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Tragedy of the Commons
The essence of prosperity is property rights.
Reservations, more often than not
have neither property worth harvesting—
according to developers; or, property rights
to construct or expand their own livelihood
It's a 'Tragedy of the Commons'—
tribal land is communal, which means
owning a clear land title for your residence
especially if a trailor park or mill house
can be filled with legal obstacles
You can't build, or improve your home
if you can't use the land as collateral;
ergo, If everyone owns the land
no one individual can. . .
Without adequate businesses
to employ residents, the commute
to work can be exhaustive; this requires
dependable transportation; however. . .
it's virtually impossible to finance a car
when you don't have a job;
and, the only collateral you've got
is a run-down home you can't fix up
because you don't own land it sits upon
And yet the white man yells,
Get a damn job you Indian slob—
It's yer own fault, you alcoholic
So, Happy Columbus Day, America.
Celebrate the beginning of apartheid-
that small, white minority's claim to live
where thousands once thrived
From genocide to the Trail of Tears
our history should be condemned;
to publicly celebrate its origin
while Indigenous remain enslaved
by legalities of the system. . .
has built a country now flailing
in racial tension—sinking more each year
truth is ignored; and change,
deemed unworthy of achieving
~
Reservations, more often than not
have neither property worth harvesting—
according to developers; or, property rights
to construct or expand their own livelihood
It's a 'Tragedy of the Commons'—
tribal land is communal, which means
owning a clear land title for your residence
especially if a trailor park or mill house
can be filled with legal obstacles
You can't build, or improve your home
if you can't use the land as collateral;
ergo, If everyone owns the land
no one individual can. . .
Without adequate businesses
to employ residents, the commute
to work can be exhaustive; this requires
dependable transportation; however. . .
it's virtually impossible to finance a car
when you don't have a job;
and, the only collateral you've got
is a run-down home you can't fix up
because you don't own land it sits upon
And yet the white man yells,
Get a damn job you Indian slob—
It's yer own fault, you alcoholic
So, Happy Columbus Day, America.
Celebrate the beginning of apartheid-
that small, white minority's claim to live
where thousands once thrived
From genocide to the Trail of Tears
our history should be condemned;
to publicly celebrate its origin
while Indigenous remain enslaved
by legalities of the system. . .
has built a country now flailing
in racial tension—sinking more each year
truth is ignored; and change,
deemed unworthy of achieving
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 13th Oct 2020
Author's Note
Non-entry entry for the Indigenous Peoples' Day comp: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11611/
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Re. Tragedy of the Commons
13th Oct 2020 5:24pm
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20th Oct 2020 1:19am
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
13th Oct 2020 5:37pm
F^^k Chris Columbus.....first in line of whiteboy murderer of "real Americans".
Damn, why do we keep glorifying these Caucasian Manifest Destiny mass murderers, Slave traders and colonizers as bloody "heroes"?
Damn, why do we keep glorifying these Caucasian Manifest Destiny mass murderers, Slave traders and colonizers as bloody "heroes"?
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20th Oct 2020 1:19am
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Anonymous
13th Oct 2020 5:45pm
And here I though my entry was abrasive; this is a diamond encrusted grinding wheel stripping away the rust of neglect to the raw steel underneath. I was never aware of this regarding reservations. Of course not; they never taught such things in school.
❤📝
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Re: Re. Tragedy of the Commons
20th Oct 2020 1:20am
I didn't think your entry was abrasive at all. It's definitely time to revise history to include the truth. Thank you always for your love and support. ❤📝
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
13th Oct 2020 6:57pm
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20th Oct 2020 1:21am
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
13th Oct 2020 7:07pm
Depressing story A. As soon as “ liberty and justice for all” got replaced by ManifestDestiny, all bets were off. Native Americans were moved to land even the wildlife didn’t want! If slavery was the first blight of our history then Wounded Knee etc were the second and income inequality is the latest. Excellent writing.
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20th Oct 2020 1:21am
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
13th Oct 2020 10:56pm
Yes, this! You can't finance a business or really do much of anything to get ahead without collateral in our system. It's amazing how many people don't realize how rigged it is... there are such massive holes in our knowledge, and very little will to correct it. 😕
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20th Oct 2020 1:22am
Thanks, BT! You are right in that so many people do not understand how the system is rigged. They think Native Americans are on an equal playing field. The only way to correct it is the dissemination of knowlege; and even then only those willing will listen.
Thank you. Much appreciated.
Thank you. Much appreciated.
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
14th Oct 2020 6:16am
Somehow this chapter was left out of my history and economics classes back in high school.
Powerful and true statements Ahavati. It really makes me wonder if people back then were just conniving or just saw themselves as superior or both.
Great write. I'd give you trophy.
Powerful and true statements Ahavati. It really makes me wonder if people back then were just conniving or just saw themselves as superior or both.
Great write. I'd give you trophy.
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20th Oct 2020 1:24am
They definitely saw themselves as superior, Wally. The conniving aspect stemmed from their greed; God forbid they can't get their hands on more than they'll ever need.
Thank you, much appreciated.
Thank you, much appreciated.
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
14th Oct 2020 10:15pm
Your powerful poem reminded me of the fight the indigenous people of Australia are up against here with these monstrous mining companies...and just north in New Guinea they want to dig up another piece of nature. Have you read Christopher Ryan's wonderful book, "Civilized to Death", A. Bravo my friend.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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20th Oct 2020 1:24am
What the Maori suffered was just as unimaginable as the Native Americans, Harry. I haven't read that book, but will put it on my list.
Thank you, as always, my friend.
Thank you, as always, my friend.
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
15th Oct 2020 5:52am
Ava, It’s funny I was crying over the destruction of the Amazon rainforest and all that it entails, and somehow this scribe reminded me of the literal pain Ive been feeling all day.
What’s the relationship, the connection?
simple “PEOPLE” .
love this spill lady !
Listed
❤️Jackie
What’s the relationship, the connection?
simple “PEOPLE” .
love this spill lady !
Listed
❤️Jackie
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Re: Re. Tragedy of the Commons
20th Oct 2020 1:26am
Exactly, Jackie; PEOPLE over things should be the motto of life. Thank you, my friend. xo
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
15th Oct 2020 4:55pm
you ..the lighthouse.. have a way with words...Wordless on how to say that A! you say the descriptive as a simple layman yet the pressing concerning presentness tall the talk.. n then as you zoom into the righteously raging revolutionary voice that you have the have so strongly poetic.. of the day's deathly inequalities of an apocalypse... very brave write & a timely one! thanks for this ..Light & Love ev xx
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20th Oct 2020 1:28am
Thank you, Uma, my sweet friend. You have no idea how grateful and happy I am to have you in my life. You are like a cornerstone of friendship.
Much Love.
xo
Much Love.
xo
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
16th Oct 2020 2:16pm
Dear A,
Heavy hearted to think of yet another atrocity man inflicted upon man and the perpetuity of the actions. When does it end?
Why does it start? I feel like this isn’t what was intended when the evolution of man began.
Insightful, thoughtful, historical piece. H🌷
Heavy hearted to think of yet another atrocity man inflicted upon man and the perpetuity of the actions. When does it end?
Why does it start? I feel like this isn’t what was intended when the evolution of man began.
Insightful, thoughtful, historical piece. H🌷
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20th Oct 2020 1:31am
Thank you, Honoria. I appreciate it.
It began with the distortion of the positive energy of Love into lower frequencies of jealousy, greed, anger, and all other negative emotions stemming from fear. Once we educate ourselves we can focus on raising the vibration, which will meet like-minded frequencies and magnify the truth.
It began with the distortion of the positive energy of Love into lower frequencies of jealousy, greed, anger, and all other negative emotions stemming from fear. Once we educate ourselves we can focus on raising the vibration, which will meet like-minded frequencies and magnify the truth.
Re. Tragedy of the Commons
16th Oct 2020 10:21pm
Chilling, especially the end result of increasing and deadly racial tensions.
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20th Oct 2020 1:31am
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2020 2:04am
Powerful truth.. feels like a history lesson, but in a good way. thank you for this eye opening ink.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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20th Oct 2020 1:32am