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Gravity
I was floating
in that fleeting moment
feeling weightless
at the sound,
until gravity
got the best of me
and my world
came crashing down
in that fleeting moment
feeling weightless
at the sound,
until gravity
got the best of me
and my world
came crashing down
Published 4th Nov 2020
Author's Note
I think I'll leave this one open to interpretation... but maybe some of you can relate. I may eventually make a visual for it... Maybe, heh.
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4th Nov 2020 9:33pm
Succinct and yet it lacks such a powerful punch. Very well done, NewB! I hope you add a graphic; yours are always so well done 💜.
4th Nov 2020 9:35pm
I am sure most can relate to this in one way or another. This is perfect but I do look forward to the visual if you choose to add one. 💖
4th Nov 2020 10:11pm
Oh, the things we dream of that sound so sweet.
When reality brings us back...
All we can do is hope to land on our feet.
Nice write, NB.
When reality brings us back...
All we can do is hope to land on our feet.
Nice write, NB.
4th Nov 2020 10:17pm
4th Nov 2020 10:47pm
5th Nov 2020 1:38am
hey there NewB I can relate
I'm sorry to hear though
keep writing my friend
you will see your way through ❤
I'm sorry to hear though
keep writing my friend
you will see your way through ❤
5th Nov 2020 4:59am
Yep. I can easily relate to this. Matter of fact in 2010.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
5th Nov 2020 11:05am
Gravity is the reality that keeps us bound to earth - for better and for worse....
Can definitely relate!
Can definitely relate!
5th Nov 2020 10:08pm
I love this NB...for me...the gravity is the melancholia that pulls us all down at times.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
6th Nov 2020 1:24am
It sounds like a dream (I often dream that I can fly), with a harsh awakening.
Excellent verse.
Excellent verse.
6th Nov 2020 10:53pm
7th Nov 2020 4:42am
Dear NB,
For me I was reminded of hope and positivity. Life was worth sticking around for. Then the proverbial rug was yanked and now I’m in a free fall. I’m a sure a picture would be awesome as you select magnificent visuals. Truthfully, your words have painted their own masterpiece.
I hope we find that floaty feeling again soon. H🌷
For me I was reminded of hope and positivity. Life was worth sticking around for. Then the proverbial rug was yanked and now I’m in a free fall. I’m a sure a picture would be awesome as you select magnificent visuals. Truthfully, your words have painted their own masterpiece.
I hope we find that floaty feeling again soon. H🌷
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