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surreal
the hurt spoke infinitely into the darkness
it shudders in its sin spinning on eternities
time turns inside the eye of a needle
worlds inside worlds within us
signs of the days...surreal in its devastation
a modern-day plague
on the backs of the universes, the red crow flies
I cried for his sorrow lost in the vastness
will the seas of regret turn back in time?
lies flood the earth spew from the television
wilted are the travelers of fornication
traversing the voided landscape of scars
all collateral damage
inflicted by the disenchanted
dark is the new world order
hope wanders endlessly
searching the faces of the few
who still believe in miracles
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Re. surreal
11th May 2020 3:18pm
Looks like we are on a similar wave-length this morning. Sometimes I weep for the pain of the Earth...
It can be difficult to remain optimistic with all the terrible things that happen in this world, but we sure can try. I loved the ending... A little glimmer of hope grows bigger in my heart ❤️
It's beautiful, and heartbreaking at the same time.
It can be difficult to remain optimistic with all the terrible things that happen in this world, but we sure can try. I loved the ending... A little glimmer of hope grows bigger in my heart ❤️
It's beautiful, and heartbreaking at the same time.
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14th May 2020 3:57pm
thank you dearest NewB for sharing your thoughts yes it's so sad what is happening nowadays yes to stay optimistic is a struggle but necessary... we just have to keep going...I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤
Re. surreal
11th May 2020 3:28pm
Another beautifully stunning piece. Taking something so heavy but it reads so light and delicate. Like a whisper. I just love what you do.
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Re: Re. surreal
14th May 2020 3:58pm
aw thank you lovely Julia for such a beautiful comment...on one of my heavier writes... I deeply appreciate your visits ❤
Re. surreal
11th May 2020 3:41pm
This is hauntingly beautiful Brenda. I can feel the sadness in your spill but in the end there is hope. 🌹❤
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14th May 2020 4:00pm
thank you beautiful Summer for sharing your thoughts on this write I was writing it and towards the end I realized it was too bleak so I had to infuse some hope there is always hope... I cherish your thoughts ❤
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11th May 2020 5:12pm
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14th May 2020 4:01pm
thank you graciously beautiful Sweet One for sharing your thoughts on this write... I truly appreciate you lovely one ❤
Re. surreal
11th May 2020 7:15pm
I have been believing and waiting for my miracles, knowing that’s it’s coming
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14th May 2020 4:02pm
thank you dearest Shakespear for being yes miracles happen every day I appreciate you my friend ❤
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11th May 2020 8:21pm
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14th May 2020 4:03pm
thank you beautiful Dragonfly for such a lovely comment I cherish you lovely one ❤
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