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Senryu
Stringing Me Along
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Stringing Me Along
I am but a fly
trapped within a web of words
—hanging by a thread
Written by
NewBeginnings
Published
11th Nov 2020
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#anxiety
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LunaGreyhawk
11th Nov 2020 4:04am
Oooh, clever NewB! 💜
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PencilScribbles
(Scribbles)
11th Nov 2020 4:58am
Oh wow, this is good, NB.
Very, very good.
Once you're hanging by a thread, it's hard to recover what is lost...especially if the thin thread is caused by being strung along.
Your #anxiety tag must be the spider...you know what spiders do to flies? 😔
Sorry and I love your work.
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faithmairee
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
11th Nov 2020 5:19am
This poem is best described by these two words: poetic perfection meaning poetry doesn't get any better than this! Love, love, love it!
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Honoria
11th Nov 2020 7:36am
Dear NB,
Even your anxiety is elegant! Truth and beauty rolled into precise brevity. It’s a beautiful and relatable write given its subject. Bravo and well done. H🌷
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Phantom2426
(Francisco J Vera)
11th Nov 2020 9:09am
Interesting poem. Keep on writing.
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Summerrain75
11th Nov 2020 3:50pm
Simply beautiful NewB. ❤
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Feet-Fanatic
- Edited 11th Nov 2020 4:19pm
11th Nov 2020 4:18pm
No other way to ''Spin" it (Web) , simply brilliant brother!!!!
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wallyroo92
11th Nov 2020 8:34pm
Excellent imagery, getting caught in a web makes us feel helpless.
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Lozzamus
11th Nov 2020 11:35pm
Quite powerful images created here.
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KristinaX
12th Nov 2020 9:30pm
I can definitely relate. This is perfect and beautiful as usual.
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Nov 2020 9:45am
13th Nov 2020 10:59am
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