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pray tell
11/13/2020
......and then
his kiss
befell
my quizzical look
inspired his wry grin
[gawd, I just melt]
"Pray tell?"...
my smart-ass
retort drips of sin
an outreached hand ~
slips us into
entwined
Shhhh....
(finger-to-lips)
his
ONE
whisper'd
word. . .
"Mine"
......and then
his kiss
befell
my quizzical look
inspired his wry grin
[gawd, I just melt]
"Pray tell?"...
my smart-ass
retort drips of sin
an outreached hand ~
slips us into
entwined
Shhhh....
(finger-to-lips)
his
ONE
whisper'd
word. . .
"Mine"
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 13th Nov 2020
Author's Note
NoPoo#2
©Blu2020
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Re. pray tell
13th Nov 2020 10:17am
Re: Re. pray tell
13th Nov 2020 1:25pm
Ahh, lovely to see you this morning ☺
Ty for reading and your generous comment.
Enjoy your day and don't be a stranger
🌹
xo
B
Ty for reading and your generous comment.
Enjoy your day and don't be a stranger
🌹
xo
B
Re. pray tell
13th Nov 2020 11:26am
Re: Re. pray tell
13th Nov 2020 1:27pm
hee hee hee
🔥 🔥
Ty, k
Exactly the emotion I was hoping for!
Appreciate you reading and love your comments, alway.
💜
xoxo
B
🔥 🔥
Ty, k
Exactly the emotion I was hoping for!
Appreciate you reading and love your comments, alway.
💜
xoxo
B
Re: Re. pray tell
Mmm..
Thank you, C
I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
I appreciate you reading, the RL and taking the time to comment, too.
💜🌹💜🌹💜
xo
B
Thank you, C
I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
I appreciate you reading, the RL and taking the time to comment, too.
💜🌹💜🌹💜
xo
B
Re. pray tell
13th Nov 2020 1:45pm
The "pray tells" evokes a shout of, "It's so wonderful I cannot but tell." Another excellent write from your creative mind. Hugs and peace. oral
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13th Nov 2020 2:39pm
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13th Nov 2020 2:40pm
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Re. pray tell
15th Nov 2020 8:54am
Like butterflies in the stomach and the heart beating a little faster...
Great pic to compliment the words Blue.
Excellent verse.
Great pic to compliment the words Blue.
Excellent verse.
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15th Nov 2020 11:41am