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Beneath Luna and the Stars
Collide with me as if a cluster of the most luminescent of stars
Like the moon eclipses the sun; conceal my body beneath yours as I also hide of your being within
Bathe with me in the the solace and tranquility beneath that nighttime sky; to make of it __ ours
Oh, dear Luna; the light in which our inquisitive journey is lit
Our aura to be seen as we lay on God's green earth below;
twinkling and omniscient to her sky above Conspire with me to create galaxies out of sweet loves ecstasy and primal, the same So much so, as we align; pleasures sound forth to Heaven above....
That place from which the sun, moon and stars themselves hang
Published 29th Jan 2019
| Edited 2nd Apr 2019
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29th Jan 2019 8:51pm
29th Jan 2019 9:12pm
29th Jan 2019 8:56pm
29th Jan 2019 9:15pm
Haha. I thought about you when I wrote it out, girlie. In the sense of your love for sweet Luna yourself. That night sky is an amazing sight. Thank you so much for the gracious add to your reading list too!
29th Jan 2019 9:34pm
beautiful Pandora this is some gorgeous writing
I am utterly captivated by its beauty...
love Brenda 💕
I am utterly captivated by its beauty...
love Brenda 💕
29th Jan 2019 9:51pm
I'm absolutely humbled by your words, they're quite the compliment!! Thank you, Brenda
Anonymous
29th Jan 2019 10:27pm
Pandora,
Just an incredible write, my friend. So beautiful. I'm at a loss for words, my friend(and I never shut up, as you know).
You keep growing poetically. Beautifully worded. Really impressive.
Matthew.
Just an incredible write, my friend. So beautiful. I'm at a loss for words, my friend(and I never shut up, as you know).
You keep growing poetically. Beautifully worded. Really impressive.
Matthew.
29th Jan 2019 11:13pm
I'm so gracious of your add and beautiful comment. You speechless is a good thing too I guess . Haha. I do hope your headache has ceased, Matthew. Mwah!!
Anonymous
30th Jan 2019 3:11am
Hey, did you say my speechlessness is a good thing??! Lol. Probably.
Headache's subsiding slowly.
Thanks!
Headache's subsiding slowly.
Thanks!
30th Jan 2019 3:23am
I'm glad it is.
I was just teasing you about the speechless thing though.😀
I was just teasing you about the speechless thing though.😀
Anonymous
30th Jan 2019 3:38am
I know, my friend, and I like the kidding, and I never take anything as bad from good hearts.
Thanks!
Matthew.
Thanks!
Matthew.
30th Jan 2019 1:05am
Bravisima, Pandora! What a sensual feast. I find this passage deeply romantic, "Like the moon eclipses the sun;
conceal my body beneath yours as I also conceal of your being within."
conceal my body beneath yours as I also conceal of your being within."
30th Jan 2019 2:36am
30th Jan 2019 4:04am
Such nice celestial flavours in this.
The second stanza was brilliant. What you did with the word "conceal"... A++
The second stanza was brilliant. What you did with the word "conceal"... A++
30th Jan 2019 5:29am
Thank you. I and GhaddessWorship both love that one too. Glad you gave me a good grade!
30th Jan 2019 11:13am
30th Jan 2019 5:09pm
30th Jan 2019 6:09am
Sensuous. Favourite lines (for their description of the lovemaking 'under the stars;):
Like the moon eclipses the sun;
conceal my body beneath yours as I also conceal of your being within
Like the moon eclipses the sun;
conceal my body beneath yours as I also conceal of your being within
30th Jan 2019 5:12pm
Solomon, that one seems to be the majority of the favored verses. I'm glad you liked it and found it sensual. Thank you dearly!
