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The Quest (The Edge Of A Dream)
He hung on the edge of a dream,
wanting to go further,
to ponder, plunder it's depths.
It resisted him, but not for lack of desire;
it needed him to keep longing.
He scaled a cliff to get here,
he left all convention behind.
The dream wanted his attention,
it pined to reveal itself,
but it hungered for nothing else
other than that.
His pursuit was all that mattered in the end.
His reasons were mere rocks
tumbling under his feet.
.....
#DeniseLevertov
wanting to go further,
to ponder, plunder it's depths.
It resisted him, but not for lack of desire;
it needed him to keep longing.
He scaled a cliff to get here,
he left all convention behind.
The dream wanted his attention,
it pined to reveal itself,
but it hungered for nothing else
other than that.
His pursuit was all that mattered in the end.
His reasons were mere rocks
tumbling under his feet.
.....
#DeniseLevertov
Written by
PoetsRevenge
Published 13th Mar 2019
| Edited 28th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Inspired by ' The Quest ' by Denise Levertov
Written for the 'A Door In The Hive' comp
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets/denise_levertov/poems/18662
Written for the 'A Door In The Hive' comp
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets/denise_levertov/poems/18662
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Re. The Quest (The Edge Of A Dream)
13th Mar 2019 6:16am
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14th Mar 2019 4:00am
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13th Mar 2019 10:25am
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14th Mar 2019 3:58am
Thanks so much, very perceptive.. I am working on a spider web poem based on her poem, 'Web' actually so great comment and great intuition :)
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2019 11:20am
This was a very lovely and lucid dream of a poem, PR. Thanks for once again participating in our Classic comps!
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14th Mar 2019 4:05am
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13th Mar 2019 11:56am
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14th Mar 2019 4:09am
I sort of related this to my mountain hiking days and tried to remember the bravery I had..
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for listing it, I'm working on a second one too..
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for listing it, I'm working on a second one too..
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13th Mar 2019 12:46pm
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Re. The Quest (The Edge Of A Dream)
17th Mar 2019 10:31pm
Thanks for that great quote, I like it..
The poem, ' The Quest' described a crater lake that sat high above 'rocks of reason' and I thought of mountain hiking and the goal of reaching the summit despite the challenge..
Rocks are such a symbol of strength..
The poem, ' The Quest' described a crater lake that sat high above 'rocks of reason' and I thought of mountain hiking and the goal of reaching the summit despite the challenge..
Rocks are such a symbol of strength..