Retribution

Your poetry is fantastic.

Thank you very much Keith.  Lovely compliment and much appreciated:)

I know the world can seem a cruel place, Mel, especially regarding addiction.  You've penned it perfectly, capturing the essence of loss and shame.  I only wish addicts didn't have to feel this way, but I also understand it's part of the process to recovery.

You have been missed, and it's wonderful to see you back. xo

I thank you as always Ahavati. Addiction truly takes its toll. However, it is possible to live happily in recovery...I have seen it, just need to get it!
Much love dear friend:)

You will.
I won't bore you with my story - but I'm free.

I doubt your story is boring. Well done you for you continuous recovery😘
Bless

Such a lovely piece, and can be so helpful to others that may be afflicted.
I pray for your strength and recovery.

This line especially touched me.
"Alone, isolated
penance assigned
chained evermore
fate resigned"



Matthew 26:41
41 “Watch and pray so that you will not fall into temptation. The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak.”


Psalm 116:16 - Truly I am your servant, Lord; I serve you just as my mother did; you have freed me from my chains

TIG
Many thanks for your kind remarks and encouraging words.  I deeply appreciate your prayers as well.
Bless

Glad to see you are still writing, Mel.

You could remove

"to be" from Line 2  
"in" from Line 6

"Bound to guilt"  
says so much that next you could simply say  
"the deeds are done"

All these suggestions might bring these lines up to speed with the rest of the poem that overall reads very swiftly.

Thank you JB.  I always appreciate your feedback and agree with your suggestions. This is my first write in a while but cathartic nonetheless.
Bless:)

I am glad to see you back here, Mel; and your words carry deep impact. I hope also your writing continues as part of the process of 'through & out'.

Oh my dear Josh, thank you kindly. It is a process.  I am in the through and looking forward to the out!
Much love:)

Very true HF. I appreciate the read and taking the time to respond. Your words are wise😊

I felt this.  Deep.

I appreciate that you relate but sorry you identify. Be well my friend.