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With Gentle Prod, A Musing Touch Applied
With gentle prod, a musing touch applied,
Between a knowing nod and love’s reproach.
Of how one’s days expressed with none disguised,
Such tact, it is our method of approach.
In what it means when reasonings debate,
With gentle prod, a musing touch applied.
A subtle wit infused, and then to wait
For each our sentiment of love’s apprised.
He knows what’s best, I hear it in his eyes,
To hold my breath will only make me shake.
With gentle prod, a musing touch applied,
A page from life, and not just for my sake.
His ethics have grown stronger everyday,
From life’s abuse, and not because he’s tried.
He’s made me laugh whenever I’m in pain,
With gentle prod, a musing touch applied.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 24th May 2019
| Edited 2nd Jul 2019
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24th May 2019 3:21am
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24th May 2019 4:54am
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24th May 2019 9:47am
Thank you, dear sister.
I’ve been trying to reply to your moving words, but I keep tearing up...
I can hardly see to tap on my iPhone..,
🐾💌
I’ve been trying to reply to your moving words, but I keep tearing up...
I can hardly see to tap on my iPhone..,
🐾💌
Re. With Gentle Prod, A Musing Touch Applies
24th May 2019 5:21am
its dialoguing hearts & souls as one...beautifully touching in love ....healing & growing as sun.. in your art & words Jade... struck stuck in sweettender stilllness all across esp. 'A page from life, and not just for my sake.' 'From life’s abuse, and not because he’s wise.' ..titling refrain is a hymning lyrical in love..thanks for this x
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24th May 2019 10:00am
It’s I who humbly thanks you. sister Uma, for the gift: of your way of expressing each connection. x
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24th May 2019 5:31am
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My gracious thanks, dear Rachelle, for such a fulfilling embrace, and an honor of place on your List.
Jade❣️
Jade❣️
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