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Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year💥
( a Palindrome poem )
chasing
spirit
racing brightest ever
stars scattering
escape in tandem
skyward twisted
hurling spinning
sparklers sizzling
hissing guns blazing
smoking red of
popping cacophony
punctuates
cacophony popping
of red smoking
blazing guns hissing
sizzling sparklers
spinning hurling
twisted skyward
tandem in escape
scattering stars
ever brightest racing
spirit
chasing
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 1st Jan 2020
Author's Note
Entered in cabcool’s “Palindrome Poetry”.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
Anonymous
1st Jan 2020 10:07am
Jade, This piece is so vivid, it could be a video looping thru my thoughts! I've seen these celebrations in S.E. Asia...they look like they could have been scripted from your poem! Great work! Thanks for sharing it! (...and NYE!)
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Re: Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
That's it, dear Poet, that’s exactly it, happening around the world, and where I live - it was happening just that way just before midnight hit tonight! So the poem Is literally filled with the spirit.👻
Thank you so much for your words.
Thank you so much for your words.
Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
1st Jan 2020 11:11am
Wow, this is really well done. I salute you for being able to execute something like this.
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Re: Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
1st Jan 2020 9:39pm
Why thank you so much for the support, Altair, you’re most kind to say.🙏🏻
—Jade🐾
—Jade🐾
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1st Jan 2020 11:15am
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1st Jan 2020 9:42pm
Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
1st Jan 2020 1:15pm
Re: Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
2nd Jan 2020 6:30am
Oh that’s so good of you, brother Stoney, with your insightful spiritual connection.🙏🏻
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2nd Jan 2020 10:48am
Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
1st Jan 2020 2:33pm
Re: Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
2nd Jan 2020 6:34am
What a rousing greeting for my runaway poetry - thanks to dear Kitty sister!
sandpaper tiger licks,
Jade🐾💌
sandpaper tiger licks,
Jade🐾💌
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Re: Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
2nd Jan 2020 6:40am
My gracious, dear Belgian brother - your support is always a happy,meaningful moment of thanks.🙏🏻
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
1st Jan 2020 11:29pm
Wonderfully vivid, and notably clever - very nice writing, Jade! I loved this :)
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Thank you, dear brother, for your appreciation & support... and the honor of your recommend.🙏🏻
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1st Jan 2020 11:37pm
Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
2nd Jan 2020 4:53am
Dear JP,
Are you kidding?! This is ridiculously awesome! How on earth? Good luck in the comp but something tells me you won’t need it. Freaking great write! H🌷
Are you kidding?! This is ridiculously awesome! How on earth? Good luck in the comp but something tells me you won’t need it. Freaking great write! H🌷
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Re: Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
2nd Jan 2020 6:23am
Thank you for your wonderfully enthusiastic reaction, lovely sister! It was such fun - the exciting rousing sounds outside as I #1: wrote this unique poetic form, while #2: the new year was being celebrated at that very moment!
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Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
Wow I love it Jadey. I've been over it a few times, admiring it's pace, intensity and perfect mirror image. You have a wonderful non linear bound perspective.
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Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
Oh my, Daniel, thank you for this, I greatly appreciate how my first successful Palindrome ever is being received.
and NOW earlier today, I published my /second/ Palindrome. So I celebrate - mind over matter.😺
I’m still under the weather, and the antibiotic I started today has me kinda knocked out.🤕
regard(less)😌
Jadey🐾
and NOW earlier today, I published my /second/ Palindrome. So I celebrate - mind over matter.😺
I’m still under the weather, and the antibiotic I started today has me kinda knocked out.🤕
regard(less)😌
Jadey🐾
Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
6th Jan 2020 10:32pm
I like how this feels like mirror, a reflection on water and "punctuates" becomes that horizon. You reversed it perfectly.
Good luck on the comp.
Good luck on the comp.
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Re: Re. Keeping Evil Spirits from the New Year
6th Jan 2020 10:41pm
This one was fun to do as all of this was happening with the New Year coming in with lots of noise lol! And thanks, Wally.
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