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I Am
Wally
Loving, caring, shy and smart?
Son of Ana and Frank
A lover of music, poetry and art
I am one who feels thrilled, excited and delighted like a child
Who has been depressed, scared and angry at the world
But also discovered how to channel emotions into poems
I am the one with hopes of getting rid of the hate that exists in the world and finding peace
Dwelling in the central valley of California
Dreaming of one day going home
Loving, caring, shy and smart?
Son of Ana and Frank
A lover of music, poetry and art
I am one who feels thrilled, excited and delighted like a child
Who has been depressed, scared and angry at the world
But also discovered how to channel emotions into poems
I am the one with hopes of getting rid of the hate that exists in the world and finding peace
Dwelling in the central valley of California
Dreaming of one day going home
Published 16th Jun 2020
| Edited 19th Jun 2020
Author's Note
For the I Am comp
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16th Jun 2020 11:30am
Poignant and effective, Wally. It shoots straight to the heart of the matter without too many side dishes. Nice to know a bit more about you.
One thing:
I am [ on ] who feels thrilled
One thing:
I am [ on ] who feels thrilled
19th Jun 2020 7:38pm
Thanks (and thanks for the tip) Ahavati. The format calls for honesty and self reflection. Besides I was up late at night so I really just went with what came out off the top of my head.
16th Jun 2020 12:23pm
And we are delighted to know you, Wally! Not so shy anymore, given some of your poems - they too are your opinions in the vast discussion of things.
19th Jun 2020 7:39pm
Thanks Johnny. Funny thing is I've performed in front of people and have spoken in public before and yet I still feel shy, but if it needs to be done I'll do it.
16th Jun 2020 3:21pm
19th Jun 2020 7:41pm
Thank you Summer, much appreciated. It's great to know folks are out there with the same passion for writing and poetry.
16th Jun 2020 9:29pm
Thanks for sharing a little more of yourself. Good luck in the competition.
Dreaming of one day going home (this has me curious, where is home?)
Dreaming of one day going home (this has me curious, where is home?)
17th Jun 2020 10:20pm
19th Jun 2020 7:45pm
Soo... I was having a bout with insomnia for a couple of nights, I was writing five poems at the same time and working them on them later in the day while at work. Not entirely sure why I ended the poem that way but it's something I'm going to have to look into.
19th Jun 2020 7:48pm
Josh - I was thinking that too as I was working the following day. Not sure what my subconscious told me to write at 3 in the morning when I had to be up in a couple of hours to work. I miss the city where I grew up, I also miss the city where I was born, it's a question I've been asking myself for a couple of days now.
19th Jun 2020 8:03pm
I've been reminded recently 'home is where the heart is' but it left me none the wiser. I think 'home' is most strongly felt when one is caught up in the creative process where time loses its stranglehold (for a time :)) ), like a child playing ...
17th Jun 2020 5:40am
Dear W,
An absolutely endearing write and insight on our Wallyroo! Wonderfully crafted. I think it’s the most difficult thing on the planet trying to define oneself. You’ve done it brilliantly. All the best in the comp! H🌷
An absolutely endearing write and insight on our Wallyroo! Wonderfully crafted. I think it’s the most difficult thing on the planet trying to define oneself. You’ve done it brilliantly. All the best in the comp! H🌷
19th Jun 2020 7:52pm
Thank you Honoria,
It really is difficult to define or describe ourselves with just a few words. I just wanted to be sincere with the first things that came to mind. That and the lack of sleep was pushing to spill my emotions as quickly as I could.
It really is difficult to define or describe ourselves with just a few words. I just wanted to be sincere with the first things that came to mind. That and the lack of sleep was pushing to spill my emotions as quickly as I could.
20th Jun 2020 4:31am
hey there dearest Wally where is home for you dearest poet?
I'm in the central valley too but I grew up here in Cali...
I feel for your homesickness
beautiful write ❤
I'm in the central valley too but I grew up here in Cali...
I feel for your homesickness
beautiful write ❤
21st Jun 2020 6:06am
I grew up in LA and moved to the golden empire about five years ago. I go down to LA every couple of weeks to visit my oldest son (although with this pandemic it's been a couple of months).
Everything has changed so much, I kind of miss the big city living but not the traffic. I was writing late at night so I'm still trying to identify why I said that. I do feel a certain homesickness from time to time.
Everything has changed so much, I kind of miss the big city living but not the traffic. I was writing late at night so I'm still trying to identify why I said that. I do feel a certain homesickness from time to time.
