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[ Short Shorts ] Force Majeure
The Universe never checkmates
those attempting to establish
control of the board
---instead, lets bullies follow through
with their best laid fool proof plans
revealing who the true pawns are
in the cosmic scheme of things
those attempting to establish
control of the board
---instead, lets bullies follow through
with their best laid fool proof plans
revealing who the true pawns are
in the cosmic scheme of things
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Re. Force Majeure
22nd Sep 2019 9:31pm
Being bullied at work, so this kind of resonates at the moment, more because I haven5 let them win and used their own rules against them. So satisfying to see them cringe cause they under estimated my intelligence behind the anger
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so sorry to hear this :( hope your personnel dept can help set things right for you.
yeah, people underestimate all the time - as my high-functioning autistic son says "i'm autistic, not stupid''
yeah, people underestimate all the time - as my high-functioning autistic son says "i'm autistic, not stupid''
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Re: Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 4:50am
All is fair in love and war when they set the standards they themselves can't live up to.
Thank you, AP.
Thank you, AP.
Re: Re. Force Majeure
28th Oct 2019 00:51am
Word, give em enough rope to hang themselves with, leave a 2 word note: Peter Principle
Someone has to be the example for Aesop to observe. So kind the walking cumstains who volunteer therof
Someone has to be the example for Aesop to observe. So kind the walking cumstains who volunteer therof
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Re: Re. Force Majeure
29th Oct 2019 6:57pm
Re. Force Majeure
you control the bite of this piece. it's tight
my one query would be 'with their best placed fool proof plans' - a touch clunky in the mouth by comparison to the rest
possibly 'with best laid foolish plans'? just a thought :)
my one query would be 'with their best placed fool proof plans' - a touch clunky in the mouth by comparison to the rest
possibly 'with best laid foolish plans'? just a thought :)
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Re: Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 4:46am
It is a mouthful for one to bite down on, yes. I will take it under advisement.
Thank you, Butters.
Thank you, Butters.
Re. Force Majeure
22nd Sep 2019 10:15pm
Re: Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 4:44am
Re. Force Majeure
22nd Sep 2019 11:10pm
Your poem got under my skin in terms of 'the universe' always seeming to be on holiday when bullies are doing their cowardly stuff - but I console myself that one day all, from king to pawn, go back in the box.
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It's that whole Free Will thing, I know. But, yes. The day comes when everyone gets wiped from the board and has to own up to what they created in their lifetimes. For some, it's a steaming pile of Force Manure.
Thank you, Josh.
Thank you, Josh.
Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 00:06am
When Nietzsche wrote that "God is Dead", he was pointing straight into the 21st century...power power everywhere...why is it that the universe just doesn't seem to care? Powerful ink Johnny.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 4:35am
The Universe is busy watering flowers, flowers everywhere. Something has to keep the fools oxygenated.
Thank you, Harry.
Thank you, Harry.
Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 00:50am
It's almost like the neverending story, isn't it? Sometimes the only way some learn is by the rope you allow them to hang themselves with. Straight as an arrow - I expect no less from you. xo
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Re: Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 4:33am
There's just no shortage of fools in this Universe that schools; new students always coming in the doors to replace the graduates and drop outs.
Thank you. xo
Thank you. xo
Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 6:14am
Dear JB,
“Truth!” says she, as she punches the air in frustration. This bullying and making fun of everyone has to stop. It’s a blight on the human race. This piece is great in that it has ignited my ire.
H🌷
“Truth!” says she, as she punches the air in frustration. This bullying and making fun of everyone has to stop. It’s a blight on the human race. This piece is great in that it has ignited my ire.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 6:19am
Re. Force Majeure
23rd Sep 2019 12:43pm
“Fire without the F” there’s a competition in here somewhere.
Ire=anger I was trying to be fancy. 😔
Love the poem! H
Ire=anger I was trying to be fancy. 😔
Love the poem! H
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Re. Force Majeure
24th Sep 2019 5:46pm
All I can say is, the universe, works for those who are on one page. And well, the "bad" guys are much more united in the game than the "good" ones.
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Re: Re. Force Majeure
24th Sep 2019 6:01pm
That's because they believe in force through numbers.
And need for minions.
Thanks for reading, Void.
And need for minions.
Thanks for reading, Void.
Re. Force Majeure
30th Sep 2019 10:12pm
I've always been a pawn in the game... but sometimes a pawn can be promoted to Queen - the most powerful piece on the board. I'm still waiting! A good write!
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Thank you, Birch. Being yourself and living your life the way you want is the best way to stay off the board.