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Afternoon intermission.
I didn’t care about the crappy pasta
or the man with the overly hairy arms serving it to me
I had an hour to kill before happy hour
so I ate something
and sat there
patiently waiting
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
26th Aug 2019 10:07pm
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Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
26th Aug 2019 10:19pm
Modest is what I’m about.
Thank you dear Ethan. (:
Now let’s day drink!
Cheers!
Yours,
LostGirl
Thank you dear Ethan. (:
Now let’s day drink!
Cheers!
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Afternoon intermission.
26th Aug 2019 10:46pm
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
26th Aug 2019 10:53pm
Thanks lovely lady!
You’re the coolest. 😎
I did my best to ensnare this moment in time. This is my snapshot takeaway.
Yours,
LostGirl
You’re the coolest. 😎
I did my best to ensnare this moment in time. This is my snapshot takeaway.
Yours,
LostGirl
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
26th Aug 2019 10:57pm
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Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
26th Aug 2019 11:01pm
To your cheeky little grin, drinking buddy.
Mission accomplished. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Mission accomplished. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Afternoon intermission.
26th Aug 2019 11:05pm
This great piece of ink has that wonderful "Bukowski" feel to it.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
26th Aug 2019 11:12pm
What a marvel of a wordsmith you are dear Harry.
Thanks for your thoughtful feedback. (:
I look forward to reading more of you.
P.S. (Your profile picture is sexy).
P.P.S. (That isn’t just the alcohol talking).
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks for your thoughtful feedback. (:
I look forward to reading more of you.
P.S. (Your profile picture is sexy).
P.P.S. (That isn’t just the alcohol talking).
Yours,
LostGirl
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
26th Aug 2019 11:18pm
Re. Afternoon intermission.
26th Aug 2019 11:29pm
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 3:10am
Sounds like the three components of my dating profile. (;
Thanks for kicking your hooves up, deer. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks for kicking your hooves up, deer. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 3:12am
Glad I could be responsible for at the very least - a sincere chuckle. 😉
Yours,
LostGirl
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Afternoon intermission.
Anonymous
27th Aug 2019 1:18am
Beefeater Gin , ginger ale and a twist of lime....starts and finishes this just fine! Yeah, like that!!!
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Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 3:13am
Nothing sweeter than a happy hour gin cocktail.
Yeah, just LIKE that. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Yeah, just LIKE that. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 2:24am
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 3:14am
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 3:22am
I don’t know about that. I was just fortunate to have English educators that I loved, and parents who loved to read. I for one find it easier to discuss other people’s work as opposed to my own. Not that I am on par with him but I tend to approach things like Lennon: more into putting it together and letting it go. Not really the meticulous guy like McCartney.
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Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 4:00am
The question is, "patiently waiting for what?" That could go in a lot of different directions. Leaves the reader to imagine. Excellent write LG.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 4:03am
Interpret my "meow" any which way you want, kitty.
Thanks for the RL. I am humbled to your paws. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks for the RL. I am humbled to your paws. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 11:52am
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
27th Aug 2019 6:32pm
I’m most happy you roped your lasso around this one, cowboy.
Humbled for the RL add, I might add. (:
GIDDYUP!
Yours,
LostGirl
Humbled for the RL add, I might add. (:
GIDDYUP!
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Afternoon intermission.
28th Aug 2019 3:44am
Love the simplicity of this and although I do not drink it paints an nice picture. The tune Happy Hour by The Housemartins is now spinning in my head and I just love Ska music : )
Time to dance
Time to dance
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Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
28th Aug 2019 6:33pm
You can live vicariously through my love of Happy Hour, beautiful lady.
Thanks for reading. (:
Your comment is very polite, eh.
Your favourite Canuck,
LostGirl
Thanks for reading. (:
Your comment is very polite, eh.
Your favourite Canuck,
LostGirl
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
28th Aug 2019 10:56pm
I see Happy Hour is started and although my icon is a beautiful woman wrapped in a musical stave but long haired rocker boy here. Where I post my music I use a picture of me just really liked the picture I chose for this site.
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Re. Afternoon intermission.
28th Aug 2019 7:25pm
beautifully understated with great observations and description, really like this - brought back many happy our memories some good, some bad. Life is a conundrum.
excellent write :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))
excellent write :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
28th Aug 2019 7:48pm
Thank you David.
“Life is a conundrum.”
You bet your ass it is.
Thankfully, we have Happy Hour to tide us over. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
“Life is a conundrum.”
You bet your ass it is.
Thankfully, we have Happy Hour to tide us over. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Afternoon intermission.
Some happy hours last 2 hours. I know this little place in Bournemouth... lol. ;-)
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Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
29th Aug 2019 00:22am
Don’t tease a girl, you little Snag, you. (;
Thanks for reading.
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks for reading.
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Afternoon intermission.
29th Aug 2019 00:30am
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
29th Aug 2019 00:31am
Re. Afternoon intermission.
Hey it's ok. I don't mind the open-ended conclusion here. Patiently waiting for your boyfriend & or patiently waiting for cheaper drinks & your boo boo. Either way, it could be a win-win situation all round or a complete f*cking disaster! lol. ;-)
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Re. Afternoon intermission.
19th Sep 2019 10:42pm
for me, this reads as the intermission between lunchtime drinking and happyhour drinking, the attention to detail a mere distraction from the length of wait. a serial drinker of a poem. an honest, controlled write.
of course, it could be something quite other, but that's what i read it as.
of course, it could be something quite other, but that's what i read it as.
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Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
19th Sep 2019 10:59pm
You are quickly becoming a force here in the Deep, Mrs. Butters.
Thank you for your in depth insights.
I'm grateful, you took a big swig of my ink.
(;
Yours,
Losty
Thank you for your in depth insights.
I'm grateful, you took a big swig of my ink.
(;
Yours,
Losty
Re: Re. Afternoon intermission.
19th Sep 2019 11:23pm