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This Revolution will not be televised
Been there and back
from the cruelty of various cultures
mocking a different stride of life—
color, accent, hairstyle, nationality—
dining on the doubt and insecurity
of a vulnerable crowd
—wore that mantle for years
almost believed what they said. . .
until realization hatched
Fastforward:
Now, I eat bullies for breakfast—
feed gossip mongers to pigeons;
machete paths with their razor tongues
to reveal jungles of doubt and insecurity
they attempted to camouflage
all with one thing—
action over words;
let me say that again—
action over words;
Because this revolution is a lifestyle
not a statement of poem to protest
nor act of retribution to be broadcast—
It’s called happiness—
the most powerful weapon
of Love you possess—
guaranteed to kill an enemy
quicker than anything else
~
from the cruelty of various cultures
mocking a different stride of life—
color, accent, hairstyle, nationality—
dining on the doubt and insecurity
of a vulnerable crowd
—wore that mantle for years
almost believed what they said. . .
until realization hatched
Fastforward:
Now, I eat bullies for breakfast—
feed gossip mongers to pigeons;
machete paths with their razor tongues
to reveal jungles of doubt and insecurity
they attempted to camouflage
all with one thing—
action over words;
let me say that again—
action over words;
Because this revolution is a lifestyle
not a statement of poem to protest
nor act of retribution to be broadcast—
It’s called happiness—
the most powerful weapon
of Love you possess—
guaranteed to kill an enemy
quicker than anything else
~
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Re. This Revolution will not be televised
14th Mar 2020 00:19am
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12th Apr 2020 6:03pm
Re. This Revolution will not be televised
Absolutely incredibly worded, Ahavati, and I agree with everything you've stated here elegantly expressed message! This is a wonderful, and I really liked it. It's our actions that count and wishful thinking will only get us so far. Kill them with kindness, as they say :)
We're definitely headed for some kind of big change though, at least here in America. Between the new pandemic, instability in the stock markets, election meddling, oil wars, climate change, and the increasing distrust in the government, coupled with clashing ideologies in a nation which is incredibly divided, there is a lot to think about. We'll see what happens soon enough. I believe that good will ultimately prevail, as I am optimistic! We're all just looking for happiness :)
P.s. I haven't been involved in poetry as much in the past few weeks, as I've been preoccupied with other things, so I'm happy that I got on to see this one today!
Anyway, best wishes,
-NewB
We're definitely headed for some kind of big change though, at least here in America. Between the new pandemic, instability in the stock markets, election meddling, oil wars, climate change, and the increasing distrust in the government, coupled with clashing ideologies in a nation which is incredibly divided, there is a lot to think about. We'll see what happens soon enough. I believe that good will ultimately prevail, as I am optimistic! We're all just looking for happiness :)
P.s. I haven't been involved in poetry as much in the past few weeks, as I've been preoccupied with other things, so I'm happy that I got on to see this one today!
Anyway, best wishes,
-NewB
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12th Apr 2020 6:03pm
Re. This Revolution will not be televised
14th Mar 2020 3:28am
I love the spunky spirit of your poems combined with wisdom. as if you are a wise old soul who still has childs eyes, coming full circle like an old tree with new spring blossoms. I love that happiness is the greatest weapon, how encouraging that we can sharpen it ourselves if we choose to..
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12th Apr 2020 6:04pm
Re. This Revolution will not be televised
14th Mar 2020 4:08am
Oh bless your heart, you said it......and walk it with grace, humor and wit sharpened to pencil point....more powerful than any sword
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12th Apr 2020 6:05pm
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14th Mar 2020 4:08am
I'm really wearing a happy face now!
Funny how you did that so easy. 😁
You are cool. 👏😎
This poem is absolutely dope. 💖
Seriously this is a life gem.
Funny how you did that so easy. 😁
You are cool. 👏😎
This poem is absolutely dope. 💖
Seriously this is a life gem.
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12th Apr 2020 6:05pm
Re. This Revolution will not be televised
14th Mar 2020 8:53am
It's really nice to see a poem covering the ground of raising expectations (rather than lowering them, the path of the cynic) so well expressed, offering a path of action that TaiChi's the Old culturally-embedded Story of 'might-is-right' (whether that might comes from weapons of technology, or weapons of religious/political ideologies). Blessings, Josh.
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12th Apr 2020 6:06pm
Thank you, Josh. I really appreciate that observation, particularly the TaiChi reference, as I closely relate to that culture.
Re. This Revolution will not be televised
Anonymous
14th Mar 2020 10:26am
Cutting C consonance!
"Been there and back
from the cruelty of various cultures
mocking a different stride of life—
color, accent, hairstyle, nationality—
dining on the doubt and insecurity
of a vulnerable crowd"
Then the G and J !
"Now, I eat bullies for breakfast—
feed gossip mongers to pigeons;
machete paths with their razor tongues
to reveal jungles of doubt and insecurity
they attempted to camouflage"
And finally Z and S before moving on to P !
"Because this revolution is a lifestyle
not a statement of poem to protest
nor act of retribution to be broadcast—
It’s called happiness—
the most powerful weapon
of Love you possess—"
This was extremely well crafted verse speaking truth about the last two decades the Internet has existed - waging war with words online is a battle one will always lose if the objective is merely to capture hills and play King. Actions speak louder.
📝❤
"Been there and back
from the cruelty of various cultures
mocking a different stride of life—
color, accent, hairstyle, nationality—
dining on the doubt and insecurity
of a vulnerable crowd"
Then the G and J !
"Now, I eat bullies for breakfast—
feed gossip mongers to pigeons;
machete paths with their razor tongues
to reveal jungles of doubt and insecurity
they attempted to camouflage"
And finally Z and S before moving on to P !
"Because this revolution is a lifestyle
not a statement of poem to protest
nor act of retribution to be broadcast—
It’s called happiness—
the most powerful weapon
of Love you possess—"
This was extremely well crafted verse speaking truth about the last two decades the Internet has existed - waging war with words online is a battle one will always lose if the objective is merely to capture hills and play King. Actions speak louder.
📝❤
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Re: Re. This Revolution will not be televised
12th Apr 2020 6:07pm
Thank you, as always, for that extra ummph you always put into your observations. You know how much I appreciate your comments and support.
📝❤
📝❤
Re. This Revolution will not be televised
14th Mar 2020 1:37pm
Re. This Revolution will not be televised
Imaginable excellence.
You're Aware of the Gil-Scott Heron song (c.1970) of same title.
Fits the vibe perfectly
You're Aware of the Gil-Scott Heron song (c.1970) of same title.
Fits the vibe perfectly
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12th Apr 2020 6:09pm
Re. This Revolution will not be televised
15th Mar 2020 11:59pm
In Buddhism there are the three marks of existence...everything is impermanent...the self is bigger than we think...and life is full of disatisfaction. For many years I thought the First Noble Truth of suffering was all about me lol...now I know that it is the inevitable pain and suffering that I cause others on a daily basis. Nirvana is seeing into the interconnectedness of all this and working with compassion in anyway one can. Your poem points directly at the human condition and our lack of love...and more importantly, our lack of respect and simple friendship. Powerful ink A.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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Re: Re. This Revolution will not be televised
12th Apr 2020 6:11pm
Thank you for sharing that, Harry. I really appreciate it when you share your knowledge! Hope you are well, my friend!
Re. This Revolution will not be televised
18th Mar 2020 10:31am
You so artfully express the ultimate Writer`s Paradox:
"Words are Turds"
"Words are Turds"
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