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Jakob the Dragon
Author's Note
Jakob is a student intern in my office. He helps take care of his father who has MS. Because the condition is hereditary he is being monitored as well. Now he may be dealing with COVID-19 and is waiting for test results. His middle name really is Dragon.
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Re. Jakob the Dragon
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18th Jun 2020 3:35pm
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Re. Jakob the Dragon
18th Jun 2020 9:53pm
Re. Jakob the Dragon
19th Jun 2020 3:07am
This one is exceptional, Wally. I do hope you get this printed out BIG for him, and that he will be okay. He would treasure this for a lifetime.
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Re: Re. Jakob the Dragon
21st Jun 2020 00:06am
Thank you (and thanks for the RL).
I planned to print it out for him but emailed to him first, it was the same day he told me he hadn't been felling well, but he said this made his day.
I planned to print it out for him but emailed to him first, it was the same day he told me he hadn't been felling well, but he said this made his day.
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21st Jun 2020 00:06am
Re. Jakob the Dragon
20th Jun 2020 4:26am
dearest Wally you blow me away such an artist you are
prayers for your student my heart goes out to him and his dad ❤
prayers for your student my heart goes out to him and his dad ❤
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Re: Re. Jakob the Dragon
21st Jun 2020 00:08am
Thank you Crimsin for your kind words (and for adding to your RL too).
Yes, he's smart and nice kid. It's a lot to go through at his age but hopefully things get better.
Yes, he's smart and nice kid. It's a lot to go through at his age but hopefully things get better.
Re. Jakob the Dragon
21st Jun 2020 9:07pm
Holy crap, Wally, this is a poetic masterpiece! The visual aspect of this one is stunning... But the poem is really fantastic as well! You've truly outdone yourself here.
This was so creative and beautiful, Wally! The incredible product of the meeting of two beautiful and empathetic human souls ❤️
Never seen or read anything quite like this... You're awesome, friend!
This was so creative and beautiful, Wally! The incredible product of the meeting of two beautiful and empathetic human souls ❤️
Never seen or read anything quite like this... You're awesome, friend!
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22nd Jun 2020 10:31pm
Thank you for that kind comments NB. I love concrete poetry but it just takes a little more planning and work.
An update on Jakob, he and his gf tested negative, but his gf's mom is positive, so they just have to keep quarantined. He's having other health issues but otherwise will be alright.
An update on Jakob, he and his gf tested negative, but his gf's mom is positive, so they just have to keep quarantined. He's having other health issues but otherwise will be alright.
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26th Jun 2020 6:09am
You're most welcome - and that is fantastic news, Wally! I'm glad he's doing okay :)
Thanks for the update 🙏
Thanks for the update 🙏
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Re. Jakob the Dragon
2nd Sep 2020 4:18am
Wallyroo, I have to say , what an incredible poem and layout...
I have seen one of your word compositions before...
But ***this*** is incredible...
You are truly both talented , and gifted !
I have seen one of your word compositions before...
But ***this*** is incredible...
You are truly both talented , and gifted !
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Re. Jakob the Dragon
10th Sep 2020 9:28pm
Thank you very much for your kind comment Blackwolf. It was a piece that took some time to put together after his initial request.