xoxo
B
25th Nov 2020 3:59am
Hell of a write Brother. Damn good stuff my dude, awww the heck with the He-man talk, lol......this is a beautiful poem NB. Your daydreaming of a picturesque love interest spills from your heart into verse with tremendous emotion. I can feel the angst and excitement. You literally transport your reader into the raw emotions so brilliantly portrayed. Bravo Brother!!!
26th Nov 2020 1:53am
10th Dec 2021 2:41am
You got me with flower in her hair:)
I love to put flowers in my hair.
and the velvet dress!!
this is quite a picture you painted amigo
I love to put flowers in my hair.
and the velvet dress!!
this is quite a picture you painted amigo
