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Colorblind
Written by
NewBeginnings
Published 16th Sep 2020
Author's Note
My entry to the #brother competition.
Hopefully DUP doesn't butcher the quality of this one too badly :P
Hopefully DUP doesn't butcher the quality of this one too badly :P
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Re. Colorblind
16th Sep 2020 9:38pm
Re: Re. Colorblind
16th Sep 2020 9:47pm
Thanks so much for the kind words, Kristina <3
I wrote this little poem awhile back, but the brother competition prompted me to turn it into a visual poem and post it.
I'm glad that you liked it :)
I wrote this little poem awhile back, but the brother competition prompted me to turn it into a visual poem and post it.
I'm glad that you liked it :)
Re. Colorblind
16th Sep 2020 9:44pm
Re: Re. Colorblind
16th Sep 2020 9:49pm
Thank you, kindly, LilD <3
I really appreciate your readership and support. You're sweet :)
I really appreciate your readership and support. You're sweet :)
Re. Colorblind
16th Sep 2020 11:14pm
Re: Re. Colorblind
16th Sep 2020 11:19pm
Thank you, faith, for the kind words... It means a lot. This one was written awhile back - the competition and visual was actually an afterthought. I kind of forgot that I had even written this one until I saw Ahavati's entry and was reminded of it.
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment... I really appreciate the support ❤️
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment... I really appreciate the support ❤️
Re: Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 6:49am
Re. Colorblind
16th Sep 2020 11:55pm
Let the poet's word become the law of the land. Excellent write NB.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 6:31am
Oh, how I wish it were so... Perhaps someday we can all be colorblind.
Thank you for your kindness and readership, buddhakitty! It's good to see you here ❤️
Thank you for your kindness and readership, buddhakitty! It's good to see you here ❤️
Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 00:19am
Beautifully said m8 I share this feeling as well and feel we all should!
Love this NewB!👏🙌
Love this NewB!👏🙌
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Re: Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 6:40am
Thank you, Hunter ❤️
I wish everyone felt this way, and most do, but there are a few that can't see past their pride to humble themselves. It's a shame.
It's good to see you here, brother! I really appreciate your kind words and the continued readership... It means a lot! ❤️🙏 Love you, man!
I wish everyone felt this way, and most do, but there are a few that can't see past their pride to humble themselves. It's a shame.
It's good to see you here, brother! I really appreciate your kind words and the continued readership... It means a lot! ❤️🙏 Love you, man!
Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 2:26am
Re: Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 7:01am
Hey Francisco... Thanks for your continued readership and support - as well as your good wishes. I appreciate you :)
Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 4:08am
Dear NB,
Absolutely stunning! Outstanding write. I love everything about this. Never mind the message which is stellar and should be the basis of every catechism class, but the accompanying picture is fantastic. Oh, to have a fraction of this creativity. This is a beautiful piece.
All the best in the comp. H🌷
Absolutely stunning! Outstanding write. I love everything about this. Never mind the message which is stellar and should be the basis of every catechism class, but the accompanying picture is fantastic. Oh, to have a fraction of this creativity. This is a beautiful piece.
All the best in the comp. H🌷
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Re: Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 6:58am
Awww, you spoil me with your generous praise, H! I really appreciate your kindness and presence here at DUP. You have such a great spirit! Never undersell yourself... You are just as creative and talented as I - I promise you that! Much love, my friend ❤️
Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 10:22am
👁 Just those few words speak volumes of truth for when you look at it we are nothing more and nothing less but crayons in a box of different shades and colors for it is not the color your skin but the character of your heart and soul and mind respect brother poet 🤗🙏👊👊👊
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Re. Colorblind
17th Sep 2020 1:04pm
I feel very surprised at the people who distinguish between colours although all people are facing the same fate.
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Re. Colorblind
18th Sep 2020 8:57pm
Sla'inte....Mo Chara!!!
Such a striking image...indeed!!! Your choice is the perfect pairing with this piece.....for together, they creatively,effectively, and eloquently express a powerful message of truth and equality!!! Those without sight, view others while using their hearts...instead!!! Seems quite a few people could benefit from this unique perspective!!
This is a poem that impacts and inspires, NB!! Your talent for visuals shines thru---once again!!!
My veRRy best to you in the Comp!!!
Such a striking image...indeed!!! Your choice is the perfect pairing with this piece.....for together, they creatively,effectively, and eloquently express a powerful message of truth and equality!!! Those without sight, view others while using their hearts...instead!!! Seems quite a few people could benefit from this unique perspective!!
This is a poem that impacts and inspires, NB!! Your talent for visuals shines thru---once again!!!
My veRRy best to you in the Comp!!!
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Re. Colorblind
22nd Sep 2020 7:21pm
Definately heartfelt. What matters most is what's on the inside.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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