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mas·cu·lin·i·ty
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 10th Feb 2020
| Edited 8th Apr 2020
Author's Note
In honor of JohnnyBlaze on his Birthday, and First Place Winner in Admin's Monthly Comp: Masculinity https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11250/#467372
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Anonymous
- Edited 10th Feb 2020 2:09pm
10th Feb 2020 2:08pm
The whole presentation makes me want to melt into a weepy mess.
I can't thank you enough and am extremely honored. xo
But to be clear - it's only with your help that I have been able to accomplish what I have. If those cats could speak, they would be thanking you as well. 🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱❤
I can't thank you enough and am extremely honored. xo
But to be clear - it's only with your help that I have been able to accomplish what I have. If those cats could speak, they would be thanking you as well. 🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱❤
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
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Anonymous
10th Feb 2020 6:21pm
Thank you again, Mystical Rose. :)
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10th Feb 2020 2:36pm
That's so precious! It deserves the recognition it's getting! 💖💖💖
👏👏👏
We've been adopted by cats twice. No, three times... yeah. Anyway. "We'll never get pets" became... "I can't say no..." he loves the cats up a more than anyone else, despite not bringing them home! Cats love to adopt, I've learned. Saying "no" is too hard! Specifically for sweetheart men like your cat lover.
💖Even mine.💖
Guys who like cats are cool. Guys with hearts who cry and hold babies, ever so cool. The combination is peanut butter and chocolate.
👏👏👏
We've been adopted by cats twice. No, three times... yeah. Anyway. "We'll never get pets" became... "I can't say no..." he loves the cats up a more than anyone else, despite not bringing them home! Cats love to adopt, I've learned. Saying "no" is too hard! Specifically for sweetheart men like your cat lover.
💖Even mine.💖
Guys who like cats are cool. Guys with hearts who cry and hold babies, ever so cool. The combination is peanut butter and chocolate.
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10th Feb 2020 2:38pm
Thank you, Jess! He's spent many a night up nursing a sick one. They do adopt you, particularly when they're dropped off in the middle of nowhere and survive the coyotes. 💖
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Anonymous
10th Feb 2020 6:24pm
Thank you, Edible. All cats deserve a loving home. 🐱
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I have to agree! I love furry angels! They are lifesavers and souls soothers, God bless every one.
And thank you. ❤️😎👏
And thank you. ❤️😎👏
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10th Feb 2020 3:34pm
Great poem. I love the pic you used, so sweet and adds the aweeee element to the write ❤
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10th Feb 2020 4:13pm
Thank you, nikki! ❤
I chose that photo because it's actually him many a night. If not with a baby bottle then a hot-water one! Or ice pack bringing a fever down!
I chose that photo because it's actually him many a night. If not with a baby bottle then a hot-water one! Or ice pack bringing a fever down!
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Anonymous
10th Feb 2020 6:25pm
Thank you, nikkiemoe. Ahavati never fails to complement any poem with the perfect image. 📷📝
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Anonymous
11th Feb 2020 11:45am
It really is an honor. Thank you, Poetic Strength.
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Anonymous
11th Feb 2020 11:46am
Wow! Thank you, Josh!
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Anonymous
11th Feb 2020 00:23am
Beautifully done. I love the use of Meter in this poem. Also how you have visualised it. Just makes this such a pretty read. A lovely tribute
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Anonymous
11th Feb 2020 11:47am
Ahavati does wonders with words. Thank you, LittleGift.
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11th Feb 2020 4:30am
Really a cute picture, it's a nice theme for a masculine happy birthday, Ill have to check out the comp, it sounds interesting:)
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11th Feb 2020 11:15am
Thanks, PR! It's her visual comp held monthly. I won last month so I don't expect to place this month; I enter them out of inspirational fun! This is my wheel horse! I do hope you enter! xo
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Anonymous
11th Feb 2020 11:43am
Ahavati's keyboard is never for stereo-typing, that's for sure. Thanks, PR.
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I have two fullsize keyboards, but I don't use them in stereo, either :)
I was looking around on your site and I really like the remembrance page, that's a nice touch..
I was looking around on your site and I really like the remembrance page, that's a nice touch..
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11th Feb 2020 11:26am
Aw dear One... normally I might have sneezed but your treatment of this just totally made me forget about my allergy!
Kathy <3
Kathy <3
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11th Feb 2020 11:28am
Thank you, Kathy! Nice to see you back around these parts. You have been missed. <3
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11th Feb 2020 11:35am
While I blink and blush you remind me of how I've missed me also... but thank you for your words of welcome, dear One <3
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14th Feb 2020 9:34am
Dear A,
Beautiful. The way you’ve formatted the piece with the bold type on words that emphasize character, the adorable picture to support the idea of the work and the last stanza to stop the crowd in their tracks! Show stopper this!!!! Lovely tribute and really lovely write. H🌷
Beautiful. The way you’ve formatted the piece with the bold type on words that emphasize character, the adorable picture to support the idea of the work and the last stanza to stop the crowd in their tracks! Show stopper this!!!! Lovely tribute and really lovely write. H🌷
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14th Feb 2020 11:29am
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I think this is one my favorites. You defined that strength with the image of something fragile. To me this is a winner.
Beautifully done.
Beautifully done.
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8th Apr 2020 2:05am
I am sure I cannot say much that has not already been said considering the amount of time it took to scroll to the bottom of the comments but beautiful sentiment in this one.
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26th May 2020 12:44pm
It is a great virtue to use strength in the right way and not for personal gain. I struggle with this concept a lot. Great one.
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